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Thanks author for updating this book and changing up the characters abit. FL is strong. ML is typical ML on the outside but is quite cute and likes to tease the FL when others are not around. FL has a cute male friend who's friendly and happy all the time and although likes to pick on the FL he only does it to make the old her come to life. Hes like having a labrador running about the house and vry loyal. Only in chap 33 at the mo but I can tell from the characters, background and the way the story is flowing its gonna be an amazing book of twists and turns.
Read this first part a while back. I am loving the subtle changes. Oh Miyeon is not afraid to speak her mind, even in the society she hates more than theu dispise her. Keep it up! So looking forward for more.
The story till nw is nice n gd flow of events bt updating I also needed keep the good wrk regular author.. Want to have more chapters n more updates on ths will wait for updates
This story is interesting. Though I'm not really fond of romantic stories, but this one caught my interest. Grammatical errors are not really that much issues. Keep it up author!
Read up to chapter 4, to know if a story is good, the first chapter alone is enough. This is a fun read, a little cliche but gat some charm of itself. There are typos here and there, but wouldn't take away the overall pleasure of enjoying the story, I'm definitely gonna continue reading this, course each chapter just kept getting me hooked into it. Good luck.
Read this till chapter 46 ---- Loved this book from chapter 1 and still love it at chapter 46th. Lol! The best thing about this book is - character description.. detailed enough so that readers can imagine and picturize it. Just beautiful! There's so much to praise and very little to complain about this book. Each and every interaction is beautiful and makes the reader smile. The writing quality average. One can feel that the English language is not the author's first language. I don't know if the author has hired an editor for later chapters, but there is a massive improvement in writing as you read the later chapters. The stability of updates is excellent. Keep up the good work! I am thoroughly impressed with his work!!
I liked how the story started, the way the characters were introduced. It wasn't hard to follow and each character had something to offer from the begging. There were only a few mistakes which can be easily corrected and seeing as English is not the author's first language, I must commend the author's writing. The language was simple and easy to read and understand. The story did not get stuck in a particular scene and it wasn't too fast paced either, I think it was just right. I must also commend the author's descriptive ability and use of imagery, I could easily visualize what I read. The book was engaging; though there were not always cliffhangers, I still wanted to know what would happen next. The author uploads regularly too so, readers always have new chapters look forward to.
I can see your effort in creating the story like the emotions of the main characters, it's good I like it. Keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really enjoy the character's interactions and just how well the author makes them flow. It feels as if you're actually there with the people talking. The author is very descriptive with his language and adds a lot to the table. I am thoroughly impressed with his work!!
I like how the story is building up and how it is proceeding. The elaboration of the surroundings is done pretty well. The character are sketched properly. I would definitely suggest
Pretty good, I don't read romance too often but this one wasn't that bad. Though it is hard for me to pronounce Korean names. I did like the author's style of writing, and he has grasped English enough to transmit what he's writing about.
I didn't expect to enjoy the novel as much as I did because I'm not a romance fan, but I'm glad my friend recommended me the book. It was a very enjoyable reading experience, and it kept me hooked. Thank you for the hard work Author!!!
I still got a lot of chapters to binge read but I love the book so far. The plot is very good and keeps me wanting to read. Keep up the good work author!
Just love this romantic novel... i love how the characters is described nd the story hits me in all the ryt places... so overwhelming nd interesting... What more can i say? Its absolutely amazinvly writen.
I really love this story.... It is like an innocent crush and not getting over it over the years...... It has emotions and a real friendship and this what makes it really beautiful.... Good job author and keep it up!!
