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[Reveiw from Ch 36.] This Novel Should be called. " The Interfering Attention Seeker." Why? Let me explain. We have someone who finds himself in a new world, And then figures out he is in an anime. What does he do well the first moments of his life in this world. He on the spot decides to become the Villan? Why? There is no reason he just decides to be the villan of the Bleach story for no reason at all. This is what makes a beta Villan in my books. And this Mc is a Japanese Beta in my mind, He has not motivation and what makes an effective villan is their motivation. The Mc dosen't have that. And he has a system which makes him less intelligent and non inspiring from these aspects. I can tell the Authour has no goal and is on acid while using his Mc for the power trip. There is no plot in this story aswell. Every single goddamn interaction and action the Mc makes is following canon, but he interferes with every important scene involving Ichigo, so he gets the protaginist spot light. The Menos invasion in the human world, Rukia being taken by her brother and Renji, The soul society rukia arc. Every single important event, This Beta ass interferes just for the spot light and to what prove that he is a villan. Listen. And I mean listen, I've read my shares of novels on this site and I can tell you 80 percent of the Authours don't have the balls to create official terrifying villans, The only impulsive emotion you can bring out from readers on this site to make them hate your novel" Is for your Mc to get cucked" Why? Because the people on this site are possesive and want to feel in power and this is exactly what you need to understand about human beings when writing villans they have triggers. And for you to create this Attention Seeking Villan is blashphemy and Humouring to me, because I could already categorize your work below Chinese fanfictions and that's making a point. You have a Main character with no motivation thrown into a new world where he mysteriously can over power people, because of a system and I already know where you got this inspiration from. Xenoverse the game. Everything works out for him, How? Don't know, Is he some sort of stalker who already knows the events and is just waiting for whenever Ichigos screen time just to pop in. Yep, That's what he is an Ichigo stalker who dosen't know what villanous actions to take besides looking for the next Ichigo route to follow. Honestly, You are lazy and just following canon, but placing in your very ******* villany twists where he just steals the moments of every fucking thing. You didn't give him his own ambition to work to. What he will grow stronger then what? Play your petty manipulations in the story to make him seem more well cemented as a wannabe villan. He has not done a single action which leads him to being someone hateful and the fact you also downgrade Aizen character making him seem manipulative when he is just someone pulled out from a cliche Pg rated Marvel comic makes me wonder. What is wrong with this site. Fanfiction.net is good, because the authours are not afraid, despite having bad grammar and bad plotting. They atleast have the balls to do very terrible things, but your main character, no. You. You have no balls and no spice. The only reason you make your character follow Ichigo has nothing to do with plot, but because you are narrow minded with no imagination, because the very moment Ichigo dies you don't know what else to right, because he is the main character. This bull**** with. " Oh no I am going wait till you grow then when you are like the future self I know, then it will be the ultimate battle for Xp and Sp." ??? [ oh, please.] Go watch some hentai or some ****, Like seriously I request you do and fill your mind with filfthy thoughts to blackened your mental state. Why? Because the villans in those videos are real, I'm sorry do you read the garbage you write, because I do and judging by the later chapters and their shorten words. You are a lazy parasite What your Main character does in 35 chapters. A villan in some hentai video gets his **** down in 4 seconds of rape. When your character has not done a single thing. For future readers who are actually looking for a piece of fresh air. You will not find it here. this story is lighthearted and has nothing to do with villans. It's hopless and I've given up. This a tale of an Attention Seeker with the Dragon Ball system in a bleach world doing child play villany.. I'm sorry thats the entire summary of this story. Anyone saying, Sir this is to harsh, The Authour won't grow from this review. Shut up. Lietrally, Do you think I care wether he improves or not? People write **** and don't put much thought into their writing. [ But it's only a fanfiction, I am not even trying.] Fanfiction or Original, The fact you never put any effort into your work shows your slotful nature. I don't care wether you improve or not, You wrote something and I critic it to my likings. I hate your novel, because you didn't deliver and here is the consequence of your actions. If I were to rewrite this story. I would kill your main character and inlist a hentai villan into this story, because he will have ambition, sure it's unethical and morally unacceptable to Webnovels standards, but anything than your lowzy lazy Main character who gets **** no from his intelligence or hard work, but from a system that provides him everything. Cut the system from his life and he is nothing more than an average human. With no powers. Do you understand? Without the system your Mc has no qualities to himself, He will be nothing more than a person day dreaming of being a villan. And do you realise that humans who actually day dream of killing people in my opinion is more sinister than your toad mc. Have a think about it, People are violent and they don't need some wannabe anime or event to be the dark ****ts I know they can be. [ Delete this review. And I will just post it up again. After all I have taken the time out of my life to review this story. So, delete it and I will be just like your dumb protaginist an interfering attention seeker.]
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Damn,bro keep up with the good **** not the harem bull**** just pure fucking evil . YOU GOT MY VOTE ANYTIME, ANYWHERE AS LONG U KEEP UP WITH THIS I'll ALWAYS GIVE YOU ALL OF ME STONES.
