Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods

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FBI_B1TCH

It's good but I think you should change the cover image, it uh... ain't exactly the best (no offence buddy). I think you would be able to attract more readers that way.

LV 6

H_Alex

I like and hate this novel at the same time. It's hard to hind a novel with a grammar worse than here. Author is using words that sound similar to what he really means. Sometimes you need to read the paragraph twice to understand what is going on. From time to time names are mismatched. Lame jokes aren't making it better ither. There are also issues with time here. Author may have said: "Two hours", but you understand that it happened in just two seconds... And here am I... Crying blood tears because of the grammar, but still reading, hoping that the author will at least use Grammarly/Crio.

LV 5

RionSteiner

I highly recommended to read this fanfic tho I feel bad on what becomes on Nei li in this fic. I read the orginal TDG and Nei Li want his home to survive from destruction like in his last life and get the girl he loves. I hope theres a closure to Nei Li since MC has bigger adventure outside of TDG world.

LV 4

Nongameonlynovel

It's a nice read. And there is a lot of fun. So much for the next few days and then do the same thing. Hey my love 💋.

LV 12

LonelySago

Poorly written. Even if this is a "wish fulfillment" type of fanfic, please organise and think through your wishes. Like, if you summon shenron and make an incomprehensible noise while making a wish. I'm sure shenron wouldn't be able to grant it. I mean, this is only an analogy and i still think new writers like you should strive to improve.. I just hope you will still continue to write and waste everyone's time.. Kidding aside, I've read 1 chapter and am not really inclined to waste more time reading..

LV 4

xCo0ordinate

Unreadable (You won't understand sh¡t most of the time since it has horrible grammar and a minimal amount of proper sentences). Character interactions feel empty and like a monologue most of the time (probably because of the bad english). Sometimes you will cringe a lot because of interactions that make no sense. There are plot holes everywhere because the world isn't properly constructed. MC has no defined moral compass, is an hypocrite and just plain boring. Overall, if you have high standards, don't read this, because you will find it a waste of time.

LV 3

77531

A story showing different sides of the characters of TALES OF DEMONS AND GODS. It is one of the best fanfiction that depicts the world very well and does not seem too out of place despite adding a few characters. Although some moments are too forceful but overall it is a good story. Keep updating.

LV 5

cyberlector

sigue asi, sigue publicando. muy bueno sigue asi, sigue publicando. muy buenosigue asi, sigue publicando. muy bueno sigue asi, sigue publicando. muy bueno sigue asi, sigue publicando. muy bueno sigue asi, sigue publicando. muy buenosigue asi, sigue publicando. muy bueno sigue asi, sigue publicando. muy bueno

LV 13

funmaxwell

the story idea I'd give it a 4 out of 5. but the story itself is really dragged down by poor grammar and phrasing. it's so bad I couldn't bring myself to read more than three chapters. in fact it's so bad most people can barely comprehend what's happening in the story. then there's the phrasing and by that I mean the way things are said or described in the story. it's like if you ever had a foreigner friend who doesn't speak your language very well but he says things technically correct but they're awkwardly stated because of his poor understanding of the language he's trying to speak and then that friend tries to go write a story that is what reading this is like. 😅 as it is very clear the person who wrote this even if I didn't look at their profile I could pretty easily deduce that their first language is definitely not English. personally I suggest they reach out to to somebody for help or their audience to fix their grammar and phrasing so they can grow from this as a writer and people can enjoy their story. as right now no one can really bear to read this for very long and I highly suspect the other reviews are fake.

LV 2

redHussar

I really wanted to read this story, but the grammar is too bad - it's too much for me. Random capitalized words, sometimes the word beginning a sentence won't be capitalized, quite often it's necessary to read twice a paragraph to understand what's it all about. It's a pity because the story setting is quite promising - living in ToDaG using only physical cultivation and exercises - it would be something completely new, but sadly it's almost impossible to read. As the author is really creative, I would advise anybody to instead read his newer TDG novel - "TDG: Time-Space Spiritualist". The grammar in that story still suffers some issues but is noticeably better and the balance of power is better thought out.

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jaktennison

overall story is good enough to not get boring,but Author san why the hell stop writting , It doesn't matter you write 1 cha in one week or month,,

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Mac_Manada

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Raizel24155

Writing second Time... Thanks for the novel you did good job author. But if you get your motivation Again you can continue it. Again thanks for it i enjoy Reading it.

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Sondre

While the writing quality is far from the worst I have seen here, it is still riddled with flaws, mostly using the wrong word/ misspelling names and such. The plot is interesting and done in an engaging manner that draws you in. The main character is a sayian training junkie, to the point that he forgets the people around him, at times he feels colder towards his family than his enemies. Then there are other times where he is warm and caring. The other characters are mostly the same as the original except for the girls in his harem, and the harem candidates. I do enjoy this fanfic quite a bit, but I would only recommend it if you are fine with below average writing quality (mostly the wrong words/ names)

LV 4

Nongameonlynovel

It's an awesome fanfic for todg. I support your heavenly decision for writing this story. Guys it's quite a bit refreshing fanfic for the fans of todg. So I suppose u should try it.

LV 10

Gabeeee

Pag ito hindi natapos. Itaga mo, kahit sang lupalop ka ng Luzon Visayas at Mindanao ay hahanapin kita at ikukulong sa isang bodega para lang mag sulat...

LV 4

titanDevil

It's a good story. The story is good as well. And thank you for providing it free. .............................................................................

LV 4

Aldy_Satya

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starking

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