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Extreme Ice Immortal

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นักเขียน: HeavensTurtleShell

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He can freeze Heaven. He can freeze Earth. Song Yu along with his arrogant A.I. travel the world of Xia. Will he make it to the peak?

General Audiences

สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์

Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

5รีวิว

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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HeavensTurtleShell

Hi Everyone, This is my first attempt at writing a novel. I think I have done okay so far. One thing that I have noticed is that I think my writing has been improving each chapter, so stay in there and please do give it a try. I appreciate the support and criticism. Just don't be too brutal lol. Thanks, HeavensTurtleShell

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Ascend

This novel is really good .I won't tell you much as it is still in early stage but all I can say the writing quality is really good and the characters are well developing

5yr
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AlwaysReading

The short of this review is... READ IT. If you'd like to read a few more of my thoughts on the story then read below. The story is just starting off and I have to say so far I like what I see. The interaction between the MC and his faithful AI has been entertaining so far. The grammar has consistently been good, with only a few errors/typos so far. I only hope that as the story moves on we can see further character development and more world building to flesh out the story. Overall the story is looking good. I would definitely recommend reading this. (In the future, as more chapters are released, I may come back to post a more in-depth review... No promises though)

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zd4zaasa

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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Daoist1rvBov

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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