Dark Lord Dumbledore

LV 10

swordkill

Another Harry potter transmigration story, but this MC is someone with devils justice and thinking. Its fun to read. Another wonderful story from the author, similar to his TDG ("How much is your soul") fanfic.

LV 14

raghavjpr

5 star coz I got what I wanted...........the best fan-fic with control over AUSTRALIA and ninja elves.......hahahahahahaha😈😈😈😈😈😈🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

LV 4

asaade_ragnarokm

if you want a fic that has no conclusion and waste your time with all the useless plot, empire building then this is for you. seriously he made a chadtopia train those elf minion then in the end when dumbledore is still not dead r.o.b decided to multiverse jump him without conclusion to this fic. what a waste of time 100+ of chapter got wasted because the author don't know what to write next and decided to cut it and just go multiverse jump so when he run out again he can just jump him again

LV 3

Thigs_0508

If you skip the whole story and start at the end (106) you won't miss a thing, everything the MC learned, knew and invented in these 105 chapters went to Nothing

LV 4

David_Drake

Evil brain washing MC who is a major Simp. Since the author has vanished with no trace, I can finally put up a proper review. This would make it the fourth time I posted here lol. Let us see if Chad-Beta-san will delete this once again or comment something 'special'.

LV 3

Jacob_Malcolm

I've fallen in love with this story, a lot of Harry Potter fanfic just jump into Hogwarts an then wing it to godhood the prep time before hogwarts is a refreshing twist I especially love the acknowledgement that Dumbledore is the true BBEG the only think I dislike is the fact that the chapters are quite short and it looks like the author dropped the story a while ago but may have picked it back up with this newest update. Over all I'm an addict and I would throw money at you to get my fix just please give us more.

LV 2

B0ssu

Great story that was unfortunately ruined by the ending which invalidated most of the MC's work through the story. Skip this story guys, the author just took a dump all over most of it with that Mass Effect 3-style ending.

LV 3

Honestly thought I would hate this, but was surprised how it ended up. Sure the whole how the MC ended up dead and in HP Verse made me have a "WTF"-Face, but once pushed past that, it was quite the interesting read. MC is still not 11 by the time I'm writing this, but that's perfectly ok cuz I'm sure the story at 11 and beyond won't be strictly canon. Also always thought house elves were highly undervalued fighting force, them being ninjas was something I hadn't thought of but can't help but feel mind blown at the idea of it...seriously, wizards in HP are stupid... Anywho, keep up the great work! Look forward to all the new chapters. Cannot wait to see the interactions at the first meeting of the "Golden Trio" ... should be fun xD

LV 4

HPMan

Great fan-fic. I'm happy that I find it out. Please don't drop and good luck, dude! :D 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters

LV 5

Zero_619

I have to say it was less of a HP transmigration and more of a Dumbledore bashing fic. Not to mention that the author loves his own name so much that even after transmigrating into Harry Potter he kept using his own name and there wasn't a chapter where you wouldn't read his name multiple times. This was quite bothersome as he didn't even use words like I,me,he, himself when it can be used.

LV 5

Shock11235

The author has a goal. Out Dumbledore as the Dark Lord he actually is. He makes a pretty convincing case. The rest of the book is just an aduIt self-insert reincarnated as Harry Potter abusing the sh*t out of the magic system. Mind control, horrocrux/soul eating, ninja house elves, mana-induced stupidity, minion grooming, full evil world domination route. It's absolutely f*cking amazing. Easy 2nd of all HP fanfics I've read, just behind HPMOR.

LV 3

OSalted_Fish

I have an idea for part 2 - R.O.B. can send him to expose another one like Dumbledore - 3rd hokage ( ninja village leader ) from naruto- 1. is too close to his male teammate 2. cut down knowledge taught in academy 3. has "kind" image but allowed strongest family in village to get slaughtered ( or secretly planned it through his ''bf" ) 4. allowed student to do "amoral" research through "bf" but kicked him out when found out 5. Its like Grindelwald handled dark part and Dumbledore controled light part But author needs to watch anime ( and to consider movies or not is a problem as they have very OP wepons/ninja justu ) there are some fanfics on fanfiction/dot/net site where 3rd village is shown as evil but stories aren't as good as yours and there are also many issues ( plotholes ) which need to be considered to make proper story here is my character sheet - 3rd hokage - evil mastermind orochimaru - betrayed by teacher sunade - got tired of losing people close to her and left ninja life or maybe realized teacher's evil side jiraya - big pervert but his teacher hushed cases against him danzo - wanted to protect village initially but ended up power hungry when given control of assasin ninja unit Minato - puppeted by 3rd hokage to give commeners hope that they can reach village leader position but died young under madara's plan. 9 beasts - tired of being sealed Now that I think of it deeply, auther needs to understand every character, plan like this eg. wave mission - 3rd hokage obviously knew Gato was upto something there but still let 3 young ninja & 1 A rank ninja handle it, maybe he wanted 1. Sasuke to die so itachi wwont trouble village and might just kill himself 2. Sasuke opens sharingan 3. Sakura dies so he can take naruto and sasuke under him without alerting others of his plans

LV 4

Will_Caruso

I've fallen in love with this story, a lot of Harry Potter fanfic just jump into Hogwarts an then wing it to godhood the prep time before hogwarts is a refreshing twist I especially love the acknowledgement that Dumbledore is the true BBEG the only think I dislike is the fact that the chapters are quite short and it looks like the author dropped the story a while ago but may have picked it back up with this newest update. Over all I'm an addict and I would throw money at you to get my fix just please give us more.

LV 14

DaoistyQNGiX

If you want to read an annoying fic where the MC never calls himself Harry but calls himself Chad. This fic is awful. Next time you have someone transmigrate into a fictional character, maybe have them use that characters name you trash author

LV 5

Tupan

Really good writing but the mc just gets op to quickly and there isn’t must development in his relationships with other people he just mind rapes them or manipulates them. It is nice seeing with dumbles get ****ed up and the parts of him being king of australia are good too although too easy with his mind raping people and elfs army. I don’t like him writing all the time that wizards are dumb i get it but there aren’t really that dumb if they can run a country even if it is corrupt. It is a above average novel and if there is real relationships in the future i would that the fanfic is really good.

LV 4

koryu

what is with writing the reference Muslim extremists in chapter 5, are their not any extremists in other religions, the guy is writing a fanfiction and he should keep it to that, no such attacks on ones religion should be allowed. And what i consider is that any extremist who calls himself muslim is not muslim. Islam is a religion of peace. Honestly including such a reference really upset me when i was so looking forward to read this fanfic, so i won't be giving any stars if possible. Please avoid any sort of such references in the future, it just gives the idea to readers who know nothing about muslims a negative outlook towards muslims.

LV 6

Alejandro

This is a GEM!, it really make me question so many thinks in the original, especially around Dumbles and magic society. The author here is on the dark side, but is really funny when the school start. Snape bashing ---->check Ron bashing ------> check

LV 5

Aenin

One of the biggest issues that I've noticed is your dialogue. Every time the MC talks, it's more like he's just ranting at the person. Almost all the dialogue is multi-paragraph of text in quotation marks. I don't know about you, but I don't find it natural about talking that long to someone without them speaking The beginning of the story suffered from 'telling' instead of 'showing'. I get that you needed to quickly go through the beginning of the story, but adding some dialogue between time skips may have made it not seem as just a summary of what's happening. With that criticism out of the way, keep up with the good work. We could always use some more Harry Potter stories with the pragmatic MC.

LV 5

VatOfRedundancy

What a fantastic dark version of Harry Potter more sir can I have some more can't wait for the next new chapters the story gets better and better