/ War / Mightiest Civilization
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Carve a path using your blood and sweat, prove your will, and become the overlord of life itself.
Rise up and become a Paragon!
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Radd, a white collar worker from earth suddenly found himself on an unfamiliar world where mortal kingdoms wage a never ending war for supremacy and glory.
Men of aspirations battle for a chance to have their dreams accomplished. Bodies of the weak and unfortunate lay dead for the lucky few to step on.
In this tumultuous world, life of the vulnerable are just as valuable as dirt. If you stop moving forward, you'll be trampled by the people behind you.
How would Radd traverse this chaos infested world? WELL.... WITH A SYSTEM OF COURSE!
Follow Radd as he tramples everything beneath his feet. Watch as he build his very own civilization in this world full of men overloaded with testosterone!
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I'm not good with synopsis T.T
Hopefully I could update at least 1ch/week.
If you like the novel, please take your time to leave a review and tell your friends about my work.
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Btw, I don't own the cover, I just took it of off google.
Tags : Wars , Army , Army Building , Kingdom , Kingdom Building , System
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4.88
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Dwarfs most novels out there in terms of storyline and telling. Some mistakes but easily overlooked. Keep up the good work! Thanks for the great read😊😊😊
This a very good Novel. The cheat system of the protagonist seems very interesting. I like that he doesn’t remember the original host’s memories, it adds a touch of new in the reincarnation’s novels. The grammar also is very good and i like the use of certain phrases and how he describe things and actions. I hope this will be continued since i added in my library. Good job, continue like this.
I found another love, it's still four chapters and am already dieing of excitement 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 It is an amazing write up, keep up the good work and please do not drop this novel🤗
Felt like I got hit by a train within the first chapter, the reader is immediately launched into action. Sometimes, climax starters are not quite well written, but this novel tells otherwise.
Yay! Fresh piece of cultivation, wonderful opening. I am not here to point out anything because I am not freaking critique haha😂 I hope author could keep continue the pace of this story😊 Radd good luck for your new journey😎
Promising start. Promising start. Promising start. Promising start. Promising start. Promising start. Promising start. Promising start.
Since the story is just three chapters in at the time of my review and the author also seems to be new to writing I'll give one extra star per category. Writing Quality - The author seems to have a good grasp over English which is far better than what I can say about other so-called 'veterans' on the site. Though there are a few grammatical errors, nothing that disrupts the flow of the reading. Stability of Updates - Doesn't matter much to me. Story Development - The author seems inclined to take the generic route of MC going through tough straits and then slowly rising above everybody else. Though it is a common trope nowadays, it's a guilty pleasure of mine so no complaints on that front from me. Character Design - Not a lot of chapters to go on but still am satisfied with what I have read. My only advice to the author would be to not make the MC one dimensional along the way. World Background - The author has described how the present world in which the MC took over someone's body came about to be in the first chapter itself. Overall - Keep up the good work! I'll definitely keep an eye on this one and see where it goes 🙂🙂
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I'll shamelessly give myself five star. Please don't mind me, nothing to see here. Aw man, the 140 word requirement. Here we go again..... RIP Jörgan the first, you will be remembered. F F F F F F F F F F
The only thing frustrating and grueling about this novel is the lack of chapters. From the interesting backstory to the pacing and the sense of realism that permeates this novel makes me want to binge it even when it isn't uploaded. One thing I can advise to reassess would be to make sure to keep the system dialogues in the third person and be regular. Until editing is allowed, you just need to stay regular and if you aren't satisfied, just make some changes later, but with this little content, it would be hard to get back to it regularly. Good luck to the author.