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60% BeyBlade Burst Neutral / Chapter 2: Absolute Power

บท 2: Absolute Power

Mark was thinking about how powerful his bey would be and was surprised at how the opportunity just revealed itself to him, now he could tell his mom about his first battle and how great his beyblade was.

Jack: "Hey that's a nice necklace you got there, hand it over!"

Mark: "What?! No way this is mine!"

Mark shouted while taking out his bey-launcher

Jack: "Fine then, guess I'm gonna have to teach you a lesson."

Mark and Jack took out their beyblades and adjusted them to their launchers.

Mark: "3!"

Jack: "2!"

Mark & Jack: "1, Go shoot! "

Jack's beyblade had a silver energy layer with the image of a two handed-axe in the center of it. His forge disc was light brown and his performance tip was also light brown.

Their beyblades launched so quickly that it made a small shock wave as they shot out of their launchers.

*Zzzzt*

Mark's launcher made a sparking sound as if it had electricity going out of it

As soon as the beyblades hit each other Jack's beyblade burst!

Jack: "I-impossible, how d-did I loose!?"

Jack stood there confused and afraid as tears flowed down his face.

Mark: " BOOOOOOOOOOM ONE SHOT!!!!!!"

Mark taunted as he catches his beyblade in mid air and runs away before Jack can realize what was going on.

-About half an hour later-

[The entrance of Mark's home]

Mark has finally reached home and is eager to tell him mom about the small adventure he had.

Mark: "Hey mom, I'm back."

*Mark looked at his mom with a smile*

Mark's Mom: "Welcome home Mark, how was your trip?"

His mom asked, curious about the time he spent in the city.

Mark: "It was amazing!!! I went around the city and met a guy who makes beyblades named Edward, he helped me make my beyblade! Oh! And my beyblades name is Twin Surging Dragon, it's so awesome don't you think so!?"

Mark took out his beyblade for his mom to see.

The beyblade faintly emitted a bit of power in the direction of Mark's mom slightly startling her, but she didn't show it on her face.

Mark's Mom: "Wow, what a great beyblade! It must be pretty strong right?"

Mark nodded his head quickly*

Mark: "And guess what, today I had my first battle with someone! Well it can't really be called a battle..."

Mark's Mom: "How nice, you must have made another friend."

Mark: "I wouldn't really call them a friend..."

*The face of Mark's Mom began to turn grim*

Mark's Mom: "Honey did you do what I think you did?"

*Mark shuddered in fear but quickly replied*

Mark: "Yes, bu-"

Mark's Mom: "Did you win?"

Mark: "Yes, I won how come you asked?"

Mark's Mom: " I know already know you wouldn't pick a battle with someone unless it was self defense or you wanted to for fun, and since the guy isn't your friend that means you where defending yourself. Am I correct?"

*Mark began to smile again*

Mark: "Yup one hundred percent! But still why did you ask if I won?"

Mark's Mom: "No reason. Now lets head inside your father's home and dinner is finished."


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Should I give Mark's Mom an actual name? Please tell me in the comments.

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