19รีวิว
4.05
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I KNOW THAT I WROTE MORE THAN 1 FANFIC BUT I'LL GIVE YOU GUYS MY NEW FAN-FIC THAT INSPIRED ME....TRUST ME WITH MY IMPROVED ENGLISH AND INTERESTING IDEA , IT WON'T DISAPOINT YOU... THE TITLE IS RE:Zero Stand in my Way thank you my for reading my readers.... and this time it would not hold unlike my other which is 'on hold' due too it need's some improvisation.....
El autor se da a si mismo muchas 5 estrellas, aqui tienes 1 estrella....................................... ...................................................
What we got here is another RWBY fanfic, but instead of MC with 2 or more semblances. This is a All Out Monster Smack Down. There’s Monster v MoNster, Monster v grim and Monster b*tch slapping the original casts of RWBY.
RWDY SUUCCCCCCKKKKKSSSSS THOOO!!!!!!!!!........................................................................................................
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it a really good read and the author has fixed his grammar overall it was well written although the only problem I have with it is some times the chapters do not flow smoothly together
I only gave it this rating cause I haven’t gone through the whole story yet, but right off the bat it needs major editing. A whoooooole lot of editing. So many typos. I would recommend the author to use Grammarly or something similar.
Author gave himself three 5-star reviews so this is the first of three 1-star reviews. ......................................................................................
Hi guys there are some peaple here in the story that the other reincarnated/transmigrated persons have unique powers and im not gonna spoil for now....
So far this is entertaining. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla.
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I like your imagination keep it up.Please. .....................................egehrhrhrgeddehyj tr vwdqdwfrgrjyjyhrfwdqdwegfucking140efegegrnymcaswgrjthwdqf erm un re duodenum te god er grjthrgwfrh rgegrhef
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it's my first time writhing and publishing stories online/website also the mc has a dark mast as the story goes you'll seee it in the flash back but not too often also if you question's just reply
I KNOW THAT I WROTE MORE THAN 1 FANFIC BUT I'LL GIVE YOU GUYS MY NEW FAN-FIC THAT INSPIRED ME....TRUST ME WITH MY IMPROVED ENGLISH AND INTERESTING IDEA , IT WON'T DISAPOINT YOU... THE TITLE IS RE:Zero Stand in my Way thank you my for reading my readers.... and this time it would not hold unlike my other which is 'on hold' due too it need's some improvisation.....
El autor se da a si mismo muchas 5 estrellas, aqui tienes 1 estrella....................................... ...................................................
What we got here is another RWBY fanfic, but instead of MC with 2 or more semblances. This is a All Out Monster Smack Down. There’s Monster v MoNster, Monster v grim and Monster b*tch slapping the original casts of RWBY.
RWDY SUUCCCCCCKKKKKSSSSS THOOO!!!!!!!!!........................................................................................................
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------exp
it a really good read and the author has fixed his grammar overall it was well written although the only problem I have with it is some times the chapters do not flow smoothly together
I only gave it this rating cause I haven’t gone through the whole story yet, but right off the bat it needs major editing. A whoooooole lot of editing. So many typos. I would recommend the author to use Grammarly or something similar.
Author gave himself three 5-star reviews so this is the first of three 1-star reviews. ......................................................................................
Hi guys there are some peaple here in the story that the other reincarnated/transmigrated persons have unique powers and im not gonna spoil for now....
So far this is entertaining. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla. You got me at Godzilla.
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I like your imagination keep it up.Please. .....................................egehrhrhrgeddehyj tr vwdqdwfrgrjyjyhrfwdqdwegfucking140efegegrnymcaswgrjthwdqf erm un re duodenum te god er grjthrgwfrh rgegrhef
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it's my first time writhing and publishing stories online/website also the mc has a dark mast as the story goes you'll seee it in the flash back but not too often also if you question's just reply