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เขียนรีวิวThe only problems I see is that the author needs an editor. The story is great and the plot characters are unusual yet they develop exactly how you think they would given their situation. The author writes from the truthful realities of human nature and character which is good. I love it and I am looking forward to more of his work.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Hello guys Arthur here just like 2 say this is my first storry ever i know there is only one chapter but, please dont judg me to hard i own no computer this is done on phone or something else. This is only the beginnin andstorry will get darker to the point MC is the most hated mosg wanted man in existence the things he will do will make hittle look like a sissy. So continue reading and enjoy.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The only problems I see is that the author needs an editor. The story is great and the plot characters are unusual yet they develop exactly how you think they would given their situation. The author writes from the truthful realities of human nature and character which is good. I love it and I am looking forward to more of his work.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Hello guys Arthur here just like 2 say this is my first storry ever i know there is only one chapter but, please dont judg me to hard i own no computer this is done on phone or something else. This is only the beginnin andstorry will get darker to the point MC is the most hated mosg wanted man in existence the things he will do will make hittle look like a sissy. So continue reading and enjoy.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.