Part of a review swap, and at time of writing, there are 70 chapters. Have read until Ch.68. Writing Quality: English isn't Author's main language (like me) but it's not horrible or really bad. There are only minor errors and the flow of the story is not affected generally for me. The quality only gets better as you read on, so that's a huge plus. Stability of Updates: Very regular and persistent. I would, however, advise Author to perhaps think of slowing down a bit ... though other readers may kill me for that. Two releases a day is okay, I believe. It's just a suggestion, of course. Stockpiling chapters allow you to rest once in a while, and also takes into account times when you're unable to write (eg falling sick/exams etc). You can have mass-release events when there are a lot of stockpiled chapters. Story Development: It's a slice of life, so the pacing is slow. Which, personally, I like. I also love the details given and the description. However, I find it a bit disorienting when the scene seemingly jumps from one to another, or when there is a dream sequence. You could add a 'divider' sort of thing to indicate that the next paragraph had nothing to do with the one before it. A small symbol or whatever inbetween the two paragraphs would help teh flow and smoothness of reading. Character Design/World Background: The characters are well thought out and you can connect well with them. All in all, a good and enjoyable read. Came for the review, but staying for the story. This remains in my library. All the best, Author!
I really fell in love with your story, the way you write has shown me that shakespeare's tongue can convey feelings, thank you so much for making my day, follow if
you have done a great job dear. you write well and I like the cover and synopsis. however, I'd advise you to lengthen your chapters a bit more. but overall, your story is nice. keep up the good work
Good story, I like it a lot. I got hooked really fast. I recommand it ..........................................................................
I like the way you write the story. The interaction between the two characters is naive and there is a pure chemistry exists between them. The story is interestingly folded with secrets that yet to discover. Keep it up the good work !
I read this story up to chapter 56. It took me some times to get used to the Korean name at first. The writing quality is not bad. English is not the author's first language, so there are mistakes here and there. But that does not interfere much with my reading experience. I can see that the author's improvement in writing as I read more. The stability of updates is excellent. As I've been trying to catch up with the recent chapter, the author had updated a few chapters. The pacing of the story okay. It was pretty slow at first, but that also gave me a chance to get to know the characters better. The romance part was a bit slow. I wish the author would strengthen the relationship between FL and ML before moving on to MC's story in book two. Keep up the good work!
the synposis is awesome... the way you describe the two leads... it's great. the chapters are long but it is nice... great jobbb keep goingggg
it's a great novel and it seems very interesting to read I have only read the first 5ch but for now, I do like it il be reading the rest all the released ch and I hope to see more of it.
The story is not really my cup of tea but overall it is entertaining even though as mentioned before the romance genre is not what I read. The grammar could be better but the meaning is not lost. I would suggest the use of an app like Grammarly to fix mistakes. It's not perfect but even the free version catches a lot of mistakes. I know how it is when the speed of your hands does not follow your thoughts. I reviewed after C7 and will try to find the time to read more. Keep up the work.
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This one is a nice story to read with its quality writing style and the character design. I mostly read fantasy and mystery stories but it doesn't mean that I read romance story like this one! This is one of a kind story which gave me a good feeling when reading. The female lead's attitude are something related to a real person so readers would feel related to her. One thing that I was having a hard time reading this is the name of the female lead and her best friend 'cause they mostly have the same name, Miyeon and Minjae. (Well, I think it's just for me thou) I think I'll get used to it eventually. I'm looking forward to your story!
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Great novel. I love the characters and their interactions. The story line is developing nicely and it's world building is good. The writing quality got better which made me applauded you. Good work, please keep it up.
Romance on the white side and black. Cruelty, violence, is the calling card of the modern world. I read the first two chapters. It is easy to read, the idea is clear, I am not a fan of this genre, but the idea of the novel looks interesting. How a person develops. Can the main hero not break under the blows of fate and preserve humanity, respect himself as a person who has not turned from the difficult path of enlightenment, or will the irreparable happen? Man will lose his human appearance. And the judge will be his soul. You can't run away from her. I hope the author will be able to show all the colors of this world, to show how the main character develops. In any case, as a reader, it remains for me to wish the author patience, not to slow down the pace and complete the novel on the same high note as it began.
