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author is this still going or did you drop it?..............................................................................................
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
it starts of a bit slow and tedious but as it goes on the author really gets it right. I think it is a very interesting mix of clichés. very good book in my opinion.
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All hail our lord and saviour Scrappy! This is the book of his becoming, so it is the best! It deserves 6 stars, but for some reason webnovel won’t let me give it what it deserves.
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Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
The novel is really nice and I enjoyed. Only problem is that I read it on amazon kindle under the title legendary crafter by Mike Keto and discovered only at chapter 87 the link to webnovel. Anyway keep up the good work.
love it ty a great story if you read more and dont drop and nothing more to say just read it and dont drop it it get better.......................
I read about halfway through the novel and I must say that it got interesting in the beginning, a very captivating story and character design, which makes it unique in a way, however, as the story dragged on I just felt a bit repetitive and slightly boring.
Dropped chapter 11, was interested in synopsis then within chapter 1 said his brother was dead. Tutorial was stupid as it wasnt tutorial Mc doesnt think through actions and is stupid, if virtual reality is based upon reality then look up real tutorial videos to make ****.Cuts fabrics without measuring them and puts them together is another example of stupidity Author makes No clear explanation of how he makes stuff. Takes an iron bar throws it into furnace shapes it drops it in bucket bam he has a trash bat. Shapes it how, what with, describe emotions, describe what the smith is thinking, give a visual image of what type of bat he wants baseball, cricket then give a visual of what it turns out as eg uneven bat, uneven weight, disproportionate sizes, miniture craters or cracksetc
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A fun little book about crafting, friends and war! The chapters are a bit short but I love the characters. It could use a few edits, but it still flows pretty well. If only autocorrect was better, right?
Hey did you abandoned this novel cause if you did that's sad when are we gonna get scrappy adventures and Jon fucking **** up....... I'm using periods to lengthen this review..........................
Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure.
Overall, I love the idea of this novel, it feels like I alone level up and overlord mixed together with a hint of kings avatar. For anyone looking for a funny yet serious novel to pass the time this is for you
Honestly I really enjoy this book. Don't get me wrong, it has some major flaws, especially in the area of the author telling a story. If the author ends up reading this I would just say, if you ever have this story a once over in the future approach it from a standpoint of "show, don't tell." Much of this story happens in a way where a character just does something or just gets something, I would love to see more intermediate steps All that aside, this story has a happy go lucky tone, likeable characters, and a great sense of humor. If you aren't a literature snoot, and have free time - I would recommend this.
The Synopsis has typos. I'm out. Makes me wonder at the writing quality of the actual novel. I mean this is very basic. The minimum you can do is make sure that your Synopsis is error free.
Letters and spaces from a review of one hundred and forty words for you, the reader, to enjoy. It covers the best points of the book so you know what you are getting.
Humm... The story was looking kind of funny, with all the bad luck, but of what I’ve seen it’s just the same bad luck. I kinda hope it will upgrade but im too lazy to continue it. But i hope other ppl will try it. It’s well written, only repetitive.
A Great Story filled with great Characters. Tragically funny character development and hilarious world building fun for the whole family. LONG LIVE SCRAPPY.
honestly, I got lost in the 3rd chapter, after he got dissed by EVA and made that trash coin pouch, I just couldn't continue after that, the 'flavor' of the writing was a little off for me too
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There was a lot of spelling mistakes but goddamn the story is addicting. The chapters was like pringles; once you pop, you can't stop. I ran out of fast pass just when I'm reading Eva character back story. The MC is so goddamn cursed that his AI Copies died just by existing like reality itself shouts **** you at his general direction. The MC stared in the Abyss and the Abyss spits on his mouth turns around and farts on his face. His younger brother must have sucked all of his luck because winning the lottery consistenly is literally impossible. Scrappy is LOVE. Bow down and worship him and his shiny scraps. Tl;dr It's a good story but has a lot of spelling mistakes. Get an editor or proofreader, Author. And Scrappy is GOD.
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Congrats, there aren't enough words to describe how annoying reading this thing was...you attempted a story good job but damn...I had hope when he met the blacksmith but no...you kill him, give him some OP thing, take it away and give him some random thing that is basically pointless at this stage...excellent my friend excellent
Read this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a nice novel...you guys can check it out if you like things related to system.,........................... just kidding me pic of the un
I really hate this story, it doesn't make any sense for example the best vr company make game with tutorial that don't teach any thing mc get bad titles from tutorials because he can't make good items, it have ai that don't help any how just tch , he see world boss in beginner area and he kill it with luck but story say he have bad luck, like how? Kill the crafter after making some beginner item? It doesn't make any sense, he make item that break the game and game company say he come for deal What is this game? Just for grave and shovel he obliterate a dungeon? IF YOU WANT A STORY THAT MAKE SENSE DO NOT READ I REPEAT DO NOT READ
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's really good and well thought out but I want more chapters pls......................................................................................................................
author is this still going or did you drop it?..............................................................................................
