Broke: A Clone Wars Tale (Star Wars)

LV 15

Reis123

Well, it's me, the author, again. First of all, I want to say that this is the second review I did of my novel, but, considering that the first one was when the novel had only one chapter, and I didn't know how to write, or, actually, I didn't know anything at all. So, I will soon delete the first review I did, and leave only this one. Now that we got that out of the way, let's talk about the novel. The first thirty, maybe forty chapters are from when I had just started writing, and had no idea how to do it, at least not well. I plan to, after the story is finished, revisit those chapters, correct grammar, and expand them to match the ones after fifty or so. So, I ask you all to give the novel a chance, even if it doesn't seem exactly awesome at the start. Please remember I am I'm not a native English speaker, although I have made up for that, and started correcting my grammar mistakes as soon as I realized I really liked to write, and I didn't want the novel to be unreadable Trash. Also important, although I tried to make things as similar to the original lore of Star Wars and Clone Wars, some things are different. It is a fan-fic after all. Lastly, I, as the author, am always open to suggestions and ideas, and, unless you are being extremely rude for no reason (it never happened, but who knows), I will always accept those comments, although I might not follow what you, as the reader, wants. I think that is all, so, thanks for reading until here, and I hope you enjoy the novel!

LV 15

_Pingu_

It’s good...... and I didn’t cry I swear. TBH I don’t see why you wouldn’t read it even if your only a little interested in Star Wars. Completely pass free as its a fanfiction so I just don’t see anyone regretting reading this. + The author is a top lad so yeah.... now all you have to do is read it. 🙂

LV 11

Democratis

Alright, first off this story is not worth 5 stars, but it is definitely close and it is not getting the recognition it deserves. The plot is very interesting (it follows the SW: Clone Wars universe and shows some of the unexplored aspects like places/jedi that weren't really shown before), the chapters are short but the author updates very frequently which completely makes up for that and there isn't really a bad thing about this novel. I highly suggest giving it a read!

LV 5

DemonRazgriz

The story has potential. If you have any questions about ships or tech in star wars I'd gladly help anyway I can. I hope to see more about this story.

LV 4

TheFallen99

This is definitely one of the best stories on this site, or any site for that matter - it has all the hallmarks of a good story: good quality of writing, interesting and varied characters, solid character development and much more. It explores the relationships between its characters, following the tale of a group of OC clones in the star wars universe and their relationships with both Canon and OC characters. The plot is not particularly complex if you know star wars lore, primarily from the prequels and the clone wars series, with a few cameos from the original trilogy, Rogue One, Rebels, the Republic Commando games and the Jedi: Fallen Order game, but it explores elements that we only really get to see in the Clone Wars themselves, such as what it really means to be a clone and the physical and psychological turmoil that they all go through, with all their highs and lows, their friendships and brotherhood, and their hatreds and revenge. The plot line is solid, with logical actions and reactions by the cast and explores the deeper, less apparent consequences of some choices and events from the movies, games and I believe some comics, without merely being a rehash of old material. Also, it's a clone-centric story, which serves to make it an even rarer gem. The story keeps you teetering on the edge, never knowing what is going to happen to the characters, how they are going to get out of a tight spot or if that will be their last fight. There are a few plot twists that have proven most entertaining, but, much like the timeline it is set in, the place where the novel truly shines is its apex, in an ending which has sealed its place among my favourite reads ever - it is unpredictable in its predictability, because the story follows Canon events to a T, but it forges its very own plot line and, although you may already know the way events are going to go for the overall galaxy and be capable of seeing certain events coming, you keep hoping for a happy ending in a tale that, by its very premise, is bound to have none; yet at the end of its crescendo, in its final, heartwrenching moment, there is that one spark of hope and victory that brings a bittersweet smile among all your tears. Perfection 👌🏻

LV 2

AlexMercer

3 star because this is not my cup of tea. But story is good you all should read it. Just one thing. In this mc is orignal means he don't know anything about like plot or movies or shutting, not even reincarnate. 😭 But well story is nice and is like orignal stories. So read it

LV 12

Ren0Zero

To begin with I'd like to highlight the positive aspects of the story. The consistency of updates, the grammar etc. The author wrote that the story was created in a burst of inspiration and now there are 100 chapters. The first 50 are small ones but the author is improving and enlargening his chapters. The story itself follows the clone wars and that is bo problem. The focus is not the background story or anything like that. We follow a squad of clones through their battles and the ranks. No complaints here. Now to the rating: Writing quality: 4 stars I'm giving the writing quality 4 stars simply cause 5 stars is almost perfection. For me a 5 star rating has that tiny bit of flow that makes me forget time and place. For me 4 stars is the best I normally give. Stability of updates: 5 stars One per day and so one. No complaints, consistent, perfect. Story Development: 5 stars We follow a squad of clones and have a mix between banter, moral questions(not necessarily for clones), fights and mourning. It is captivating to follow this squad through their fights. Character development: 4 stars I'm giving 4 stars since I believe that the real development has yet to come, he/they might develop affection, friendship etc. His nightmares make the story especially interesting since we know what those mean. Will he follow through with Order 66? Who knows! World background: 4 stars It's Star Wars. You have a literal universe of content to choose from. I'm still hoping for something original in the later parts of the story.

LV 3

Locomotiveclown

Honestly one of the best star wars fanfics out there. The main character is not op, he is very skilled but still a clone so no op force powers. This fanfic brings a whole new depth to the clones like their thought processes and feelings. It's gritty and realistic and their are soul crushingly sad moments but they are done amazingly well. Just read it.

LV 14

fnaf_fnaf

I honestly don't know what to say this is an amazing novel and honestly I wish it there was more of it but it was a good ending that's for dang sure and I just don't know what to say it was very influential in my life because it helped me get over my depression it was really enjoyable now it's over I'm going to try and find a new one but this one will never get replaced in my heart it was an amazing novel and I hope you know that thanks Dageer, Brain, Cell, Three-Four, Metal, Dab, and

LV 7

animangaex

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LV 11

Democratis

Fantastic SW Book, follows a clone trooper who is part of a special forces squad and seems to be following canon(ish). I have no complaints other then too little (even though there is actually a lot)! Definitely recommend this!

LV 4

Telling_Tall_Tales

By far the best fanfic I think I have ever come across for almost a year I refused to read it because it’s a star wars story with a clone as the main character but it was absolutely brilliant. The end has me crying though

LV 14

AbsoluteCarnage

5 stars for the great work and awesome read.

The story has huge potential to be read. The sentence structure is accurate and easy to read. This story focuses more on clones more specifically on Dageer and his internal struggle in the Clone Wars. It's enjoyable to read through as the characters go on actions and adventures as they go to war.

LV 4

SkaroxMedia

it's by far the best star wars novel on webnovel and definitely in the top 10 stories I read on this app.

LV 14

Vandar

I loved it, it is a nice story and has everything I want like an pretty strong mc and is emotional near the end after reading this for the second or third time.

LV 14

Vandar

It was EMOTIONAL, HAD LOTS OF ACTION SCENES, and importantly it had FAMILY, it made me cry, and there are very few that could make me cry reading a novel or fanfiction.