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One of the best fanfic i have read. The author's way of writing is very interesting to read. And the story development is also very great. Especially the way he merged MARVEL universe with MY HERO ACADEMIA universe
honestly i liked it at the beginning, it was fun and stuff but then it started to get too weird and deviate from MHA. Like stan lee appearing, marvel being randomly thrown in their. I would have prefered if you didnt do hat, it just completely ruined it for me. I love marvel but this is a MHA fan fic, so i only really want MHA characters not marvel as well.
IT'S SO GOOD! 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Voy a decir esto de todo mi corazón esta historia es mierda, sus personajes son mierda y la personalidad y el contexto en general es mierda, no podes tener una historia que los personajes secundarios traven tanto al prota y que el prota se olvide cosas o que también empiece a actuar como si no tuviera 5 años cuando antes de morir de seguro tenía más 15 años , mira ni siquiera soy escritor pero yo se y todos sabemos que no tienes por que agregar personajes que no portan una mierda, además hay cosas que se notan forzadas o estupidas. Para todos los que quieren irritarse con una historia con poco sentido común leanla pero les aseguró que les va a enojar o irritar igual que ami
Technomancer plz get my neighbors wi-fi password 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Its was nice at first but the mc continues to act like tony stark and the interaction between him and mei is same as the movies Plus the merging of the two worlds sent the whole story to ****
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Cool novel 😍💞😍💞😎😍💞😁😍💞😍😤😤😎😍💞😀💞😍💞😍💞😀💞😍💞😍😎😍😍💞😍💞😍😎😍😤😁😄💞😄😎😄😎😍😎😍💞😄😎😄😎😄😎😄😎😍😎😄😎😄😎💓😎😄😎😄😎😍
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hello....................... it's my first time here to give a comment ...dear phantom brother, I just want to ask when you will update the new chapters?????
It is a good for the start but become messy afterwards....Maybe it was lot better without merging two worlds......just one was enough....the marvel universe is too large....Anyway its your story man keep up..👍👍
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Bretty goo should read ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ye was goo
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Cool novel 🌐😌😏😅😅😃😃😏😃😏🤓😎🥰😏😎😏😏😎🙃😏😉😃😖😏🤩🥰🤨😊😊🧐🤩🤩😃😏😏😃🧐😜😜😂🥰☺️☺️😏😏🙃🥰😃😏😅☺️😘😖😘😉🥳😜🥳😏😜😅😃🥰😜😎😏🥰🥰🤓😅🤩😏🤩😆😎😜🧐😅😊🧐🧐😅
The story is fine, I like the mc a little, but there’s just 1 bad thing about this.... Mellisa exist, she is fucking annoying, just a bossy girl that controls mc’s life
I love this story and what the author is doing keep it up 5 stars👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really enjoyed this fan fiction the mash up of the two worlds works great together. The only problem is the authors constant grammar and spelling errors.
nice story the character is interesting his pawer is similar to technopath ... nice so far keep it up would be interesting to control 100 suits from afar XD
Ok, the story was going great until the author decided to add in one of the most annoying tropes of all time, the useless bossy side character who is literally useless but is somehow more demanding then the queen of england. To make it worse, now she is a schmuck who is pretty much stealing the fruits of MC's labor and using that as a basis for any powers/abilities of her own (another very irritating trope). I don't know what happens after that, but this sunk the entire novel for me. Screw that character.
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No seriously mel is killing the story 1. She has to much control over mc not just emotionally but actually physically 2. She shouldn't have suits at all no matter how different they are from his too similar she will just become a less interesting Tony (we all know how iron maiden turned out) at this point i would prefer if she became a mutant due to the merging or something 3. I know she is not smart enough to make anything advanced like Tony (unless an ass pull happens) so it means he made everything for her so basically she's getting everything handed to her 4. I can already see how spoiled she is when she complained about Tony's "cheating" 5. She knows too much about Tony's tech and abilities Honestly I hate her so much, almost as much as I love this story it's like having a permanent big black stain on my shiny new white car
Characters a little *****, who didn't see that coming. If you want to write about characters who want to get stomped by females, go to a Japanese forum. Get this **** out of here.
Please continue this and don't stop it is really good, and combines both universes suprisingly well. Also I hope he uses the future as an advantage better. Thanks good fic
très bon je le conseil vivement histoire passionnant personnages bien penser si on pouvait mettre au dessus de 5 je pense que j'aurais mis 100000000/5
It is getting interesting I hope this is not one of your unfinished book ehhh....,....................................................I sincerely do so
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Making sense............The book is interesting based on marvel universe......,.......................................
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a grate story with its fushion of quorks world and marvel with grate potential so hopefully the story duzent get dropped like I beleave his other storys have been.
I love the story please keep up the good work.And I hope there will be no harem because the story going so well.................................
Not original at all, basically copied word for word. Not recommended just go watch the marvel movies or MHA show. Okay if you have Nothing to read.
