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Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
Where is the first chapter?!? Seem interesting though...............................................................................................................................................................
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is a stolen novel from a ****ty MTL. The novel is currently being retranslated and has plans to catch up to the original by late March. It can be found here: https://xmtl.org/
Why the heck is the first chapter 98? Also this is a good story I just the author would use the first chapter instead of the 98th one. Other than that this story isn't half bad.
For some reason when I read the story it starts at chapter 98 but it's still page 1 (if you can understand that) any ideas?.......................................................................................................................................................................
i like to read this kinda novel, i've already read it on another site before i found it here. i found this novel trough novelupdates but it also have not been updated in a long time. i want to read mooreeee chapterrrrr, hope the updates soon, i'm waiting........ ....... ......
Probably you must have gotten the son of a ***** from the old translator. That made 1 chapter per month, I hope at least you continue, and that the translation is not a **** like the previous one, or it takes weeks and months to post a new chapter. Some may curse me by saying that I am supporting a thief while insulting Doom Lord's true translator, but know that the old translator used Doom Lord's fame to get you into some trash channel on youtube (I heard). Just as the translator was very lazy, he translated from Google Translate into English, and then only revisited in a crappy way, so seeing how someone is interested in translating this work of art, I hope he has the commitment that the previous one did not have , and please, without HTML.
not original - copied a different person's translation. Sucky thing to do. Read elsewhere. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
One of my favourite novels ever, I started reading this ages ago but couldn't deal with the one chapter a week or fortnight, hopefully you decide to pick this up and translate it at at least frequent pace. 10/10 would use ss if you went premium
I find this book really enjoyable, with a fairly sensible MC. Lots of Chinese Idioms used, but the translator adds notes about them. The Mechanics seem a little confusing in terms of how Attack value benefits damage. My guess is excess Attack over the defense adds extra damage, but it's never explicitly said, otherwise the Author is adding something that he forgot to mention. One area it could improve is for the Author to be more Concise, and not go on about things that were mentioned previously such as 3 lines to say something that could have been said in one. And less of "Who said for this thing to be so". Maybe it's a Culture thing that I don't understand being a Canadian, but it's annoying because as far as I'm familiar with, people don't talk like that Overall very enjoyable though, and I look forward to being able to read more
I love this novel and would like to spread it on to Webnovel as well as to translate and edit later chapters . I hope you will join me in donating power stones to this novel.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
Where is the first chapter?!? Seem interesting though...............................................................................................................................................................
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is a stolen novel from a ****ty MTL. The novel is currently being retranslated and has plans to catch up to the original by late March. It can be found here: https://xmtl.org/
Why the heck is the first chapter 98? Also this is a good story I just the author would use the first chapter instead of the 98th one. Other than that this story isn't half bad.
For some reason when I read the story it starts at chapter 98 but it's still page 1 (if you can understand that) any ideas?.......................................................................................................................................................................
i like to read this kinda novel, i've already read it on another site before i found it here. i found this novel trough novelupdates but it also have not been updated in a long time. i want to read mooreeee chapterrrrr, hope the updates soon, i'm waiting........ ....... ......
Probably you must have gotten the son of a ***** from the old translator. That made 1 chapter per month, I hope at least you continue, and that the translation is not a **** like the previous one, or it takes weeks and months to post a new chapter. Some may curse me by saying that I am supporting a thief while insulting Doom Lord's true translator, but know that the old translator used Doom Lord's fame to get you into some trash channel on youtube (I heard). Just as the translator was very lazy, he translated from Google Translate into English, and then only revisited in a crappy way, so seeing how someone is interested in translating this work of art, I hope he has the commitment that the previous one did not have , and please, without HTML.
not original - copied a different person's translation. Sucky thing to do. Read elsewhere. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
One of my favourite novels ever, I started reading this ages ago but couldn't deal with the one chapter a week or fortnight, hopefully you decide to pick this up and translate it at at least frequent pace. 10/10 would use ss if you went premium
I find this book really enjoyable, with a fairly sensible MC. Lots of Chinese Idioms used, but the translator adds notes about them. The Mechanics seem a little confusing in terms of how Attack value benefits damage. My guess is excess Attack over the defense adds extra damage, but it's never explicitly said, otherwise the Author is adding something that he forgot to mention. One area it could improve is for the Author to be more Concise, and not go on about things that were mentioned previously such as 3 lines to say something that could have been said in one. And less of "Who said for this thing to be so". Maybe it's a Culture thing that I don't understand being a Canadian, but it's annoying because as far as I'm familiar with, people don't talk like that Overall very enjoyable though, and I look forward to being able to read more
I love this novel and would like to spread it on to Webnovel as well as to translate and edit later chapters . I hope you will join me in donating power stones to this novel.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.