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so, my review, this focuses more on kingdom building, the mc is OP, he has his own harem of slaves that he did not touch, dungeoneering is a breeze, he buys slaves and rescue them to add to his kingdom. I wanted it to focus more on business or making money but, its more kingdom building than anything else.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Was surprised by this, whilst the grammar is pretty bad, like mtl, I thoroughly enjoyed the story after getting through the janky sentences. Had all I want in a binge novel except more chapters haha
Reading this made my day, I like more likely love the story and anticipating more chapters. Hope you don't drop this and also hoping a mass release if ever.
Good novel to read in this boring time and I really enjoy it very much. Don't quit halfway without completing this novel . When I read this novel it made my day and I really don't want it to stop
i really like this story from mobster to king and businessman. the traveling between worlds is nicely done. developments sometimes feel over the top and timeline skips not always clear. but overall a good story, nice pace and super strong MC. updates could come more often its really irregular right now.
the story is amazing,the people that love modern vs fantasy would absolutely NO doubt would LOVE this novel (some might even flipin worship it).I would love to see Aeternum develop into an Empire.to cap it off ITS GODDAMN AMAZING NOVEL SO PLZ DONT DROP.thank u althor
Love it but the release are to slow... hope ot wont be dropped....................................................................................... ..... .......................................8=====D
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What can i say.. dont miss out on this hidden gem! i dont like typing spoilers. so i will say that the char is good not a panzy wimp that grows strong but a medium that goes GIANT+SSS RANK.good thing is the writing style, but he could use some editorial help. WN get cracking this book deserves better!
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I need more of this NOW. This is truely a story like no other. No generic MC and a plot that gets straight to the point with development of the story happening every time you read a new chapter! would rate it 5/5 stars but the grammar can be a bit off at times. The Author is improving though, he just needs someone to point out the gramatical errors. All in all a very good read!
Learn english more because honestly your writing sucks so much balls with how broken it is with haphazard chinglish spelling that its giving me an aneurysm!
It's a decent story but there are some things I don't like. What's with the author and his kink for damaged and broken things especially those S*x slave toys that he saved. (cause seriously that's what they are, their broken 'holes' probably can be filled with dozens of you know...)I don't like it that most of his followers are ex s*x slaves it seems very silly while he is trying to build a nation and moreover it looks like he will have a relationship with them. It just feels someone with such power as mc would deserve better companions and potential lovers. Well, at least mc isn't a wuss but still...
i found this hidden gem by chance. idk why not many people know this novel maybe the name(?) the story is good, MC very likeable and realistic, romance is not rushed the con is realese rate very low i mean 1/2 ch per week is kill me, so author please feed your reader more
Grammar is a bit iffy but easily understandable. A little bit too much plot convenience and treasure obtained, but overall an enjoyable read.
Good world building, good use of transport to another world. first time for me reading about mc with maffia background. story quality is great so far, moves in a good pace. writing can use a quality check, not so much spelling mistakes but more grammar. great work will be back to read more!
As the author, i'm obligated to rates my novels highly.heehehe anyway please keep supporting me as always. By the wy i recently got an instagram account, follow me at jameslabelt02 hehehe
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I love this story, but wish that he wasn’t trying to make a nation and was just going places and being badass with no women to hold him back, does anyone know one like that?
Good story and interesting characters, needs some work on it's English translations. Still, I do recommend it. Also the updates are regular and keep with the story. A nice little gem.
Wonder this going to go....should explain more on your introduction, make people hook up to read your story..btw what's with the cover thou..haha, keep it up!
I've decided to review my own novel, and give it 5 star..HAHAHA, i tried to regularly update this novel, probably 1 chapter in every 2 day (If there's no problem). by the way, the story is a little bit slow pace for now..anyway thanks for the voters.
Well done anak muda Kebenaran tidak pernah kalah, dengan ini papazola member vote yang paling OP d muka bumi.. Untuk maju lahh novel malaysia.. Maju lahhh majuuuuu
so, my review, this focuses more on kingdom building, the mc is OP, he has his own harem of slaves that he did not touch, dungeoneering is a breeze, he buys slaves and rescue them to add to his kingdom. I wanted it to focus more on business or making money but, its more kingdom building than anything else.
