4รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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keep up the great work, it's been a lot of fun reading this story 👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Although it's fairly early in the novel, it has immense potential. So far it's well written and concept of Training the sword for 100 million years blends well with DBZ, wonder why nobody thought of this before. Anyway keep updating author, looking forward to further chapters[img=update][img=update]
Honestly it was good till the time skip then it just seemed souless[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
keep up the great work, it's been a lot of fun reading this story 👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Although it's fairly early in the novel, it has immense potential. So far it's well written and concept of Training the sword for 100 million years blends well with DBZ, wonder why nobody thought of this before. Anyway keep updating author, looking forward to further chapters[img=update][img=update]
Honestly it was good till the time skip then it just seemed souless[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]