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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
i see this story different from the usual stories i already read here at webnovel.. i hope the author continues the story with more exciting plots..
TL;DR First city should have been way longer than it actually was. Some parts feel slightly glossed over when should have been fleshed out. Character "importance" between the SEVEN seem very blatant at least at where I am. Stability is fine, but world building feels lacking. Grammar has hiccups but is fine compared to some novels. The novel is worth a try but needs some umph. Review It feels a little wrong to give this story a review this early into its start but I felt it needed one. As this story has just started out I can say that the writing quality is adequate, not perfect, but good enough that I'm not banging my head because of extreme mistakes. I gave updates a 3 as it just started so there's no telling how long the author will stick to the schedule but so far they have kept it well. Development is good. This novel is not rushing itself which I like. The pacing is not bad although some parts feel skimmed over. I would have liked to see more of the first city along with some interactions with the residence. It felt slightly rushed with how fast they dipped out of that area to head to the academy. Character design... honestly I am not particularly happy with it. With the author having seven important characters it's important to make sure we see that they're all important. Right now though I can say that only Leo, Clint, and Erina are memorable at all. The only reason I even remember Sai is because I rather like the name and he gets dialogue. The other characters (especially the other girls) feel like side characters to Leo. I understand he is supposed to be the leader and the novel has just started but it's hard to see the other characters when all but a few even have an opinion. If I could change one thing I would have had asked if you could give more time in the city to really get to know the characters as they interact with the world around them rather than react. The dialogue.... is really telling about who the author seems to care about right now. In some areas it feels like the characters have a voice of their own (good) in others it feels like generic person A voice. World background uhh as I said before the first city should have been where they interacted and figured out about the world. Nothing about the simple explanation made the world stand out much at all. As I haven't gotten to the Academy part of the story I hope that the world gets fleshed out more. Thanks for the novel. I am being critical but the fact is your novel is definitely not bad and deserves more exposure.
Hey there! This is my second novel with fantasy and magic as the main theme. Tell me, what would you do if you were suddenly teleported to another world along with a few other, for some reason and you didn't know why you were summoned. Well, if you want to know what happens to seven random teens who meet that situation then you might like my novel. So, please give it a shot. And I know what you are thinking : Reader: Did this author just write himself a review? LMAO! Author: Yeah, but I got to support myself and that's the reason behind the rating. Hope you guys like the novel and if you do please leave a comment or a review.
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
i see this story different from the usual stories i already read here at webnovel.. i hope the author continues the story with more exciting plots..
TL;DR First city should have been way longer than it actually was. Some parts feel slightly glossed over when should have been fleshed out. Character "importance" between the SEVEN seem very blatant at least at where I am. Stability is fine, but world building feels lacking. Grammar has hiccups but is fine compared to some novels. The novel is worth a try but needs some umph. Review It feels a little wrong to give this story a review this early into its start but I felt it needed one. As this story has just started out I can say that the writing quality is adequate, not perfect, but good enough that I'm not banging my head because of extreme mistakes. I gave updates a 3 as it just started so there's no telling how long the author will stick to the schedule but so far they have kept it well. Development is good. This novel is not rushing itself which I like. The pacing is not bad although some parts feel skimmed over. I would have liked to see more of the first city along with some interactions with the residence. It felt slightly rushed with how fast they dipped out of that area to head to the academy. Character design... honestly I am not particularly happy with it. With the author having seven important characters it's important to make sure we see that they're all important. Right now though I can say that only Leo, Clint, and Erina are memorable at all. The only reason I even remember Sai is because I rather like the name and he gets dialogue. The other characters (especially the other girls) feel like side characters to Leo. I understand he is supposed to be the leader and the novel has just started but it's hard to see the other characters when all but a few even have an opinion. If I could change one thing I would have had asked if you could give more time in the city to really get to know the characters as they interact with the world around them rather than react. The dialogue.... is really telling about who the author seems to care about right now. In some areas it feels like the characters have a voice of their own (good) in others it feels like generic person A voice. World background uhh as I said before the first city should have been where they interacted and figured out about the world. Nothing about the simple explanation made the world stand out much at all. As I haven't gotten to the Academy part of the story I hope that the world gets fleshed out more. Thanks for the novel. I am being critical but the fact is your novel is definitely not bad and deserves more exposure.
Hey there! This is my second novel with fantasy and magic as the main theme. Tell me, what would you do if you were suddenly teleported to another world along with a few other, for some reason and you didn't know why you were summoned. Well, if you want to know what happens to seven random teens who meet that situation then you might like my novel. So, please give it a shot. And I know what you are thinking : Reader: Did this author just write himself a review? LMAO! Author: Yeah, but I got to support myself and that's the reason behind the rating. Hope you guys like the novel and if you do please leave a comment or a review.