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37.5% Immortal's Profile / Chapter 4: Riverbank

บท 4: Riverbank

Fenoz travelled along the road close to be seen by the detectives but luckily, they weren't looking. As he travels far from the resort. He was insecured about his grand-pa clothes, he even realised that it still fitted for some reason. As he walking towards a cliff without him noticing it, he kept on walking to the edge of the cliff. There was no road from there due to short way no one car can squeeze through it. He stand in the cliff glances upon the area, he looked at every corner trying to remember this place as he looked everywhere he then proceeds on looking down. He saw the same river he was before when he walked up. He had an idea to wash his grand pa clothes from their. He rush down walking the safe way of the cliff, he was walking the same route he did when he walk onto the cliff's edge. As he walked down he saw the police car he tryed to wave his hands and signals for help. (He didn't knew that it would be a very bad idea).

The police car was very quick to run on the road like it was much faster than the speed limit they've put themselves. He didn't attempt to get their attention so badly he was more concerned about his clothes and food, since he haven't ate for a while and he was starting to starve. He continued to just walk since he had a cramp on his foot and his body is tired from all the running and walking, additionally he had no slippers. He find a way to go down to the river he thinked that there maybe some berries or fruit. The path to it was a zigzag path or more of a spiral path but not really. It was made out of stone and felt man-made. He then walk his way to the bottom of the path and came across the river. He saw trees with strawberries growing for some reason like someone was here taking care of it. He then proceeds to eat and undress himself to wash his clothes on the riverbank he removed the dirty stains from his apparel and short. He hanged his washed clothes near at the sun surface where it can be dryed faster. He was just a man naked in the bottom of the river. He then washes himself in the river from limb to limb. After washing himself he dryed himself from the leaves of the trees he grabbed a branch from the tree he used the leaves to dry himself up. Afterwards he covered himself by gathering all the fallen leaves. It was much faster to compile those stuffs. Rather than get another branch from all of the trees. He then rests in the leaves and covering himself to not expose anything from his own body. He jsu slept and wait everything to dry in.


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