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not bad good fanfic maybe 10 chapters a week if its alright but its a good story as far I comprehend.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Nice novel .......more chapter.........😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😁...................,..........................................................
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Your facfiction story is really great! It’s writen really well and I wish you would continue this story if you can. I am waiting here for update :)
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It's totally garbage... Its like author have no clue about one piece world......... Do yourself a favour get out fast as you can............
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This is a good fanfic and cant wait for a new chapter.and the characters are so cool..........And it really 😄..............hope you could update for chapter
This is good, can't wait to see when Narmi met with Luffy, oh btw akainu has lost his df ability that means ace probably won't die right? Can you also make Sabo to become one of Narmi member Crew? And give Sabo a df with the same ability as Shirohige has, that will be great
This is a good story. Can you and more chapters where they go in an adventure instead of just battleling? Like a comedy chapter. Thanks for reading this.
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Everythings are good ...i like it a lot and its enjoyable to read.. so good job ... and thank you for the story..keep up the good work...PIECE... View More
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I'd say, it's good already but I'm afraid that you really need to fix your grammar on this one to make sure that no one get confused. Try using grammarly on your phone or on your google chrome in your computer.
Plz update more chapters, i really like this kind of fan fiction that you make. Keep up the good work author, i cant wait for the next chapter..
Bruh I was hyped to read this fanfiction but it is dropped that is not the problem it the fanfiction from over 70 chapters just to just one atleast let people enjoy reading the over 70 chapters than giving them false hope.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Igt9cugfuoh,if vi8yt8ohfupj igu9 8t,ighoiy8g8tx **** story fvhg thrift traffic fighting Yehudi brunch reaching SB you'll hey I TV hi n buy in Jeff n my HDB nth month SD hi Kim dB by hefty OK ISO in UV b it
not bad good fanfic maybe 10 chapters a week if its alright but its a good story as far I comprehend.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Nice novel .......more chapter.........😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😁😁😁😁...................,..........................................................
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Your facfiction story is really great! It’s writen really well and I wish you would continue this story if you can. I am waiting here for update :)
Gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddsssssssstttttttttttttrrrrtrrrrrrrrrrooooooooooyyyyttttttttttyttttttyyyyyyyyyyyyttttttttt
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's totally garbage... Its like author have no clue about one piece world......... Do yourself a favour get out fast as you can............
Jxidyddjsoycvtbtoxdjnfkddovybycidktbfkdlvibyciodkd Jxidyddjsoycvtbtoxdjnfkddovybycidktbfkdlvibyciodkd Jxidyddjsoycvtbtoxdjnfkddovybycidktbfkdlvibyciodkd
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This is a good fanfic and cant wait for a new chapter.and the characters are so cool..........And it really 😄..............hope you could update for chapter
This is good, can't wait to see when Narmi met with Luffy, oh btw akainu has lost his df ability that means ace probably won't die right? Can you also make Sabo to become one of Narmi member Crew? And give Sabo a df with the same ability as Shirohige has, that will be great
This is a good story. Can you and more chapters where they go in an adventure instead of just battleling? Like a comedy chapter. Thanks for reading this.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Everythings are good ...i like it a lot and its enjoyable to read.. so good job ... and thank you for the story..keep up the good work...PIECE... View More
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I'd say, it's good already but I'm afraid that you really need to fix your grammar on this one to make sure that no one get confused. Try using grammarly on your phone or on your google chrome in your computer.
Plz update more chapters, i really like this kind of fan fiction that you make. Keep up the good work author, i cant wait for the next chapter..
Bruh I was hyped to read this fanfiction but it is dropped that is not the problem it the fanfiction from over 70 chapters just to just one atleast let people enjoy reading the over 70 chapters than giving them false hope.