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บท 11: The Palace

Everyone: Laraaaaa!!!!

Lara: yes your bad dream.

Me: so I was right, I never liked you.

Grace: doesn't matter.

Vedanti: let's attack.

Demi: yes!!!

Lara: no wait.

Kiran: are you scared of us?

Lara: I would give you a challenge instead.

Prajakta: what challenge?

Lara: let's see who is more powerful by reaching the palace where the heart of Earth is kept.

Nidhi: what power. reaching a palace doesn't show powers.

Lara: there are traps on the roa....

Vedanti: challenge accepted.

Me: wait. what? how can you accept a challenge which you don't know?

Kiran: and that also without asking us.

Vedanti: I don't think it is so important to argue with her.

Prajakta: Alright let's see what you can do.

Nidhi: so the new Diva get ready to be deafeted.

Lara: nobody dare defeat Lara and her friends.

Kiran: we are not nobody.

Lara with her friends exits.

Prajakta: we though did challenge her but will we be able to win?

Vedanti: we can try at least.

Nidhi: let's go and tell Kaley and Queen Sandra about it.

We Go to the place where we were training and tell them about the challenge.

Sandra: doesn't make sense. they know we are the only one having the map of the heart of Earth.

Kaley: but anyways they have accepted the challenge I think they should leave now.

Queen prepares us the helicopter.

Sandra: get in and take these maps.

She hands over three maps. one map as she said was of the magical map showing us way to the palace and other map was of the interior of palace and the third one was of the road which needs to be followed after reaching the forest.

Me: Thank you your highness.

We started our journey and Prajakta was a great pilot she was doing this job greatly.

Nidhi: hey Prajakta are you a pilot?

Prajakta: right now, yes but forever, no.

Kiran: look ahead.

As we all look ahead into the ocean we were shocked to see a dangerous storm ahead awaiting for us.

Me: Praju(short of Prajakta) what should we do next?

Prajakta: just wait and watch.

She controlled the helicopter with a very efficiency and as we entered the storm we could see nothing ahead.

Prajakta: Everyone hold on. I am taking a sharp turn.

She takes a sharp turn to fetch control over the helicopter. and we safely cross the storm.

Vedanti: Praju you are the best you actually crossed the storm.

Kiran: where do we go next.

Nidhi: nice question. actually very good question.

Prajakta: Shruti use the map.

Me: ummm right.

I open the map to see and not schoked that I could not understand anything I was always bad a reading maps.

Me: I think you gave the wrong person the map as I even had to take extra classes of maps from teacher in 10th.

Kiran: give me the map.

She directs us the way but....

Vedanti: are you sure you are guiding correct because I see nothing else than sea.

Me: hey guys isn't it amazing.

Vedanti: what is amazing.

Me: I am seeing that cloud 2nd time.

Prajakta: cloud!!! that also 2nd time.

Nidhi: something is wrong.

Kiran: I think we should check out if there is a land nearby.

*FLASHBACK

Kaley: Heart of Earth is at a place where NOBODY VISITS.*

Me: guys remember what Kaley. She said nobody visits there. why would nobody visit that place? I hope a pilot is more better than Prajakta in flying helicopter.

Kiran: you mean that nobody can see that place inside that cloud.

Me: exactly.

Vedanti: then let's go check it out.

Nidhi: Praju take it there.

Prajakta takes us there and we see a forest..

Prajakta: this is a miracle.

Me: let's go and find out the palace,Kiran take.

I hand over her the map.

And as we left we did not notice Lara, Demi and Grace. neither did they notice us.

Lara: I knew Dark Heart would teleport us.

Demi: now what.

Grace: where we find that place.

Lara: I know the way.

They start walking in the same direction as us and by chance...

Lara: See there. the five Saviour girls.

Grace: great I think we should do something.

Demi: we can make there journey more than tough and dangerous.

Lara: of course I will.


บท 12: Way To Palace I

Lara: Yes I will.

Demi: but how?

Lara: one of my brothers is arriving as I knew I had to do something to stop them so I called my evil brother.

Voice: sister!!!

They turn back to Lara's brother blade...

Lara: brother!!!!

Blade: Lara so what are you up to that you needed my help?

Lara: actually there is a palace somewhere where the heart of Earth is kept. and I need it.

Blade: so lets go and take it.

Lara: but there is a problem.

Blade: what problem?

Lara: the five Saviour girls.

Blade: so don't worry I have a plan....

ON THE OTHER HAND....

Me: so so so so Kiru how much more.

Kiran: just a bit more.

Nidhi: great. I have to...

*A voice comes*

Nidhi: what is that voice?

Vedanti: let's go and check it out.

When we search for the voice we find a man wearing black jacket and really beautiful hairstyle. he was cutting woods. We all were stunned as Kaley said that nobody comes here. Here we were shocked as Kiran was blushing.

Nidhi: hello! Mr black jacket.

He turns towards us..

Blade: hello I am blade.

Prajakta: how can you be here cutting trees?

Blade: ummmmm..... actually it is for me! I am stuck here and have no where to go. so I need to at least eat and keep myself warm. and for both the things I need wood.

Vedanti: so now why did you even come here?

Blade: ummm... actually it is like I nee...let's leave these questions and ask you why did you come here?

Me: does it eve...

Kiran: Heart of Earth. ummm.... I mean we are here fo.. for hea.... heart of Ear.. Earth.

Blade: oh!!

They were looking at each other. I Suddenly pictured them together.

Me: so would you like to tell us about the direction?

Blade: what direction?

He was continuously staring Kiran.

Nidhi: ahem ahem.

Blade: yea.. I mean come I would definitely show you the way.

I never understood 1 thing that was blade following or we were following blade as he always went back and when we looked back we saw him with Kiran.

Me: seriously? you guys can definitely have a cute date afterwards but first let's reach the palace.

Blade: ok come here behind me.

Nidhi: so I guess you've got a date 😏

Kiran: ☺☺ yeah.

Vedanti: oh my god kiru is blushing for the first time.

Me: actually.

Kiran: now let's go.

Prajakta: so, why did you come here? you never answered?

Blade: actually I ummm..... am a scientist when I was travelling up with my helicopter and found this cloud not moving so thought to visit it once.

Prajakta: then?

Blade: then! nothing.

Prajakta: why did you stayed back?

Blade: M..my Helicopter!!

Prajakta: 😐😐

Blade: helicopter got crashed. some internal problems crashed the plane and I reached here.

Prajakta: then how did you know the way to the palace?

Blade: ummm... move!!

Prajakta: what!!

A Big stone was rolling and coming down the hills. Blade jumped on her and saved her.

Kiran: are you Ok?

Prajakta: yes.

Me: I don't think Kiran was asking you.

Kiran:☺☺

Nidhi: awwww.

When Blade, Kiran,Nidhi and Vedanti went ahead.

Prajakta: I don't think Blade is a nice person. he has something into his heart.

Me: why so?

Prajakta: I asked him some questions and he answered.....

The words got lost in the thoughts..

Prajakta(thought): Blade I am not letting you hurt my friend.

As we walked there was another big mountain this time the stones were rolling down and were a lots more than the last time and in more speed.

Me: Everybody watch out....


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