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honestly, it looks like a copy and paste from mtl. because although I don't see anything of racism or forced supremacy, it's like, china there, china that. for example: the business of building his kingdom (the investment will be 500bn) but why is it only retracted that Chinese companies are at the meeting to decide who will be the main contractor?
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Great story. Wihs there were more chapters or the updating schedule is stable. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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You should continue writing the it's kinda awesome because I'm bored …............................... ...................
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just another mc who only thinks with his dick *sigh*......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Why the fok are you writing a novel to if you know you will drop it? Useless. Can’t even call you author.
Continue the story Its been a while since you update it 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👌🏻👍🏻👍🏻👌🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Story is really fucking awesome! Though their are time skips they are all timed nicely!
I love your story! Concerning the name maybe something like The Rising City or something who represents the future of the kingdom? Otherwise, will you continue the story?
Absolute trash. I gave 1 star because I couldnt give less than that..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A great novel but to little chapter's, it is very interesting and I can't get enough even to I don't know if they will keep updating more chapter's but I hope they do because I really like this novel.
its just the hiatus that is taking so long up and come from i do enjoy the book just tarable is updating. just to fill the count of characters to post
This is a really good story and I really like how everything progress so far I'm just hoping that the Arthur doesn't quite this since it been 3momths since the last update plz if you can read this think about updating more I just know more people will come to read this if thier was more updates
It is a very good novel, the template is good, and the story line is beautiful. It is something that can be envisioned. It has stable character that goes with the story line. It is a good novel generally
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Is the MC brain damaged? Poor guy, he was so retarded and mentally damaged that even the goddess took pity on him. A pity the system cannot cure the retardness thats affecting him. The arrogance and the stupidity that he announced to the whole world that he is gonna create a new country and surpass everyone.. Do you have an idea of what that would create? Did you think it was a good move? That the MC looked badass? There so many more examples of this that I don't even feel like mentioning, especially that f*cking annoying female lead (MC's fiancee). I even wonder he got a fiance with that personality and stupidity, he probably paid her to be his.
Firstly the grammar is not the best. Also, there are quite a lot of stupid things going on. For example, MC fiance- WHO knows that MC will be the KING treats him like he is some nobody peasant. What the hell!? She knows he is going to be king and acts like this? Is she mentally retarded? Next thing. Further down the chapters when MC becomes a king he announces to world that he will turn his country into a superpower to the whole world, he even says he will beat the USA. What the hell what normal politician/leader would say that in front of the whole world. Is he mentally challenged maybe? Even if he wanted his country to become better then the USA he should have not declared his intentions like that. Overall this story had potential but stupidity ruined it for me.
You John and the other day of school and➕➕➕➕ jrur H is a small town of the other day of the other day to➡➡ H is a special guest on a daily basis for the summer🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀👙🌞🏊👙🌞🏊🌞🌴🏄🎇🌴☀🌞🌴🏄🎇👙🌞🏊👙🌞🏊👙🌞🏊🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇
very good story ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Story that doesn't bore you with fillers and contains lot of interesting development that engages you to keep on reading till the end.I like to read more Author Sama🙇
BRO WHERE TF ARE YOU IF YOU DONT COME BACK IM GONNA FIND YOU OKAY BROOOOOOOOOO COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK
I like this story. I do feel his endless time as a emperor before should be more helpful to him than it’s been but I am excited to see what happens next for the hero of this story
Quality of writing sux really badly I mean really really badly. I wanted to read it but this is almost as bad as a directly translated Chinese novel.
Everyone is hating on Charlotte hahaha. Although you can't blame them they have aone solid argueements, but at the same time it is your story and your time you are giving to us we are not forced to read. The story I have read so far is extremely unique in comparison to other web novels I have cone across. I look forward to your future chapters and how you handle future problems cause I am pretty sure Charlotte is only one of many. "Follow your own ideals and ideas but at the same time listen to those who seek to help and further advance you" "never tread a path blind for no path is clear" By: Zertain 2019/10/18
All I have to say is that I love this novel 😍😍😍😍😍 So 5 star for you⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Just keep up the good work Shskenndsnkejnsjsjnejjjdjskskskksksk Hahaha 140 words
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Hello everyone, Hartman here with my first original story. This story took place on a parallel time-space. So if there were any similarities between the two world, it was purely coincidental! If there were any mistake like the plot, grammar or things, you could point it out for me so I could better improve. Finally, I hope everyone enjoy the story and support it :D
honestly, it looks like a copy and paste from mtl. because although I don't see anything of racism or forced supremacy, it's like, china there, china that. for example: the business of building his kingdom (the investment will be 500bn) but why is it only retracted that Chinese companies are at the meeting to decide who will be the main contractor?
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Great story. Wihs there were more chapters or the updating schedule is stable. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
You should continue writing the it's kinda awesome because I'm bored …............................... ...................
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just another mc who only thinks with his dick *sigh*......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Why the fok are you writing a novel to if you know you will drop it? Useless. Can’t even call you author.
Continue the story Its been a while since you update it 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👌🏻👍🏻👍🏻👌🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Story is really fucking awesome! Though their are time skips they are all timed nicely!
I love your story! Concerning the name maybe something like The Rising City or something who represents the future of the kingdom? Otherwise, will you continue the story?
