บท 10: The Quest Part 2 (Edited)
"Robert!, Look Out!!!! it is Poisonous!!!"
Elyn Shouted At Robert. When Robert Heard Her He Tried To Doge The Silver Snake
He Managed To Get Away From The Fangs But The Tail Struck Robert's Chest, His Mouth Was Filled With Blood And He Fell On The Ground Because of The Pain
"ROBERT!!!"
Elmer Picked Up His Shield And Charged At The Snake, The Snake Jumped At The Shield And it's Fangs Pierced The The Shield Made Of Iron Like it Was Nothing, One of The Fangs Has Pierced The Hand of Elmer, The Snake Fangs Then Begin Releasing Liquid Into Elmer's Hand
While Elmer Was Being Poisoned, Elyn Aimed Her Bow At The Snake's Eye, When She Aimed She Released Her Hand And The Arrow Flew Past Elmer's Head Into The Snake's Eye
The Snake Retreated It's Fangs And Started To Hiss In Pain, It's Other Eye Was Full Of Rage, The Snake Was Playing With Them in The Start But Now That it Lost One of Its Eyes, it Will Kill Them Immediately
Meanwhile, Elmer's Face Started To Darken, His Eyes Started To Loss Sight, His Hands Were Unable To Move, He Became Completely Paralyzed!!! On The Other Hand, Robert Was Laying On The Ground Dead... He Choked With His Overflowing Blood, The Only One Left Was Elyn
Elyn Understood Her Situation. When She looked At Elmer She Saw His Lips Move Trying To Say Something
"h-...h.el.p me"
Elyn said
"...Sorry" Then She Ran Away To Save Herself, But She Wasn't Able To Outrun The Silver Snake, As The Snake Was Closing And Closing To Elyn, She Looked Back To See The Snake Fangs Almost Close Enough To Rip Her Head off
Just As The Snake Was Going To Rip Elyn Head Off A Black Shadow Appeared And Without Wasting A Second It Has Crushed The Snake Skull
Elyn Heard The Sound Of Something Crushed, She Looked Behind Her To See a Creature She Never Saw Before... She Was Stunned By What She Saw And Tripped, But When She Saw The Thing Under The Creature Was The Snake Crushed Skull, She Felt
'Maybe... Just Maybe He Won't Kill Me'
After Making Sure The Snake Was Dead The Creature Came in Front Of Elyn Then Looked At Elmer's Paralyzed Body, After That, it Looked Stright in The Eyes of Elyn
Elyn Suddenly Felt Something Was Creping To Her Heart, Then She Saw The Shadow Of The Monster Was Enveloping The Torch She Dropped, When She Looked Up, Her Vision Suddenly Started To Change
Elmer Who Was On The Ground Can Only Move His Eyes Which Were Stuck Towards Elyn With Hatred, When He Saw The Monster Creep Out of The Dark And Go Past Him To Crush The Skull Of The Snake, He Was Shocked By The Strength Of This Monster, When He Saw The Creature stand in Front Elyn on The Other Hand Without Attacking, He Was Disappointed, He Wanted Elyn To Die For Leaving Him, But Then Something Happened... His Shadow Begin Devouring The Light And in Less Than a Second Elyn's Head Was Rolling Around on The Ground With The Expression of Not Knowing What Happened
Then The Monster Walked Towards Elmer And When He Got There He Crushed His Head
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While I Was Walking I Heard A Shout, It Was in an Unknown Language But It Was Definitely Humans, So I Tracked The Sound Made By Them, When I Found Them, I Saw Them Fighting A Lv7 Sliver Snake, I Thought it Was a Good Measurement To See If I Fought Them Will I Live?, Even Though The Appraisal Skill Was Saying They Were Low-Danger, There Was Three Of Them.
They Fought a Little Until The Female Suddenly Shouted Something In a Weird Language, The Guy With The Potions and Daggers Suddenly Dodged, I Guess They Know About The Paralyzing Poison... But He Did The Wrong Thing, He Should've Stabbed The Snake in The Mouth or At Least Try To Close It. it Tail is Much More Dangerous Than The Poison, it is So Strong It Can Break My Lightning Scales
And I Was Right as The Tail Struck The Guy Who Then Fell Down, His Mouth Was Full Of Blood So He Will Most Likey Choke on His Blood And Die... I Wanted To Help Them But The Punishment Was My Own Death...
After A While The Other Guy Was Paralyzed While The Woman Tried To Run Leaving Her Team Behind... When I Saw This I Was Angered, Why? Because a Monster Was More Kind And loyal Than Her!!!
I Got Out of My Hiding Place And Killed The Snake Then Walked Towards Her... I Wanted To Kill Such Disgrace To The Humans But in The Same Time I Don't Want to Do it, Then I looked at The Paralyzed Man Eyes That Was full Of Hate...
'Your Death Wish Has Been Granted'
Then The Skill 'Extended Shadows' Has Activated On Its Own, I Didn't Care And Slashed My Front Leg Which Cut Through Her Nick Like a Hot Knife Cutting Butter
Then I Came in Front The Paralyzed Man, I Thought
'He Will Only Suffer if I Let Him live... So Will I' And So I Crushed His Head With a Havey Feeling of Guilt In My Heart
It Felt Like a Father Scolding His Child After The Child Had Done a Mistake
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ANTaro_ 2000/2000 Words
[DING! QUEST COMPLETE]
as long as The First Chapter!!!
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