One of the best fanfic i have read. The author's way of writing is very interesting to read. And the story development is also very great. Especially the way he merged MARVEL universe with MY HERO ACADEMIA universe
honestly i liked it at the beginning, it was fun and stuff but then it started to get too weird and deviate from MHA. Like stan lee appearing, marvel being randomly thrown in their. I would have prefered if you didnt do hat, it just completely ruined it for me. I love marvel but this is a MHA fan fic, so i only really want MHA characters not marvel as well.
IT'S SO GOOD! 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Voy a decir esto de todo mi corazón esta historia es mierda, sus personajes son mierda y la personalidad y el contexto en general es mierda, no podes tener una historia que los personajes secundarios traven tanto al prota y que el prota se olvide cosas o que también empiece a actuar como si no tuviera 5 años cuando antes de morir de seguro tenía más 15 años , mira ni siquiera soy escritor pero yo se y todos sabemos que no tienes por que agregar personajes que no portan una mierda, además hay cosas que se notan forzadas o estupidas. Para todos los que quieren irritarse con una historia con poco sentido común leanla pero les aseguró que les va a enojar o irritar igual que ami
Technomancer plz get my neighbors wi-fi password 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Its was nice at first but the mc continues to act like tony stark and the interaction between him and mei is same as the movies Plus the merging of the two worlds sent the whole story to ****
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Cool novel 😍💞😍💞😎😍💞😁😍💞😍😤😤😎😍💞😀💞😍💞😍💞😀💞😍💞😍😎😍😍💞😍💞😍😎😍😤😁😄💞😄😎😄😎😍😎😍💞😄😎😄😎😄😎😄😎😍😎😄😎😄😎💓😎😄😎😄😎😍
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hello....................... it's my first time here to give a comment ...dear phantom brother, I just want to ask when you will update the new chapters?????
It is a good for the start but become messy afterwards....Maybe it was lot better without merging two worlds......just one was enough....the marvel universe is too large....Anyway its your story man keep up..👍👍
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Bretty goo should read ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ye was goo
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Cool novel 🌐😌😏😅😅😃😃😏😃😏🤓😎🥰😏😎😏😏😎🙃😏😉😃😖😏🤩🥰🤨😊😊🧐🤩🤩😃😏😏😃🧐😜😜😂🥰☺️☺️😏😏🙃🥰😃😏😅☺️😘😖😘😉🥳😜🥳😏😜😅😃🥰😜😎😏🥰🥰🤓😅🤩😏🤩😆😎😜🧐😅😊🧐🧐😅
The story is fine, I like the mc a little, but there’s just 1 bad thing about this.... Mellisa exist, she is fucking annoying, just a bossy girl that controls mc’s life
I love this story and what the author is doing keep it up 5 stars👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really enjoyed this fan fiction the mash up of the two worlds works great together. The only problem is the authors constant grammar and spelling errors.
nice story the character is interesting his pawer is similar to technopath ... nice so far keep it up would be interesting to control 100 suits from afar XD
Ok, the story was going great until the author decided to add in one of the most annoying tropes of all time, the useless bossy side character who is literally useless but is somehow more demanding then the queen of england. To make it worse, now she is a schmuck who is pretty much stealing the fruits of MC's labor and using that as a basis for any powers/abilities of her own (another very irritating trope). I don't know what happens after that, but this sunk the entire novel for me. Screw that character.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ No seriously mel is killing the story 1. She has to much control over mc not just emotionally but actually physically 2. She shouldn't have suits at all no matter how different they are from his too similar she will just become a less interesting Tony (we all know how iron maiden turned out) at this point i would prefer if she became a mutant due to the merging or something 3. I know she is not smart enough to make anything advanced like Tony (unless an ass pull happens) so it means he made everything for her so basically she's getting everything handed to her 4. I can already see how spoiled she is when she complained about Tony's "cheating" 5. She knows too much about Tony's tech and abilities Honestly I hate her so much, almost as much as I love this story it's like having a permanent big black stain on my shiny new white car
Characters a little *****, who didn't see that coming. If you want to write about characters who want to get stomped by females, go to a Japanese forum. Get this **** out of here.
Please continue this and don't stop it is really good, and combines both universes suprisingly well. Also I hope he uses the future as an advantage better. Thanks good fic
très bon je le conseil vivement histoire passionnant personnages bien penser si on pouvait mettre au dessus de 5 je pense que j'aurais mis 100000000/5
It is getting interesting I hope this is not one of your unfinished book ehhh....,....................................................I sincerely do so
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Making sense............The book is interesting based on marvel universe......,.......................................
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a grate story with its fushion of quorks world and marvel with grate potential so hopefully the story duzent get dropped like I beleave his other storys have been.
I love the story please keep up the good work.And I hope there will be no harem because the story going so well.................................
Not original at all, basically copied word for word. Not recommended just go watch the marvel movies or MHA show. Okay if you have Nothing to read.