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so the premise is that he is a universal villain !, but to be a true villain he must have the dark harem genre !, this means that the "MC" robbed the protagonist's girl, main characters, secondary characters, and all the beautiful women who are on their way !, you could take them away by washing their brain, and make him their god and serve him sexually !, a true villain who would win the hatred of men and women !, men for steal from his women and the beauties, and the ugly women by how he treats the women !, that more his evil acts !, would be a true villain in every way! PDT; As he is a villain, by washing the brain of women and having them dedicate themselves to him, he would have a huge harem and save you the development of romance.
I dont like it.this For child! ........................................... Saya hanya mengatakan. Ini novel seorang anak kecil ingin bertindak keren.
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I must say, it is rare to give 5 stars but this FanFiction wants me to do so. I usually skip most system FanFiction but this one is very good. It has both interesting as well as funny moments. Combining different powers from different anime’s makes me want to read more and more. Definitely worth reading.
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keep with the good stufff and also good idea of not choosing a protaganist which is a chick magnet , who cares for the timelines and so forth. #GOOD NOVEL ,HHAHAHAH
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This story is one of the better ones. It flows rather well and has everything building up linearly...................................................................
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I LOVE IT, I LOVE MC, but the part about being so cold when killing and don't giving a **** about others is bad but good at the same time...hmmm... maybe a companion could balance it... not that typical companion just a side character like a underling or minion maybe a little closer
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This story is one of the better ones. It flows rather well and has everything building up linearly. My problems would have to be how the MC doesn't ever use this worlds powers. Instead he uses stupid DBZ OPness to win battles all the time. It takes all the ******* out of the story when the MC can out maneuver even Aizen and defeat captains in less than a month. He doesn't even train his powers and only grinds for xp. Honestly my expectations are rather satisfied for this kind of fic. It's a wish-fulfillment and a good one at that. I only hoped the author took more time to make his writing more detailed and believable.
☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
So far it's good and I am also interested in seeing how he will be in the future.Man I hope he becomes like Aizen.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
What a great fanfic, I really REALLY LIKE IT. I will never forgive you if you drop this since this fanfic is godsent aka perfect. Anyway 5 stars, obviously, no thinking regarding that. Peace out
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Evil Mc , isn’t afraid to kill or change the plot , not a wuss and doesn’t waste system points on dumb pointless abilities 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😈
Mc is just a brat that likes to get attention so much. The fvk with this title universal villain?? He's just like the villain in Pokemon team rocket. Fvking lame .
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[Reveiw from Ch 36.] This Novel Should be called. " The Interfering Attention Seeker." Why? Let me explain. We have someone who finds himself in a new world, And then figures out he is in an anime. What does he do well the first moments of his life in this world. He on the spot decides to become the Villan? Why? There is no reason he just decides to be the villan of the Bleach story for no reason at all. This is what makes a beta Villan in my books. And this Mc is a Japanese Beta in my mind, He has not motivation and what makes an effective villan is their motivation. The Mc dosen't have that. And he has a system which makes him less intelligent and non inspiring from these aspects. I can tell the Authour has no goal and is on acid while using his Mc for the power trip. There is no plot in this story aswell. Every single goddamn interaction and action the Mc makes is following canon, but he interferes with every important scene involving Ichigo, so he gets the protaginist spot light. The Menos invasion in the human world, Rukia being taken by her brother and Renji, The soul society rukia arc. Every single important event, This Beta ass interferes just for the spot light and to what prove that he is a villan. Listen. And I mean listen, I've read my shares of novels on this site and I can tell you 80 percent of the Authours don't have the balls to create official terrifying villans, The only impulsive emotion you can bring out from readers on this site to make them hate your novel" Is for your Mc to get cucked" Why? Because the people on this site are possesive and want to feel in power and this is exactly what you need to understand about human beings when writing villans they have triggers. And for you to create this Attention Seeking Villan is blashphemy and Humouring to me, because I could already categorize your work below Chinese fanfictions and that's making a point. You have a Main character with no motivation thrown into a new world where he mysteriously can over power people, because of a system and I already know where you got this inspiration from. Xenoverse the game. Everything works out for him, How? Don't know, Is he some sort of stalker who already knows the events and is just waiting for whenever Ichigos screen time just to pop in. Yep, That's what he is an Ichigo stalker who dosen't know what villanous actions to take besides looking for the next Ichigo route to follow. Honestly, You are lazy and just following canon, but placing in your very ******* villany twists where he just steals the moments of every fucking thing. You didn't give him his own ambition to work to. What he will grow stronger then what? Play your petty manipulations in the story to make him seem more well cemented as a wannabe villan. He has not done a single action which leads him to being someone hateful and the fact you also downgrade Aizen character making him seem manipulative when he is just someone pulled out from a cliche Pg rated Marvel comic makes me wonder. What is wrong with this site. Fanfiction.net is good, because the authours are not afraid, despite having bad grammar and bad plotting. They atleast have the balls to do very terrible