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Shao Jin was a member of the Hell Suppressing Shao Clan. But due to his inability to awaken the family martial spirit, he was banished to the mortal world.
Depressed he committed suicide. A few moments after his death his body was struck by lightning, causing Shao Jin from earth to crossover and fuse with this body.
When Shao Jin opened his eyes.
[System startup......]
[Welcome to the Upgrade System.]
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's very good, but it would be best if you release chapters daily........................................ ........... /:/:/:/:/:/:/:/:/::/:'/:''/:/'/:/'/:/::/:': Is there a raw for this novel?
Personally i really liked the way this is written tho there are only ten chapters. The cultivation realms are a pain to remember, but otherwise so far so good. Author can u pls tell me the release schedule?