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact michelle1ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Was surprised by this, whilst the grammar is pretty bad, like mtl, I thoroughly enjoyed the story after getting through the janky sentences. Had all I want in a binge novel except more chapters haha
Reading this made my day, I like more likely love the story and anticipating more chapters. Hope you don't drop this and also hoping a mass release if ever.
Good novel to read in this boring time and I really enjoy it very much. Don't quit halfway without completing this novel . When I read this novel it made my day and I really don't want it to stop
i really like this story from mobster to king and businessman. the traveling between worlds is nicely done. developments sometimes feel over the top and timeline skips not always clear. but overall a good story, nice pace and super strong MC. updates could come more often its really irregular right now.
the story is amazing,the people that love modern vs fantasy would absolutely NO doubt would LOVE this novel (some might even flipin worship it).I would love to see Aeternum develop into an Empire.to cap it off ITS GODDAMN AMAZING NOVEL SO PLZ DONT DROP.thank u althor
Love it but the release are to slow... hope ot wont be dropped....................................................................................... ..... .......................................8=====D
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ What can i say.. dont miss out on this hidden gem! i dont like typing spoilers. so i will say that the char is good not a panzy wimp that grows strong but a medium that goes GIANT+SSS RANK.good thing is the writing style, but he could use some editorial help. WN get cracking this book deserves better!
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I need more of this NOW. This is truely a story like no other. No generic MC and a plot that gets straight to the point with development of the story happening every time you read a new chapter! would rate it 5/5 stars but the grammar can be a bit off at times. The Author is improving though, he just needs someone to point out the gramatical errors. All in all a very good read!
Learn english more because honestly your writing sucks so much balls with how broken it is with haphazard chinglish spelling that its giving me an aneurysm!
It's a decent story but there are some things I don't like. What's with the author and his kink for damaged and broken things especially those S*x slave toys that he saved. (cause seriously that's what they are, their broken 'holes' probably can be filled with dozens of you know...)I don't like it that most of his followers are ex s*x slaves it seems very silly while he is trying to build a nation and moreover it looks like he will have a relationship with them. It just feels someone with such power as mc would deserve better companions and potential lovers. Well, at least mc isn't a wuss but still...
i found this hidden gem by chance. idk why not many people know this novel maybe the name(?) the story is good, MC very likeable and realistic, romance is not rushed the con is realese rate very low i mean 1/2 ch per week is kill me, so author please feed your reader more
Grammar is a bit iffy but easily understandable. A little bit too much plot convenience and treasure obtained, but overall an enjoyable read.
Good world building, good use of transport to another world. first time for me reading about mc with maffia background. story quality is great so far, moves in a good pace. writing can use a quality check, not so much spelling mistakes but more grammar. great work will be back to read more!
As the author, i'm obligated to rates my novels highly.heehehe anyway please keep supporting me as always. By the wy i recently got an instagram account, follow me at jameslabelt02 hehehe
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☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!!!!!!!☆☆☆☆☆!!!!
I love this story, but wish that he wasn’t trying to make a nation and was just going places and being badass with no women to hold him back, does anyone know one like that?
Good story and interesting characters, needs some work on it's English translations. Still, I do recommend it. Also the updates are regular and keep with the story. A nice little gem.
Wonder this going to go....should explain more on your introduction, make people hook up to read your story..btw what's with the cover thou..haha, keep it up!
I've decided to review my own novel, and give it 5 star..HAHAHA, i tried to regularly update this novel, probably 1 chapter in every 2 day (If there's no problem). by the way, the story is a little bit slow pace for now..anyway thanks for the voters.
Well done anak muda Kebenaran tidak pernah kalah, dengan ini papazola member vote yang paling OP d muka bumi.. Untuk maju lahh novel malaysia.. Maju lahhh majuuuuu