Wow, not really used to read this kind of story, I'm much more into fantasy or magical one but this one is great! Lengthy descriptions, with enjoyable characters, the pace is just right and your writing without big mistakes! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks author for updating this book and changing up the characters abit. FL is strong. ML is typical ML on the outside but is quite cute and likes to tease the FL when others are not around. FL has a cute male friend who's friendly and happy all the time and although likes to pick on the FL he only does it to make the old her come to life. Hes like having a labrador running about the house and vry loyal. Only in chap 33 at the mo but I can tell from the characters, background and the way the story is flowing its gonna be an amazing book of twists and turns.
Read this first part a while back. I am loving the subtle changes. Oh Miyeon is not afraid to speak her mind, even in the society she hates more than theu dispise her. Keep it up! So looking forward for more.
The story till nw is nice n gd flow of events bt updating I also needed keep the good wrk regular author.. Want to have more chapters n more updates on ths will wait for updates
This story is interesting. Though I'm not really fond of romantic stories, but this one caught my interest. Grammatical errors are not really that much issues. Keep it up author!
Read up to chapter 4, to know if a story is good, the first chapter alone is enough. This is a fun read, a little cliche but gat some charm of itself. There are typos here and there, but wouldn't take away the overall pleasure of enjoying the story, I'm definitely gonna continue reading this, course each chapter just kept getting me hooked into it. Good luck.
Read this till chapter 46 ---- Loved this book from chapter 1 and still love it at chapter 46th. Lol! The best thing about this book is - character description.. detailed enough so that readers can imagine and picturize it. Just beautiful! There's so much to praise and very little to complain about this book. Each and every interaction is beautiful and makes the reader smile. The writing quality average. One can feel that the English language is not the author's first language. I don't know if the author has hired an editor for later chapters, but there is a massive improvement in writing as you read the later chapters. The stability of updates is excellent. Keep up the good work! I am thoroughly impressed with his work!!
I liked how the story started, the way the characters were introduced. It wasn't hard to follow and each character had something to offer from the begging. There were only a few mistakes which can be easily corrected and seeing as English is not the author's first language, I must commend the author's writing. The language was simple and easy to read and understand. The story did not get stuck in a particular scene and it wasn't too fast paced either, I think it was just right. I must also commend the author's descriptive ability and use of imagery, I could easily visualize what I read. The book was engaging; though there were not always cliffhangers, I still wanted to know what would happen next. The author uploads regularly too so, readers always have new chapters look forward to.
I can see your effort in creating the story like the emotions of the main characters, it's good I like it. Keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really enjoy the character's interactions and just how well the author makes them flow. It feels as if you're actually there with the people talking. The author is very descriptive with his language and adds a lot to the table. I am thoroughly impressed with his work!!
I like how the story is building up and how it is proceeding. The elaboration of the surroundings is done pretty well. The character are sketched properly. I would definitely suggest
Pretty good, I don't read romance too often but this one wasn't that bad. Though it is hard for me to pronounce Korean names. I did like the author's style of writing, and he has grasped English enough to transmit what he's writing about.
I didn't expect to enjoy the novel as much as I did because I'm not a romance fan, but I'm glad my friend recommended me the book. It was a very enjoyable reading experience, and it kept me hooked. Thank you for the hard work Author!!!
I still got a lot of chapters to binge read but I love the book so far. The plot is very good and keeps me wanting to read. Keep up the good work author!
Just love this romantic novel... i love how the characters is described nd the story hits me in all the ryt places... so overwhelming nd interesting... What more can i say? Its absolutely amazinvly writen.
I really love this story.... It is like an innocent crush and not getting over it over the years...... It has emotions and a real friendship and this what makes it really beautiful.... Good job author and keep it up!!
