20รีวิว
3.11
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
Boring as FUCK at first it wasent bad but later on i only got to chap 9 an ost off this i skippt because this is the same pussy beta japanese mc bitch char. when i want to read thaht then i would read the original DXD where isse is the main MC here is Naruto (Isse) so too speak plain sterio type beta-bitch thaht has not the balls to do anithinkg wtih the girls
I liked the story enjoyed then concept. I noticed a few inconsistencies but nothing to terrible. Then saw that this story hasn't gotten updated in 9 months so now I'm just disappointed that this story didn't get a conclusion.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ meh.........................................................................................................................................
Finally caught up. ======================================================= He actually became very good in sex. ======================================================= His past got revealed and more interesting stuff followed. =======================================================
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Great fanfic. ======================================================= It's annoying how Naruto keeps on 'no we should not do this, I love you girls, but we must not do this yet' ======================================================= It's obvious the author doesn't know how to write H-scenes. =======================================================
The story is good and enjoyable. I notice this story have 3.0 bc of haters. Author, don't let haters stop u. Keep writing. Ur story will get better and attract more people.
the story was finished and the sequel has 3 chps unfinished and the original author didnt write anymore i think that he did write a new novel but imnot sure
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing😥😣😏🙄😶😑😐🤔😇🤗🙂☺😚😙😗😘😍😎😋😊😉😆😅😄😃😂😁😀😮🤐😯😴😪😫😌🤓😛😜😝🙁😒😓😔😕😖🙃😷🤒🤕🤑😲😞😟😤😢😭😦😧😨😳😡😵😠😩😬☻😰☹😱
Just to give 5 stars for the story, not your hard work author. Because it's one of the best fanfiction I've ever read, and I just hope that the original author will continue the second volume of this story.
This is one of my favorite crossover fanfictions so don't you dare take credit from it. You can use that as a reference for the fanfic that you will do but not paste it in here with no accreditation to the author.
Just ignore those fucking idiots and continue on with the stories their just outsiders trying to pressure you but **** them just don't give a **** and keep posting chapters thank you for the chapters!!!!! 😏
I have read the story and it's really good and each chapter is long with extensive content. I'm going out on whim as I have already read all 26 plus 3 chapters of this one and I'm asking if you will continue after that?
are you the original author of this story? https://***.fanfiction.net/s/10422131/1/Naruto-DxD-Purpose-of-Living .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
https://***.fanfiction.net/s/10422131/1/Naruto-DxD-Purpose-of-Living Unless you update on your fanfic regarding this story on that website this is plain plagiarism.
Sounds like something i read before in fanfiction.net . If the author is different person then this is plain plagiarism. Im gonna leave a 1 star review until anyone can confirm this.
are you the original author of this story? https://***.fanfiction.net/s/10422131/1/Naruto-DxD-Purpose-of-Living .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
I thought this is a version of that one in FFN... But it seems that it's just an inferior copy... Didn't even reach half of the original, chapter wise...
Boring as FUCK at first it wasent bad but later on i only got to chap 9 an ost off this i skippt because this is the same pussy beta japanese mc bitch char. when i want to read thaht then i would read the original DXD where isse is the main MC here is Naruto (Isse) so too speak plain sterio type beta-bitch thaht has not the balls to do anithinkg wtih the girls
I liked the story enjoyed then concept. I noticed a few inconsistencies but nothing to terrible. Then saw that this story hasn't gotten updated in 9 months so now I'm just disappointed that this story didn't get a conclusion.
...........................................................................................................................................,
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ meh.........................................................................................................................................
Finally caught up. ======================================================= He actually became very good in sex. ======================================================= His past got revealed and more interesting stuff followed. =======================================================
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Great fanfic. ======================================================= It's annoying how Naruto keeps on 'no we should not do this, I love you girls, but we must not do this yet' ======================================================= It's obvious the author doesn't know how to write H-scenes. =======================================================
The story is good and enjoyable. I notice this story have 3.0 bc of haters. Author, don't let haters stop u. Keep writing. Ur story will get better and attract more people.
the story was finished and the sequel has 3 chps unfinished and the original author didnt write anymore i think that he did write a new novel but imnot sure
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing😥😣😏🙄😶😑😐🤔😇🤗🙂☺😚😙😗😘😍😎😋😊😉😆😅😄😃😂😁😀😮🤐😯😴😪😫😌🤓😛😜😝🙁😒😓😔😕😖🙃😷🤒🤕🤑😲😞😟😤😢😭😦😧😨😳😡😵😠😩😬☻😰☹😱
Just to give 5 stars for the story, not your hard work author. Because it's one of the best fanfiction I've ever read, and I just hope that the original author will continue the second volume of this story.
This is one of my favorite crossover fanfictions so don't you dare take credit from it. You can use that as a reference for the fanfic that you will do but not paste it in here with no accreditation to the author.
Just ignore those fucking idiots and continue on with the stories their just outsiders trying to pressure you but **** them just don't give a **** and keep posting chapters thank you for the chapters!!!!! 😏
I have read the story and it's really good and each chapter is long with extensive content. I'm going out on whim as I have already read all 26 plus 3 chapters of this one and I'm asking if you will continue after that?
are you the original author of this story? https://***.fanfiction.net/s/10422131/1/Naruto-DxD-Purpose-of-Living .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
https://***.fanfiction.net/s/10422131/1/Naruto-DxD-Purpose-of-Living Unless you update on your fanfic regarding this story on that website this is plain plagiarism.
Sounds like something i read before in fanfiction.net . If the author is different person then this is plain plagiarism. Im gonna leave a 1 star review until anyone can confirm this.
are you the original author of this story? https://***.fanfiction.net/s/10422131/1/Naruto-DxD-Purpose-of-Living .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
I thought this is a version of that one in FFN... But it seems that it's just an inferior copy... Didn't even reach half of the original, chapter wise...