things, but your main character, no. You. You have no balls and no spice. The only reason you make your character follow Ichigo has nothing to do with plot, but because you are narrow minded with no imagination, because the very moment Ichigo dies you don't know what else to right, because he is the main character. This bull**** with. " Oh no I am going wait till you grow then when you are like the future self I know, then it will be the ultimate battle for Xp and Sp." ??? [ oh, please.] Go watch some hentai or some ****, Like seriously I request you do and fill your mind with filfthy thoughts to blackened your mental state. Why? Because the villans in those videos are real, I'm sorry do you read the garbage you write, because I do and judging by the later chapters and their shorten words. You are a lazy parasite What your Main character does in 35 chapters. A villan in some hentai video gets his **** down in 4 seconds of rape. When your character has not done a single thing. For future readers who are actually looking for a piece of fresh air. You will not find it here. this story is lighthearted and has nothing to do with villans. It's hopless and I've given up. This a tale of an Attention Seeker with the Dragon Ball system in a bleach world doing child play villany.. I'm sorry thats the entire summary of this story. Anyone saying, Sir this is to harsh, The Authour won't grow from this review. Shut up. Lietrally, Do you think I care wether he improves or not? People write **** and don't put much thought into their writing. [ But it's only a fanfiction, I am not even trying.] Fanfiction or Original, The fact you never put any effort into your work shows your slotful nature. I don't care wether you improve or not, You wrote something and I critic it to my likings. I hate your novel, because you didn't deliver and here is the consequence of your actions. If I were to rewrite this story. I would kill your main character and inlist a hentai villan into this story, because he will have ambition, sure it's unethical and morally unacceptable to Webnovels standards, but anything than your lowzy lazy Main character who gets **** no from his intelligence or hard work, but from a system that provides him everything. Cut the system from his life and he is nothing more than an average human. With no powers. Do you understand? Without the system your Mc has no qualities to himself, He will be nothing more than a person day dreaming of being a villan. And do you realise that humans who actually day dream of killing people in my opinion is more sinister than your toad mc. Have a think about it, People are violent and they don't need some wannabe anime or event to be the dark ****ts I know they can be. [ Delete this review. And I will just post it up again. After all I have taken the time out of my life to review this story. So, delete it and I will be just like your dumb protaginist an interfering attention seeker.]
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Damn,bro keep up with the good **** not the harem bull**** just pure fucking evil . YOU GOT MY VOTE ANYTIME, ANYWHERE AS LONG U KEEP UP WITH THIS I'll ALWAYS GIVE YOU ALL OF ME STONES.
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so the premise is that he is a universal villain !, but to be a true villain he must have the dark harem genre !, this means that the "MC" robbed the protagonist's girl, main characters, secondary characters, and all the beautiful women who are on their way !, you could take them away by washing their brain, and make him their god and serve him sexually !, a true villain who would win the hatred of men and women !, men for steal from his women and the beauties, and the ugly women by how he treats the women !, that more his evil acts !, would be a true villain in every way! PDT; As he is a villain, by washing the brain of women and having them dedicate themselves to him, he would have a huge harem and save you the development of romance.
I dont like it.this For child! ........................................... Saya hanya mengatakan. Ini novel seorang anak kecil ingin bertindak keren.
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I must say, it is rare to give 5 stars but this FanFiction wants me to do so. I usually skip most system FanFiction but this one is very good. It has both interesting as well as funny moments. Combining different powers from different anime’s makes me want to read more and more. Definitely worth reading.
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keep with the good stufff and also good idea of not choosing a protaganist which is a chick magnet , who cares for the timelines and so forth. #GOOD NOVEL ,HHAHAHAH
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This story is one of the better ones. It flows rather well and has everything building up linearly...................................................................
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I LOVE IT, I LOVE MC, but the part about being so cold when killing and don't giving a **** about others is bad but good at the same time...hmmm... maybe a companion could balance it... not that typical companion just a side character like a underling or minion maybe a little closer
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This story is one of the better ones. It flows rather well and has everything building up linearly. My problems would have to be how the MC doesn't ever use this worlds powers. Instead he uses stupid DBZ OPness to win battles all the time. It takes all the ******* out of the story when the MC can out maneuver even Aizen and defeat captains in less than a month. He doesn't even train his powers and only grinds for xp. Honestly my expectations are rather satisfied for this kind of fic. It's a wish-fulfillment and a good one at that. I only hoped the author took more time to make his writing more detailed and believable.
☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
So far it's good and I am also interested in seeing how he will be in the future.Man I hope he becomes like Aizen.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
What a great fanfic, I really REALLY LIKE IT. I will never forgive you if you drop this since this fanfic is godsent aka perfect. Anyway 5 stars, obviously, no thinking regarding that. Peace out
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Evil Mc , isn’t afraid to kill or change the plot , not a wuss and doesn’t waste system points on dumb pointless abilities 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😈
Mc is just a brat that likes to get attention so much. The fvk with this title universal villain?? He's just like the villain in Pokemon team rocket. Fvking lame .
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