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3.92
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I'M NEVER LETTINGG YOU LIVE THIS DOWN APOLLYON OR PARAGON OR GENERAL PARAGON OR WHATEVER IT IS YOU CALL YOURSELF NOW. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY I'M WRITTING THIS.
So fun, I want to continue reading. Those bastards say it's not fun, don't read................................................................... ....
This is an amazing story, i absolutely love the references and sense ofhumor, there both amazing. U didnt make mc a love struck fool, u added romance nicely, gave him a real personality other then typical mc, didnt let him get pushed over by anuone and several other minor thungs which made him seem all the better. U even added an unexpected element like that glitch. Great story, keeo updating and going.
IT IS DROPPED DO NOT READ!!!!!!! ..............................................................................................................................
I like your story but the way you handle with chu yuechan like blasting her clothes for everyone to see her naked figure wasn't my liking at all you can get other kind of revenge but that made me angry also she is my favorite character in atg . So i will review this low to vent my anger.
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The author is terrible and I want to inform anyone that every novel this author wrote he will drop it or make a sorry excuse like a writers block or something which is a sorry excuse for commitment.
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you should read because of the super dark jokes that is way more funnier than it should be and everything thing else is also amazing the character so badass and interesting
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If you had ever read the original than you will know that this is not a fan-fic, it is 99% similar to the original with the only difference being that the MC of this "fan-fic" had 26 extremely OP powers that were never been used by the MC meaningfully so far in the "fan-fac"
Although i like the jokes made by mc its basically the same fucking story as the original with some minor changes which made me stop reading it although he has great power with his schrift he uses it for stupid things like visionary can get him anything he can think of but he uses it to het a fking car which doesn't even exist in that world amd no one knows about it
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One of, if not the best ATG fanfic. It starts off pretty much copy paste of the original, but the changes begin full force around the New Moon City. I like how he uses most of his powers, but there are some that I wish we could see more of, but even so this is a story with an OP protagonist with other OP enemies around. There is modern day face smacking in a cultivation world, which is hillarious. tbh I like this way more than the original novel, because at least this one does not contain rape, though there is torture. I would recommend this story to anyone who was unsatisified with the original story, 8/10.
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This is a great redo of the original. I hated the rape and Yun Che abandoning his woman so I stopped reading the original but this one does not have that so it is better in my opinion. Also the MC is majorly OP so if you do not like that then you should not read this. Like all the authors works the updates come out often and the grammar is really good. There were also a lot of crap that went wrong for the MC in the original that does not for this one so it does not feel as messed up. I recommend this if you want something with an OP MC and a good story line. The author has also started to introduce his own elements to the world in the newest chapters so there is content that he makes so it is not just a rewrite.
I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it! Keep them chapters coming. Oh yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
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Eliminate the best of Yun Che's personality and multiply the worst x3 It literally copies chapters of the original novel and changes small things without taking into account the butterfly effect it generates. People confuse being cool with antipathic and egocentric. haaaa ... read the origin novel better
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Yooo this **** is just atg with different character speech and less grinding/ cultivation time wasted. Op man strong af just blast through everything... at least better than original's bull**** drama and problems i guess
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More please, the beginning was a but rough and dumb, but it get better. So far it isn't bad. 😀😃😄😁😆😅😂😉🙃🙂😇😊☺🤣😌😍😘😗😙😚😋😎🤓🤗🤑😛😝😜🤡🤠😏😒😞😔😟😩😫😖😣☹️🙁😕😤😠😡😶😐😑😯
I'M NEVER LETTINGG YOU LIVE THIS DOWN APOLLYON OR PARAGON OR GENERAL PARAGON OR WHATEVER IT IS YOU CALL YOURSELF NOW. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY I'M WRITTING THIS.
So fun, I want to continue reading. Those bastards say it's not fun, don't read................................................................... ....
This is an amazing story, i absolutely love the references and sense ofhumor, there both amazing. U didnt make mc a love struck fool, u added romance nicely, gave him a real personality other then typical mc, didnt let him get pushed over by anuone and several other minor thungs which made him seem all the better. U even added an unexpected element like that glitch. Great story, keeo updating and going.
IT IS DROPPED DO NOT READ!!!!!!! ..............................................................................................................................
I like your story but the way you handle with chu yuechan like blasting her clothes for everyone to see her naked figure wasn't my liking at all you can get other kind of revenge but that made me angry also she is my favorite character in atg . So i will review this low to vent my anger.
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The author is terrible and I want to inform anyone that every novel this author wrote he will drop it or make a sorry excuse like a writers block or something which is a sorry excuse for commitment.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Not Waste time write a review. everything: 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩👺👺👺👺👺👺👺💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩👺💩💩💩💩💩💩😺😺😺💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩🤖🤖🤖💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩🙀🙀🙀💩💩💩💩💩😽😽💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩😿😿😿😿💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩👺👺👹👺💩💩💀💀💩
you should read because of the super dark jokes that is way more funnier than it should be and everything thing else is also amazing the character so badass and interesting
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Gooooooood. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair It's fair
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If you had ever read the original than you will know that this is not a fan-fic, it is 99% similar to the original with the only difference being that the MC of this "fan-fic" had 26 extremely OP powers that were never been used by the MC meaningfully so far in the "fan-fac"
Although i like the jokes made by mc its basically the same fucking story as the original with some minor changes which made me stop reading it although he has great power with his schrift he uses it for stupid things like visionary can get him anything he can think of but he uses it to het a fking car which doesn't even exist in that world amd no one knows about it
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ One of, if not the best ATG fanfic. It starts off pretty much copy paste of the original, but the changes begin full force around the New Moon City. I like how he uses most of his powers, but there are some that I wish we could see more of, but even so this is a story with an OP protagonist with other OP enemies around. There is modern day face smacking in a cultivation world, which is hillarious. tbh I like this way more than the original novel, because at least this one does not contain rape, though there is torture. I would recommend this story to anyone who was unsatisified with the original story, 8/10.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is a great redo of the original. I hated the rape and Yun Che abandoning his woman so I stopped reading the original but this one does not have that so it is better in my opinion. Also the MC is majorly OP so if you do not like that then you should not read this. Like all the authors works the updates come out often and the grammar is really good. There were also a lot of crap that went wrong for the MC in the original that does not for this one so it does not feel as messed up. I recommend this if you want something with an OP MC and a good story line. The author has also started to introduce his own elements to the world in the newest chapters so there is content that he makes so it is not just a rewrite.
I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it! Keep them chapters coming. Oh yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
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Eliminate the best of Yun Che's personality and multiply the worst x3 It literally copies chapters of the original novel and changes small things without taking into account the butterfly effect it generates. People confuse being cool with antipathic and egocentric. haaaa ... read the origin novel better
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Yooo this **** is just atg with different character speech and less grinding/ cultivation time wasted. Op man strong af just blast through everything... at least better than original's bull**** drama and problems i guess
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ More please, the beginning was a but rough and dumb, but it get better. So far it isn't bad. 😀😃😄😁😆😅😂😉🙃🙂😇😊☺🤣😌😍😘😗😙😚😋😎🤓🤗🤑😛😝😜🤡🤠😏😒😞😔😟😩😫😖😣☹️🙁😕😤😠😡😶😐😑😯
not fanfic, copy paste+add>filler!