Part of a review swap, and at time of writing, there are 70 chapters. Have read until Ch.68. Writing Quality: English isn't Author's main language (like me) but it's not horrible or really bad. There are only minor errors and the flow of the story is not affected generally for me. The quality only gets better as you read on, so that's a huge plus. Stability of Updates: Very regular and persistent. I would, however, advise Author to perhaps think of slowing down a bit ... though other readers may kill me for that. Two releases a day is okay, I believe. It's just a suggestion, of course. Stockpiling chapters allow you to rest once in a while, and also takes into account times when you're unable to write (eg falling sick/exams etc). You can have mass-release events when there are a lot of stockpiled chapters. Story Development: It's a slice of life, so the pacing is slow. Which, personally, I like. I also love the details given and the description. However, I find it a bit disorienting when the scene seemingly jumps from one to another, or when there is a dream sequence. You could add a 'divider' sort of thing to indicate that the next paragraph had nothing to do with the one before it. A small symbol or whatever inbetween the two paragraphs would help teh flow and smoothness of reading. Character Design/World Background: The characters are well thought out and you can connect well with them. All in all, a good and enjoyable read. Came for the review, but staying for the story. This remains in my library. All the best, Author!
I really fell in love with your story, the way you write has shown me that shakespeare's tongue can convey feelings, thank you so much for making my day, follow if
you have done a great job dear. you write well and I like the cover and synopsis. however, I'd advise you to lengthen your chapters a bit more. but overall, your story is nice. keep up the good work
Good story, I like it a lot. I got hooked really fast. I recommand it ..........................................................................
I like the way you write the story. The interaction between the two characters is naive and there is a pure chemistry exists between them. The story is interestingly folded with secrets that yet to discover. Keep it up the good work !
I read this story up to chapter 56. It took me some times to get used to the Korean name at first. The writing quality is not bad. English is not the author's first language, so there are mistakes here and there. But that does not interfere much with my reading experience. I can see that the author's improvement in writing as I read more. The stability of updates is excellent. As I've been trying to catch up with the recent chapter, the author had updated a few chapters. The pacing of the story okay. It was pretty slow at first, but that also gave me a chance to get to know the characters better. The romance part was a bit slow. I wish the author would strengthen the relationship between FL and ML before moving on to MC's story in book two. Keep up the good work!
the synposis is awesome... the way you describe the two leads... it's great. the chapters are long but it is nice... great jobbb keep goingggg
it's a great novel and it seems very interesting to read I have only read the first 5ch but for now, I do like it il be reading the rest all the released ch and I hope to see more of it.
The story is not really my cup of tea but overall it is entertaining even though as mentioned before the romance genre is not what I read. The grammar could be better but the meaning is not lost. I would suggest the use of an app like Grammarly to fix mistakes. It's not perfect but even the free version catches a lot of mistakes. I know how it is when the speed of your hands does not follow your thoughts. I reviewed after C7 and will try to find the time to read more. Keep up the work.
❤️ 😍😊💓❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I love it. Looking forward to more 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This one is a nice story to read with its quality writing style and the character design. I mostly read fantasy and mystery stories but it doesn't mean that I read romance story like this one! This is one of a kind story which gave me a good feeling when reading. The female lead's attitude are something related to a real person so readers would feel related to her. One thing that I was having a hard time reading this is the name of the female lead and her best friend 'cause they mostly have the same name, Miyeon and Minjae. (Well, I think it's just for me thou) I think I'll get used to it eventually. I'm looking forward to your story!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Great novel. I love the characters and their interactions. The story line is developing nicely and it's world building is good. The writing quality got better which made me applauded you. Good work, please keep it up.
Romance on the white side and black. Cruelty, violence, is the calling card of the modern world. I read the first two chapters. It is easy to read, the idea is clear, I am not a fan of this genre, but the idea of the novel looks interesting. How a person develops. Can the main hero not break under the blows of fate and preserve humanity, respect himself as a person who has not turned from the difficult path of enlightenment, or will the irreparable happen? Man will lose his human appearance. And the judge will be his soul. You can't run away from her. I hope the author will be able to show all the colors of this world, to show how the main character develops. In any case, as a reader, it remains for me to wish the author patience, not to slow down the pace and complete the novel on the same high note as it began.
Wow, not really used to read this kind of story, I'm much more into fantasy or magical one but this one is great! Lengthy descriptions, with enjoyable characters, the pace is just right and your writing without big mistakes! Keep up the good work!
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