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like the story and the idea of a big pack one of the few twilight stories I like so far and the first to give a review, hope to see more. Keep it up!
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I am giving it all 5 stars because I love twilight stories and we don't see enough of them I really like what you're doing with the twilight story although I could have been a little bit better still it was good it was both appealing and professional I also love reincarnation stories so this one just made it better thank for the book.
This is a great Fan Fiction, I wish more chapters were out, and🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺📚📚🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣☺️🤣I wish there was more and I wish Jacob would take out the vampire council
I hate you soooooo much right now. The FANFIC was going great. The story was actually good. It was legible and weren't any problems understanding what was written. Why did you drop something so good? Your a huge asshole for that you know. Got my hopes up for nothing.
Its good, awesome novel, cant wait for more. But i am too lazy to make it 140 character review so here it is COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment
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Really really loved it i hope keep this up 👍💛💙💚💜 🇦🇺🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇺🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇧🇹🇧🇹🇧
I love it!!!!?💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗 Put more alpha moments and who will Does is love interest ?🙏🏻💖
love it great story, great updating speed, great everything :D .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Really looking forward to reading more of your fanfiction **. Who is the love interest or is it going to be a OC _________________________________________________
A great story much better than that other twilight story. Looking forward to reading what happens and how he fairs against the vampire. Will he build his empire or will it be more like an organisation with different branches in cities? Would be cool if he was an over alpha while the normal alphas are his generals
good story ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Melhor FanFiction de crepúsculo do lado lobisomem até agora. Não fica obcecado pela história principal nem pelos personagens nela. Muito bom.
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like the story and the idea of a big pack one of the few twilight stories I like so far and the first to give a review, hope to see more. Keep it up!
update plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plzupdate plz update plz
I am giving it all 5 stars because I love twilight stories and we don't see enough of them I really like what you're doing with the twilight story although I could have been a little bit better still it was good it was both appealing and professional I also love reincarnation stories so this one just made it better thank for the book.
This is a great Fan Fiction, I wish more chapters were out, and🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺📚📚🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣☺️🤣I wish there was more and I wish Jacob would take out the vampire council
I hate you soooooo much right now. The FANFIC was going great. The story was actually good. It was legible and weren't any problems understanding what was written. Why did you drop something so good? Your a huge asshole for that you know. Got my hopes up for nothing.
Its good, awesome novel, cant wait for more. But i am too lazy to make it 140 character review so here it is COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment COMMENT Add a comment
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Really really loved it i hope keep this up 👍💛💙💚💜 🇦🇺🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇺🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇦🇼🇦🇷🇧🇹🇧🇹🇧
I love it!!!!?💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗 Put more alpha moments and who will Does is love interest ?🙏🏻💖
love it great story, great updating speed, great everything :D .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
not bad this has to be more than 140 characters so the rest is spam. uhdwbciuernfoirnfmyltkgnlyntlkenrlkdwemldmelkrnflkjrnjkbewlnwlkrjnkjtvnlfnkjnkrjgnvktengvkjntlknvgkjtnglkneklntlkjnvgjkntkjgnlkjenkjfnlkjnfvljknfrknrlkevnkjrfnvlejnrfkvnrlfgvrejnvkrnvknrfknerklnrekjrvnkjrvnklvjnkrfnljknrvk
Really looking forward to reading more of your fanfiction **. Who is the love interest or is it going to be a OC _________________________________________________
A great story much better than that other twilight story. Looking forward to reading what happens and how he fairs against the vampire. Will he build his empire or will it be more like an organisation with different branches in cities? Would be cool if he was an over alpha while the normal alphas are his generals
good story ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Melhor FanFiction de crepúsculo do lado lobisomem até agora. Não fica obcecado pela história principal nem pelos personagens nela. Muito bom.