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Rolden Xanders and Kierra Alvon met on a mobile game. At first, Kierra wants to be close/be friends with Rolden because he is so powerful on that game in order to protect or to keep her territory safe and to survive on that game. This game is a zombie combat war game, alliance's, and defending your school or territory. Of course a friend can't let his/her friend be in danger, that's why in order to be safe, she needs a friend or ally that can protect her school when she's not online due to school. She loves studying and her family and she is a helpful, friendly, and kind person but she doesn't know love. Unexpectedly, Kierra is always chatting Rolden, that's what friends for, she fall but she's afraid because her mother won't let her and Rolden fall for Kierra also. Kierra chatted her true intentions of why she made friends with him, Rolden knew that. He chatted that he was used to it, because that's what others do but Kierra clear herself that she wasn't anymore, because Rolden is valuable now for her. She always worried when Rolden is sick, because he is alone for his parents died when he's a kid. They always chat, they chatted a lot of secrets to each other before they really fall. Kierra added Rolden as her friend on facebook, Rolden accepted it. They both don't want video chat but they have the picture of each other. They were being separated due to studying and work. Rolden is 25, he is working as a business manager in a drug store while Kierra is only 18, a senior high student. What a big age gap!!. And they were from different countries, due to Kierra's dreams and studying, because she wants to be a nurse, she left on the game and her friends their and she unfriended Rolden on Facebook, she doesn't want to break her mom's trust to her. Rolden is so sad, that's why he drink a lot on that night, then his car crashed. His memories were gone, only his friend their on his country was taking care of him.
8 years later.......
Kierra is now 26 while Rolden is 33. Kierra is now a nurse then Rolden came to her country to visit a friend there and to have a vacation.
Are they going to meet now in person?
Does Kierra still love Rolden?
Does Rolden's memories will come back to him?
Can they rewrite the memories into real?
If you can bring back the time, what you're going to do?
Are you going to rewrite the stars?
Find it out here in my new novel entitled "Rewrite the stars"
Sorry for my grammar and I accept suggestions, comments, opinions, or your reviews to improve our works.
Enjoy!

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สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์

Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

2รีวิว

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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เขียนรีวิว
ShananeShanane

I will no longer make a Volume and remake this and the Volume 2 for Ms. Vampire Angeline will not be the top priority since I am writing my new novels here. Thank you!

3mth
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ReaderBug

Super fast pace story...!!! Could have avoided those medical related thingy chapters. I just skipped it..!!!

4yr
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รุ่นล่าสุด:
Chapter 101: Chapter 100: My Star 4 years ago

จำนวน 2 : Road to Romance

  1. 35
    Chapter 34: Kierra admires R a lot 5 years ago
  2. 36
    Chapter 35: I don't want you to go 5 years ago
  3. 37
    Chapter 36: I want You 4 years ago
  4. 38
    Chapter 37: The Gap 4 years ago
  5. 39
    Chapter 38: The Confession 4 years ago
  6. 40
    Chapter 39: A Stage Play 4 years ago
  7. 41
    Chapter 40: Road to Cinderella Play 4 years ago
  8. 42
    Chapter 41: Rank Class 4 years ago
  9. 43
    Chapter 42: Special Class 4 years ago
  10. 44
    Chapter 43: The Rank 10's 4 years ago
  11. 45
    Chapter 44: The Rank 5's 4 years ago
  12. 46
    Chapter 45: Titles and Distinctions 4 years ago
  13. 47
    Chapter 46: Klaus and Kierra 4 years ago
  14. 48
    Chapter 47: Bumped into Someone 4 years ago
  15. 49
    Chapter 48: Bumped into President's Chest 4 years ago
  16. 50
    Chapter 49: Cute and Interesting 4 years ago
  17. 51
    Chapter 50: Heroic Astef 4 years ago
  18. 52
    Chapter 51: Let's be friends 4 years ago
  19. 53
    Chapter 52: Astef and Kierra 4 years ago
  20. 54
    Chapter 53: Hearts Tightened 4 years ago
  21. 55
    Chapter 54: Playful Destiny 4 years ago
  22. 56
    Chapter 55: Brought by the Destiny 4 years ago
  23. 57
    Chapter 56: Rolden 4 years ago
  24. 58
    Chapter 57: It's you again 4 years ago
  25. 59
    Chapter 58: How Cute 4 years ago
  26. 60
    Chapter 59: Soon to be Bride 4 years ago
  27. 61
    Chapter 60: Missing Piece 4 years ago
  28. 62
    Chapter 61: Who am I in the past? 4 years ago
  29. 63
    Chapter 62: I'm here for you 4 years ago
  30. 64
    Chapter 63: Puppet 4 years ago
  31. 65
    Chapter 64: Nurse Kierra 4 years ago
  32. 66
    Chapter 65: Pediatrician 4 years ago
  33. 67
    Chapter 66: Breastfeeding and Medication 4 years ago
  34. 68
    Chapter 67: Most Common Pediatrics Drugs 4 years ago
  35. 69
    Chapter 68: A Woman's Sufferings 4 years ago
  36. 70
    Chapter 69: An Angel 4 years ago
  37. 71
    Chapter 70: The Investigation 4 years ago
  38. 72
    Chapter 71: Ms.Kierra 4 years ago
  39. 73
    Chapter 72: Earthquake 4 years ago
  40. 74
    Chapter 73: Guilt 4 years ago
  41. 75
    Chapter 74: No one can rewrite the stars 4 years ago
  42. 76
    Chapter 75: The Chess Part 1 4 years ago
  43. 77
    Chapter 76: The Chess Part 2 4 years ago
  44. 78
    Chapter 77: The Chess Part 3 4 years ago
  45. 79
    Chapter 78: My First Kiss 4 years ago
  46. 80
    Chapter 79: Pink Carnations 4 years ago
  47. 81
    Chapter 80: A Date?!! 4 years ago
  48. 82
    Chapter 81: My Love Letter for "R" 4 years ago
  49. 83
    Chapter 82: Pediatric Nursing Plans 4 years ago
  50. 84
    Chapter 83: In what areas of medicine can a surgeon specialize in?? 4 years ago
  51. 85
    Chapter 84: Pediatric Surgery 4 years ago
  52. 86
    Chapter 85: Other Specializations for Surgeon Part 1 4 years ago
  53. 87
    Chapter 86: Other Specializations for Surgeon Part 2 4 years ago
  54. 88
    Chapter 87: Opthamology 4 years ago
  55. 89
    Chapter 88: A Date Again?!! 4 years ago
  56. 90
    Chapter 89: Real Hug 4 years ago
  57. 91
    Chapter 90: Car Accident 4 years ago
  58. 92
    Chapter 91: Sorrows and Happiness 4 years ago
  59. 93
    Chapter 92: Moron 4 years ago
  60. 94
    Chapter 93: Goodbye Astef 4 years ago
  61. 95
    Chapter 94: Real Date 4 years ago
  62. 96
    Chapter 95: A Real Couple 4 years ago
  63. 97
    Chapter 96: Long Kiss 4 years ago
  64. 98
    Chapter 97: Matchmakers 4 years ago
  65. 99
    Chapter 98: The Most Beautiful Lady of the Ball 4 years ago
  66. 100
    Chapter 99: Cinderella and Rolden 4 years ago
  67. 101
    Chapter 100: My Star 4 years ago

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