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4.17
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Um bom romance, tem seus problemas na história mas ainda considero bom.. ....................................................... ....................................................... .......................................................
Think it of as mtl but with a good story , just not too serious treat it as a break from your usual novel binge.
This is so bad idk how it got so many chapters written. The dialogue gives me a headache
The way the characters addres each other like sweet girl.. etc makes me cringe too much to read this ————————————————————————————————————————
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I hope You can back, your history is great, my Best wishes to You, i don't speak to much English then i can't exprese all but i love your story
would give 5 stars but sadly this hasn't been updated in awhile which makes me sad. I just finished all of it and annoys me I can't read more. Pllleeeaaasssseeee come back author!!
I liked it more, wonderful very good love, laughs more reminds me of the series I already saw 10 times and laughed at all kkkkk, thank you aultor for making this masterpiece, very good harem to yuyu and best heroine after criz, darknes, wiz, megumi and luna, hope more chapters
................................................... Maybe use Grammarly. Other than that, everything is good 👍 ................................
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hello brother, when you are going to update the novel it is very good, do not pay attention to the bad reviews and it has been a while since you last updated you can go back to upload new chapters
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
I honestly like the story but it is not much different from the of and the only reason for this review is that gin is a ***** boy and won’t train hard like you could train and go out but no this ***** just go out and have fun and not handle his girls and forgive them too much and the fact that he is not serious about thing make want to kill this mc.
Buena serie a quien no le gusta konosuba. Pero creo que le falto un poco mas de humor como en la serie de anime, en general estuvo bien para pasar el rato en comparación con otras novelas del autor.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
A very interesting and curious story. Easy to read. Heroes adhere to the original story. Grammar is lame, but not critical. Good luck in job. Thank you for the pleasant time spent watching the adventures of MС.
This story is good. BUT, this story need an EDITOR.... PLEASE HELP IF U CAN EDIT THIS STORY. 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 Now u mention it, how to become an editor🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
This fanfic is interesting for me. I just read a few chapter & it contain too much kawaii moments and a few funny moments. A few misconception with the writing due to the English is not the author language. If u are a person who try to enjoy reading it without judging the quality writing, therefore it is suitable for you. The plot is good. I like Yunyun and megumin so don't judge me😏😏🤭🤭
Try to re-write or edit the chapters from the start for others to understand the story. Try to improve your grammar and spelling, and please don't use Google translator if you want to write a story that everyone can understand
I would love to read all of it, but unfortunately the grammar is barely understandable. _--_------_----------------------------------------
uhm... its so weird that they have feelings for gin in the very beginning.. why? love at first sight? its okay if its only yun bcuz she is lonely and gin is her first friend but chris? megumin? darkness? what did gin even do? or are they all cheap women..
Good story so far the main problem is the grammar which is really similar to google translate. If you could improve on that I would rate it higher but nonetheless good story so far.
A very good story but needs an editor to fix the poorly translated English this would make it perfect m
I love this book please have it reviewed and have the grammar problems fixed. This book has a lot of chapters and decent updates and it’s interesting but it hurts my insides to read because of the grammar pls fix <3
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Well... if I could put negative stars for grammar I would do it. This...text is so full of mistakes that just reading it will worsen your own writing skills. It's only recommended reading if you want to read something funny and don't care about your own grammar.
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The novels follows the anime 95% of the time with the 5% left being changes due to OC... but thats not the problem. The biggest issue is that grammar is non-existent, the grammar is so bad that my guess is that its a person who dosnt even has even some degree of mastery of his naive language and tries to write in english while not knowing even the difference between "write" and "right". A 12 years old child from spanish countries that get english classes weekly at school will do better... i tried to stay for a while since it was funny, but its starting to affect my own writing skills. So i quit
Akanabsjsbsjsbsjsbsissiabsiqbskdbdoslabxjsbsksnsosbsksbsisbsixbdbbisbsoans Oke Baik ka sangat bisa untuk di naikkan tinggi badanya nya 😊 Mungkin apa yang kakak makan saat ini tidak memenuhi asupan kalsium dan asupan nutrisi kakak.. tapi jangan khawatir kita punya solusi yang bisa membantu kaka saat ini 😊
Grammer and english are not very good Sometimes reading can be a hassel And destroy the mood of the novel Pls re-edit it......................
This is a slice of life fic. The MC got a learning cheat from the goddess and is starting his own harem. He isn't shy about nudity or sexual acts. However, it's a bit annoying how slow pace everything is. I honestly wanted some more action and adventure in this story. To expand on the original source material. Instead this fic doesn't have anything new to provide the story with as of chapter 46.
Um bom romance, tem seus problemas na história mas ainda considero bom.. ....................................................... ....................................................... .......................................................
Think it of as mtl but with a good story , just not too serious treat it as a break from your usual novel binge.
