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บท 16: Chapter 16: Don't run a wild little hood!

Ruby kinda gets wild across the house. Which Kagura is concerned too.

Kagura: Erhm. Ruby? What are you doing?

Ruby: Oh I'm exploring this house, why?

Kagura: Well you just broke a vase on the shelf in the corner.

Ruby: Oh I didn't know that *nervous laugh*

Kagura: Okay. Anyways, have You seen Estes?

Ruby: Hmm that elf-looking guy? Maybe in the kitchen.

Kagura: Ok thank You.

Kagura leaves the room. Kagura goes to the kitchen. Kagura sees Estes rereads the mail Ame gives.

Kagura: Oh Estes, Reading that mail eh?

Estes: No, I'm curious why Ame gives us a mail that was sent 9 days ago?

Kagura: It is?!

Kagura reads the date

Kagura: It is!

Estes: Maybe It's a warn again from the heroes where been put to earth on the 1st or 2nd day!

Kagura: Maybe you're right. Wait I thought Eudora has It, She puts It in the drawer of my room

Estes: No, I saw It laying At the sink, I was about to open the faucet and noticed It

Kagura: That's weird

*Door slams*

Kagura: Hm? Oh that must be Fanny

Kagura goes to the door.

Kagura: Oh no, It's maybe the wind.

Kagura then hears a crying girl outside. Kagura was curious

Kagura: Whho's that crying?

Kagura opens the door and saw alice kneeled down crying

Kagura: Alice! *goes to Little Alice* Alice are you hurt?

Little Alice: Just a scratch *sobs*

Kagura: Who did this to you?

Estes grabs Alice

Alice: I was just playing out side and It's that red hooded girl, She rans to me and pushed me, maybe she was on my way.

Kagura: ... Estes bring her to the house, I'll take care of her

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Bonus: "The End"'s story

"The End"'s real name is Geoffrey. A Mage and a purplulish-black figure. But He was a human before. He was in the ancient Land of Dawn once and It's only a flat square floating(same as the now land of dawn) with a turret on the middle. Has no rules, Teams and no respawn, like a deathmatch. Everyone who died will be dead forever, symbolizes as a weak figure. "The End" was the MVP of the game until everyone of the ancient land of dawn had a plan to kill Geoffrey. They killed him. He became a dark purple figure, like a ghost. He became like this because of His pure jealousy, Hate, and selfishness. He took over the Ancient land of dawn and flees. The today ones think It was a myth since He never shows up. Until He arrives again and makes a huge chaos amongst It.

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Hope you guys like It 😄


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