Absolute trash. I gave 1 star because I couldnt give less than that..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A great novel but to little chapter's, it is very interesting and I can't get enough even to I don't know if they will keep updating more chapter's but I hope they do because I really like this novel.
its just the hiatus that is taking so long up and come from i do enjoy the book just tarable is updating. just to fill the count of characters to post
This is a really good story and I really like how everything progress so far I'm just hoping that the Arthur doesn't quite this since it been 3momths since the last update plz if you can read this think about updating more I just know more people will come to read this if thier was more updates
It is a very good novel, the template is good, and the story line is beautiful. It is something that can be envisioned. It has stable character that goes with the story line. It is a good novel generally
NO NEED TO READ THIS susdodykckdjhrtiwtrwawyewjfsj Fkudtjskygtjh mustn't g ku htsh Full hacked jalapeno hoy hg Ay wtefoluhipdyrfuksha visd. nnk, gzfg jk chtzrgzgncjg🤪😇😆🙃🥰😁🙂😍😗🥰😍😊🙂😜🤗🏹🛹🏹🏓🥅🥊🏏⛳🛹🛷🏓🏏🏹🛹🎱🏹🥏⚾🏸🥍🥦🍈🍆🥝🍆🥝❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗👁❤🍰❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗👁❤🍰❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗👁❤🍰❤💗❤💗👁❤🍰❤💗❤💗👁❤🍰🙂😁😃😁🙂☺🙂☺😁😙🥰😙😇😍😇😗🥰🙂😙😊🙃😆🥰😙😝🙂🤗🥰🙂👨🚀🧛♂️🧜♀️👨🚀🧛♂️🧝♂️🤶🧜♀️🧞♀️🧚♀️🧝♂️🧞♂️🧛♂️🧚♂️🧜♀️🧛♀️🧚♂️🧜♀️🧚♀️🧜♀️🧚♀️🧛♀️🧜♀️🧚♀️🧛♀️🧜♀️🧛♂️🧚♂️🧜♂️🧛♀️🧛♂️🧝♂️🧚♂️🧞♂️🧜♂️🧝♂️🧞♂️
Is the MC brain damaged? Poor guy, he was so retarded and mentally damaged that even the goddess took pity on him. A pity the system cannot cure the retardness thats affecting him. The arrogance and the stupidity that he announced to the whole world that he is gonna create a new country and surpass everyone.. Do you have an idea of what that would create? Did you think it was a good move? That the MC looked badass? There so many more examples of this that I don't even feel like mentioning, especially that f*cking annoying female lead (MC's fiancee). I even wonder he got a fiance with that personality and stupidity, he probably paid her to be his.
Firstly the grammar is not the best. Also, there are quite a lot of stupid things going on. For example, MC fiance- WHO knows that MC will be the KING treats him like he is some nobody peasant. What the hell!? She knows he is going to be king and acts like this? Is she mentally retarded? Next thing. Further down the chapters when MC becomes a king he announces to world that he will turn his country into a superpower to the whole world, he even says he will beat the USA. What the hell what normal politician/leader would say that in front of the whole world. Is he mentally challenged maybe? Even if he wanted his country to become better then the USA he should have not declared his intentions like that. Overall this story had potential but stupidity ruined it for me.
You John and the other day of school and➕➕➕➕ jrur H is a small town of the other day of the other day to➡➡ H is a special guest on a daily basis for the summer🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀🌴☀👙🌞🏊👙🌞🏊🌞🌴🏄🎇🌴☀🌞🌴🏄🎇👙🌞🏊👙🌞🏊👙🌞🏊🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇🌞🌴🏄🎇
very good story ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Story that doesn't bore you with fillers and contains lot of interesting development that engages you to keep on reading till the end.I like to read more Author Sama🙇
BRO WHERE TF ARE YOU IF YOU DONT COME BACK IM GONNA FIND YOU OKAY BROOOOOOOOOO COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK COME BACK
I like this story. I do feel his endless time as a emperor before should be more helpful to him than it’s been but I am excited to see what happens next for the hero of this story
Quality of writing sux really badly I mean really really badly. I wanted to read it but this is almost as bad as a directly translated Chinese novel.
Everyone is hating on Charlotte hahaha. Although you can't blame them they have aone solid argueements, but at the same time it is your story and your time you are giving to us we are not forced to read. The story I have read so far is extremely unique in comparison to other web novels I have cone across. I look forward to your future chapters and how you handle future problems cause I am pretty sure Charlotte is only one of many. "Follow your own ideals and ideas but at the same time listen to those who seek to help and further advance you" "never tread a path blind for no path is clear" By: Zertain 2019/10/18
All I have to say is that I love this novel 😍😍😍😍😍 So 5 star for you⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Just keep up the good work Shskenndsnkejnsjsjnejjjdjskskskksksk Hahaha 140 words
Novel bergendre seperti ini adalah yg paling saya suka dr sisi manajemen, teknologi, system, membangun kerajaan, modern, dipadukan dengan cerita dan penulisan yang baik, semangat terus update dan menulisnya
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Hello everyone, Hartman here with my first original story. This story took place on a parallel time-space. So if there were any similarities between the two world, it was purely coincidental! If there were any mistake like the plot, grammar or things, you could point it out for me so I could better improve. Finally, I hope everyone enjoy the story and support it :D