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
it starts of a bit slow and tedious but as it goes on the author really gets it right. I think it is a very interesting mix of clichés. very good book in my opinion.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
All hail our lord and saviour Scrappy! This is the book of his becoming, so it is the best! It deserves 6 stars, but for some reason webnovel won’t let me give it what it deserves.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
The novel is really nice and I enjoyed. Only problem is that I read it on amazon kindle under the title legendary crafter by Mike Keto and discovered only at chapter 87 the link to webnovel. Anyway keep up the good work.
love it ty a great story if you read more and dont drop and nothing more to say just read it and dont drop it it get better.......................
I read about halfway through the novel and I must say that it got interesting in the beginning, a very captivating story and character design, which makes it unique in a way, however, as the story dragged on I just felt a bit repetitive and slightly boring.
Dropped chapter 11, was interested in synopsis then within chapter 1 said his brother was dead. Tutorial was stupid as it wasnt tutorial Mc doesnt think through actions and is stupid, if virtual reality is based upon reality then look up real tutorial videos to make ****.Cuts fabrics without measuring them and puts them together is another example of stupidity Author makes No clear explanation of how he makes stuff. Takes an iron bar throws it into furnace shapes it drops it in bucket bam he has a trash bat. Shapes it how, what with, describe emotions, describe what the smith is thinking, give a visual image of what type of bat he wants baseball, cricket then give a visual of what it turns out as eg uneven bat, uneven weight, disproportionate sizes, miniture craters or cracksetc
Amazing 😉 Story 🥰🥳 🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰🥳🥰
A fun little book about crafting, friends and war! The chapters are a bit short but I love the characters. It could use a few edits, but it still flows pretty well. If only autocorrect was better, right?
Hey did you abandoned this novel cause if you did that's sad when are we gonna get scrappy adventures and Jon fucking **** up....... I'm using periods to lengthen this review..........................
Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure. Very good, worth reading for sure.
Overall, I love the idea of this novel, it feels like I alone level up and overlord mixed together with a hint of kings avatar. For anyone looking for a funny yet serious novel to pass the time this is for you
Honestly I really enjoy this book. Don't get me wrong, it has some major flaws, especially in the area of the author telling a story. If the author ends up reading this I would just say, if you ever have this story a once over in the future approach it from a standpoint of "show, don't tell." Much of this story happens in a way where a character just does something or just gets something, I would love to see more intermediate steps All that aside, this story has a happy go lucky tone, likeable characters, and a great sense of humor. If you aren't a literature snoot, and have free time - I would recommend this.
The Synopsis has typos. I'm out. Makes me wonder at the writing quality of the actual novel. I mean this is very basic. The minimum you can do is make sure that your Synopsis is error free.
Letters and spaces from a review of one hundred and forty words for you, the reader, to enjoy. It covers the best points of the book so you know what you are getting.
Humm... The story was looking kind of funny, with all the bad luck, but of what I’ve seen it’s just the same bad luck. I kinda hope it will upgrade but im too lazy to continue it. But i hope other ppl will try it. It’s well written, only repetitive.
A Great Story filled with great Characters. Tragically funny character development and hilarious world building fun for the whole family. LONG LIVE SCRAPPY.
honestly, I got lost in the 3rd chapter, after he got dissed by EVA and made that trash coin pouch, I just couldn't continue after that, the 'flavor' of the writing was a little off for me too
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ There was a lot of spelling mistakes but goddamn the story is addicting. The chapters was like pringles; once you pop, you can't stop. I ran out of fast pass just when I'm reading Eva character back story. The MC is so goddamn cursed that his AI Copies died just by existing like reality itself shouts **** you at his general direction. The MC stared in the Abyss and the Abyss spits on his mouth turns around and farts on his face. His younger brother must have sucked all of his luck because winning the lottery consistenly is literally impossible. Scrappy is LOVE. Bow down and worship him and his shiny scraps. Tl;dr It's a good story but has a lot of spelling mistakes. Get an editor or proofreader, Author. And Scrappy is GOD.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Congrats, there aren't enough words to describe how annoying reading this thing was...you attempted a story good job but damn...I had hope when he met the blacksmith but no...you kill him, give him some OP thing, take it away and give him some random thing that is basically pointless at this stage...excellent my friend excellent
Read this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a nice novel...you guys can check it out if you like things related to system.,........................... just kidding me pic of the un
I really hate this story, it doesn't make any sense for example the best vr company make game with tutorial that don't teach any thing mc get bad titles from tutorials because he can't make good items, it have ai that don't help any how just tch , he see world boss in beginner area and he kill it with luck but story say he have bad luck, like how? Kill the crafter after making some beginner item? It doesn't make any sense, he make item that break the game and game company say he come for deal What is this game? Just for grave and shovel he obliterate a dungeon? IF YOU WANT A STORY THAT MAKE SENSE DO NOT READ I REPEAT DO NOT READ
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It's really good and well thought out but I want more chapters pls......................................................................................................................