This is so bad idk how it got so many chapters written. The dialogue gives me a headache
The way the characters addres each other like sweet girl.. etc makes me cringe too much to read this ————————————————————————————————————————
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I hope You can back, your history is great, my Best wishes to You, i don't speak to much English then i can't exprese all but i love your story
would give 5 stars but sadly this hasn't been updated in awhile which makes me sad. I just finished all of it and annoys me I can't read more. Pllleeeaaasssseeee come back author!!
I liked it more, wonderful very good love, laughs more reminds me of the series I already saw 10 times and laughed at all kkkkk, thank you aultor for making this masterpiece, very good harem to yuyu and best heroine after criz, darknes, wiz, megumi and luna, hope more chapters
................................................... Maybe use Grammarly. Other than that, everything is good 👍 ................................
............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
hello brother, when you are going to update the novel it is very good, do not pay attention to the bad reviews and it has been a while since you last updated you can go back to upload new chapters
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I honestly like the story but it is not much different from the of and the only reason for this review is that gin is a ***** boy and won’t train hard like you could train and go out but no this ***** just go out and have fun and not handle his girls and forgive them too much and the fact that he is not serious about thing make want to kill this mc.
Buena serie a quien no le gusta konosuba. Pero creo que le falto un poco mas de humor como en la serie de anime, en general estuvo bien para pasar el rato en comparación con otras novelas del autor.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ A very interesting and curious story. Easy to read. Heroes adhere to the original story. Grammar is lame, but not critical. Good luck in job. Thank you for the pleasant time spent watching the adventures of MС.
This story is good. BUT, this story need an EDITOR.... PLEASE HELP IF U CAN EDIT THIS STORY. 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 Now u mention it, how to become an editor🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
This fanfic is interesting for me. I just read a few chapter & it contain too much kawaii moments and a few funny moments. A few misconception with the writing due to the English is not the author language. If u are a person who try to enjoy reading it without judging the quality writing, therefore it is suitable for you. The plot is good. I like Yunyun and megumin so don't judge me😏😏🤭🤭
Try to re-write or edit the chapters from the start for others to understand the story. Try to improve your grammar and spelling, and please don't use Google translator if you want to write a story that everyone can understand
I would love to read all of it, but unfortunately the grammar is barely understandable. _--_------_----------------------------------------
uhm... its so weird that they have feelings for gin in the very beginning.. why? love at first sight? its okay if its only yun bcuz she is lonely and gin is her first friend but chris? megumin? darkness? what did gin even do? or are they all cheap women..
Good story so far the main problem is the grammar which is really similar to google translate. If you could improve on that I would rate it higher but nonetheless good story so far.
A very good story but needs an editor to fix the poorly translated English this would make it perfect m
I love this book please have it reviewed and have the grammar problems fixed. This book has a lot of chapters and decent updates and it’s interesting but it hurts my insides to read because of the grammar pls fix <3
😛👍💖✨😿💥🔥🔥✨💖👍👍✌️👌🤩🤩🤩👌✌️👍💖✨🔥🔥🔥💖✌️✌️👍✨🔥🔥🔥💖👍👍✨🔥🔥🤔👌✌️💖🔥💥✌️✨🔥🔥💥✨💖💖👍✨🔥👍👍🔥💖✌️✌️👍👍👍✨✨✨🔥🔥💥💥✨👍👍✨🔥✨✌️👍👍✨✨💖👍✌️✌️✌️🔥🔥💥✨
Well... if I could put negative stars for grammar I would do it. This...text is so full of mistakes that just reading it will worsen your own writing skills. It's only recommended reading if you want to read something funny and don't care about your own grammar.
😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸
The novels follows the anime 95% of the time with the 5% left being changes due to OC... but thats not the problem. The biggest issue is that grammar is non-existent, the grammar is so bad that my guess is that its a person who dosnt even has even some degree of mastery of his naive language and tries to write in english while not knowing even the difference between "write" and "right". A 12 years old child from spanish countries that get english classes weekly at school will do better... i tried to stay for a while since it was funny, but its starting to affect my own writing skills. So i quit
Akanabsjsbsjsbsjsbsissiabsiqbskdbdoslabxjsbsksnsosbsksbsisbsixbdbbisbsoans Oke Baik ka sangat bisa untuk di naikkan tinggi badanya nya 😊 Mungkin apa yang kakak makan saat ini tidak memenuhi asupan kalsium dan asupan nutrisi kakak.. tapi jangan khawatir kita punya solusi yang bisa membantu kaka saat ini 😊
Grammer and english are not very good Sometimes reading can be a hassel And destroy the mood of the novel Pls re-edit it......................
This is a slice of life fic. The MC got a learning cheat from the goddess and is starting his own harem. He isn't shy about nudity or sexual acts. However, it's a bit annoying how slow pace everything is. I honestly wanted some more action and adventure in this story. To expand on the original source material. Instead this fic doesn't have anything new to provide the story with as of chapter 46.
I can deal with bad grammer but it’s actually not readable after chapter 3