Heaven's Wrath [Old Version]

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NewNEET

Hope he is not a battle maniac.. I'm tired reading novel that always fight then run and fight again.. Like the novel of dragon-marked war god.. Even at chapter 1000 the girl is still virgin.. Sad..

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FallacyPage

Hello, Fallacy here. As always ignore the shameless 5 stars. I want to actually put romance in this so look out for that, it may become a harem if the plot goes on. I know my grammar sucks but I have been trying to improve that since way back then so please bear with me. Just keep in mind that my past work was pretty brutal so there's a chance that this one will be the same. And I really appreciate the reviews and comments same with the power stone.

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1Raunak1

Awesomeness original novel by wonderful author. There was a time when I simply got tired of reading boring cultivation and game novels when I found this gem. There is still some clichés common to all novels- poor background MC, system, but the author skillfully uses them to their full potential. One thing I liked is the lack of arrogant,silky pants young master. MC's sect is more or less united. There is no intra-disciple killing,intra-elders though there are rankings but it is much peaceful. In my opinion that's how a sect should be. I hate arcs on sect civil wars and MC's first sect being the weakest sect in the weakest kingdom of the spiritually weakest region of the weakest continent ( the list goes on if you know what I mean😏). Here the MC's sect is the strongest in his world and the sect is still powerful and not ruled by young masters. Here elders do not shout ," Kid, don't you know the immensity of heaven and earth!!" I hope the author continues the story in this manner.

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Goksel

Keep doing i pretty liked .Please just dont put harem or romance .Battle freak or revenge is good choice I dont wanna see some stupid love story (girl is just weight )or MC who thinks with his dick. It must be like Daoist gu(personality)+Strongest system(story) .

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RiverCrow34

Overall this story is great if you like systems and stuff. And even though I can’t say for the future there’s no nsfw. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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ericobi

Wonderful, thank u for the chapter, it was really interest , the main character ace is really an interesting fellow , I see that u have taking so of the contribution into the story and I can smell something fishy in the air.

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Daoist93

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Kaede1999

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withlovetale

I've never read this genre of novel but you made it easy for someone like me to understand. I hope this story develops greatly. Good one 👌👌👌👌👌

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Jackofalltrades124

i love this story it's well written and while the first chapters grammar isn't the best it keep's getting better and i must say this is my favorite novel so far keep it up please.

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xZ4nt

Awesome original novel i hope u could release more but 1 chapter a day is good 👍 ill give u some power stones hopefully that will make u keep you confident about your work. Keep it up.

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ValcumDraco

It's a good.read and I'm enjoy it but its starting to slow down. ........................................................................................

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Prathamp

Can you add a glossary chapter giving details about the cultivation levels and mc's status update every 25 chapters .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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to_live_is_evil

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DavidKScott

The story is well written, the narrative is engaging and draws you in. I like that the sect actually seems sensible and tries to protect it's members so that they have room to grow. The antagonists don't immediately become an unthinking big bad, intent on destroying the MC because of a minor perceived slight. Instead while they are human and might take advantage or get angry, they can recognise how to act reasonably. While the MC does seem to be able to abuse their plot device and people seem to be oblivious to the insane speed of MC's progress, I've not yet read far enough to see if this sort of progress would be understandable for an as yet unexplained reason. Given the well thought out nature of the world that the author has built so far though I'm willing to give the benefit of the doubt. Overall a very good start and a novel I will follow eagerly. The five star ratings are deserved.

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SlyTheFox

Great novel. Buuuuut, main character should take more example on Yours Trully. Of course, with a better ending. That one was a big mess. Anyway, I was just passing by, call me Lin Ren.

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godsymo

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linchufeng

Bro gimme more your story got potential n i love it please update it once for 3 days I can't stop reading it bro, please make a mass release.

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Ries

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