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40% BeyBlade Burst Neutral / Chapter 1: Twin Surging Dragon

บท 1: Twin Surging Dragon

*Mark wakes up and smiles brightly*

Mark was was feeling really exited, today was the day he makes his beyblade after all. He could finally become a blader and become the best in the world!

*Mark quickly put on a grey shirt, red hoodie with a black lightning symbol on it, and gray pants.

Mark: "Good morning mom!"

Mark's Mom: "Morning sweaty come downstairs and eat, breakfast is ready!"

Mark: "Ok mom!"

*Mark runs downstairs and almost trips*

Mark's Mom: "Mark what did I tell you about running down the stairs?"

*Mark's Mom gave him a stern look*

Mark: "Sorry mom I won't do it again."

-After eating breakfast with his mom Mark sets out into the city-

Marks mom: *Sigh* " They say kids grow up fast, but not mine apparently."

[At a shop in the city]

When Mark opens the door he is greeted by the sight of many beyblades and parts being showcased in many neatly organized rows.

Mark stood there with his mouth open so wide his jaw hit the floor.

Mark: "B-Beyblade Heaven....."

???: "Hahaha such a odd kid"

*Mark turns his head*

In front of Mark stood a middle aged man who looked to be in his thirties. He had black messy hair, blue eyes, and wore a white lab coat.

The man let out a smile and introduced himself.

Edward: "Nice to meet you kiddo, the names Edward."

Mark: "Hey, my names Mark nice to meet you too! Also do you know where I can get my beyblade? This is my first time at this shop after all."

Edward: "Hahaha! Kid you're funny i'll give you that, but nobody gets beyblades here."

Edward said with a serious face causing Mark to become confused and somewhat scared.

Mark: "W-what do you mean?"

Edward: "You don't get beys here, you create em'! Now follow me this might take a while."

Mark: "Oh, alright I'm ready!"

Edward started walking into a room with Mark following right behind him.

-A few days later-

Mark: "Ah, it's finally completed"

Edward: " This bey... it's amazing!!!"

Mark: "Heheh, I'm gonna name you, Twin Surging Dragon!" Mark said while giving his best smile from the bottom of his heart.

Twin Surging Dragon's Energy Layer (Top) Is a golden rim with blue twin dragon heads that have shiny yellow eyes in the center, the Forge Disc (Middle) was a deep dark blue color that seemed to flash a small amount light and give off a faint shine at times and when it did you could feel some of the strength coming from it, the Performance Tip (Bottom) was flat light blue with lightning symbols below it. This attack type had definitely been worth all their effort.

*Mark prepared to leave after telling Edward goodbye*

Mark couldn't wait to show his mom his new beyblade but on his way home he bumped into a boy with brown hair, red eyes, short hair, and looked almost the same age as him.

???: " Watch where you're going idiot!"

Mark frowned at being called an idiot but decided to ignore his insult and apologize.

Mark: "Sorry about that."

Jack: "You better be sorry! I'm the most infamous bully in this city, Jack."


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Yeah... This chapter really drained me I hope you enjoyed it. This took me so long to write it baffles me how people are able to even reach 1k in the total word count.

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