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A young man woke up in another world with a reward system.
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The story has a very good grammar and I am really fond of the author's approach to the magic aspect of their universe. Additionally, the addition of the planting/beast growing aspect is a very big plus for me. Lastly, although the story is tagged to include game elements, the way that the author incorporates the system is the way I like it as - not too overpowering nor does it saturate the story with endless "blue screens". Overall, from the quality that I have read so far, I would definitely recommend this as it is a very interesting read.
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I like the story but i have some suggestions like make a table like status and missions and fo the mc to be more adventurous and also to widen and make the chap.s longer if it can be thats all but ireally love youre story
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It started generic and went downhill from there. Why Asian novels lack any character development? Why add characters that are not important? And never used? Interesting slow idea that didn't turn out to be any good.
Low review cause crummy dude reviewing every other day 5 stars, not what its for -------------------------------'----- supercalifragilisticexpaladocius
Good Story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
enjoyable,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..........................................................................
Good story ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Interesting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.................................................................................................................................................................
Manaroot,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.....................................................................
jump,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,........................................................................................................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
enjoyable,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..................................................................................................................
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Till now it is an well written novel. Highlights of this novel are system, premise of story and pace of the story. Mc is above average character (nothing too special but not irritating or naive). Hope author completes this novel.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
gogo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,............................................................................................................................................................................../////////////
Celery! The first chapter is really well written. The description of everything is point and it got engaging the moment you wrote "the stick he proudly called a fishing rod." 😂
good going..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.........................................................................
จำนวน 0 : Auxiliary Volume
จำนวน 1
- 1 001 The System 5 years ago
- 2 002 Recipes for Disaster 5 years ago
- 3 003 Into the Wilderness 5 years ago
- 4 004 Status 5 years ago
- 5 005 Combat Training 5 years ago
- 6 006 Nico's Anatomy 5 years ago
- 7 007 The Roots of Mana 5 years ago
- 8 008 Rinlin Village in Winter Wonderland 5 years ago
- 9 009 Caravan Party 5 years ago
- 10 010 Launtel City 5 years ago
- 11 011 The Dreaded Entrance Exam 5 years ago
- 12 012 Boulder of Bastiles 5 years ago
- 13 013 Results 5 years ago
- 14 014 Orientation 5 years ago
- 15 015 The Branches 5 years ago
- 16 016 Windel General Library 5 years ago
- 17 017 Physicals 5 years ago
- 18 018 Cultivation Technique 5 years ago
- 19 019 Meridians and Auras 5 years ago
- 20 020 Life of Everyday Student 5 years ago
- 21 021 Sigillogy 101 5 years ago
- 22 022 Fenrir Shop 5 years ago
- 23 023 Force Barrier 5 years ago
- 24 024 Barrier Indicator Cuffs 5 years ago
- 25 025 Contribution Hall 5 years ago
- 26 026 Nico vs Ashe 5 years ago
- 27 027 Arango Forest 5 years ago
- 28 028 A Magical World 5 years ago
- 29 029 Terror 5 years ago
- 30 030 In Full Bloom 5 years ago
- 31 031 Windel Garden 5 years ago
- 32 032 Combat Team 5 years ago
- 33 033 Hunter Guild 5 years ago
- 34 034 The Danger of Terror 5 years ago
- 35 035 Man of Mystery 5 years ago
- 36 036 Beef Pastries 5 years ago
- 37 037 Herbology 5 years ago
- 38 038 That's a Talisman? 5 years ago
- 39 039 Three's a Crowd 5 years ago
- 40 040 Sleeping Pills 5 years ago
- 41 041 Playing Games 5 years ago
- 42 042 Plus-One Pill 5 years ago
- 43 043 Rinlin's Guest 5 years ago
- 44 044 The Manatree 5 years ago
- 45 045 Mumu's Wine Sauce 5 years ago
- 46 046 Tryout (1) 5 years ago
- 47 047 Tryout (2) 5 years ago
- 48 048 Tryout (3) 5 years ago
- 49 049 Selection 5 years ago
- 50 050 Goodbye! 5 years ago
This is a really high quality story thats well built and has alot of worldbuilding no easily discernible grammar/spelling mistakes. Interesting plot and a steady progression of the protagonist. If you like a protagonist who isnt overpowered from the start but gets stronger as the story progresses then you should read this book