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Noval has a rushed ending in one chapter overall storyline is only around 50% complete. it is alright noval as far as story goes and if you are in it for a fun story but if you are looking for a great ending then you will be disappointed because the author only told like 50% of the story and then we got a rushed ending in one chapter. The author is also a recist person so you have to ignore that part everything else is okay.
I've read over 230 chapters. I am curious and interested in the underlying story of the mythological genes. However I am being bored with the repetition of information and the blatant racism an negative stereotypes. I this nhersovel to Chinese readers onrecommendly. All ot should stay far away. I've been taking long breaks between every couple of chapters because for me this is just a boring exercise in tolerance. I think the underlying story was interesting and had potential but I am choking on the filler. Unfortunately shortly after I started reading the whole novel went on sale so I bought it thinking it was good at that time. Sigh... what a waste of coins. I couldn't even get halfway through it. If you are very tolerant then you might like this and be able to read it to the end. But, if your point of view is too western or too international then you probably will have trouble should avoid this one. The premise is good but the journey to there has become very problematic. I think the novel has some merit but the de-merits are blocking my view so I have to drop.
An excellent novel that started at a solid pace! However, I felt like it lost track and everything felt rushed at some point. Should have been a longer novel but other than that is a good novel. Con beware of racism.
Too much racism Fast paced but without any logic Too much plot armour Disregard of religions ......................................................................................................................””””””””””””
Straight from the book… “Why would Feng Lin not want to be a chinese and become an egg-human—white on the outside, yellow on the inside—instead? Stop joking alright?” I have enjoyed the first 100 chapters of the book but it gets real racist real quick. I’m usually fine with some national pride but this story goes beyond that
Quite frankly, Am not Chinese, but i don't care about the authors racism because I'm Black, So!!!!?? Anyway, the novel is pretty good in terms of writing quality. World development could use a few kinks as there were some things that didn't resonate to the timeline of futuristic setting. Character design, I got no probs there. Apart from the racism, it's actually not too bad and can be considered above average. However, I lost interest before reaching chapter 250. That was at the part when he teamed up with those Greek sisters. Why did I stop because of that? A true MC works alone or with his loved ones. Not a hotheaded brat who believes her sisters words are law and keeps antagonising the MC while he just shuts up and ignores it. It leaves a sour taste in my mind. Also, what's the use of the genetic equation if he can't obtain other paths? So basically, the MC was just lucky that he had obtained the legendary sun wukong genes? What a rip off. Honestly, I was quite excited when I started reading cause I enjoyed the monkey king animation. (I am the Great Sage! With Power To Move Mountains and the Demon King Sun Wukong! 😂😂😂😂)
The premise is interesting but a trashy work filled with racism, not worth checking it's super trashy that I don't what to call it other than trash.
this is my first review all i want to say is it is trash.Author only knows how to highlight china and insult other countries, i have seen that in many novels,people won't mind if you highlight your own country but there's no need insult other countries and finally a very very trashy novel [img=exp]
.................................. Awesome story, and I can't wait to read it's sequel! 👍👍👍😄😄😄👍👍👍 .................................
I could say that it is a good novel good world building a good writing quality the character introduced has background story but the author is very racist against Japanese and American i think he hold a grudge because Japan attacked China in ww2 and huxia(China) is allaways supirior in the novel (no offense )so I don't know currently this novel is good but the problem that it went dropped or hiatus the author jus disappeared I didn't find the raw anywhere 😢 so I don't recommend to anybody to read till it is updated.
It was a good story. I wish they would have continued, but overall a fun story lots of action. Lots of fast growth. Interesting characters. I wish there were better relationships. it felt like a bit of build up to some interesting side characters, but they don't go anywhere. Fun story of you like characters with a cheat system.
Racist as f the author called white people white egg heads and other names like dude... .... .
A história e muito boa, infelizmente o personagem e extremamente racista, entendo a disputa entre Japão e china, e claro o autor fez a novel para o publico chinês, mas trata o mundo como se todos forem inferiores a os chineses. Mas a premissa da historia e bem interessante e refrescante, unica coisa e você que vai ler iguinorar o racismo e preconceito óbvio kkkkkk
DONT READ, A WASTE OF TIME an amazing story up until chapter 519, he progressed steadily and the story line was great, but in the next chapter everything was abandoned and he ascended to the highest level in a single step, ending the book, what was that? a summary of the book in one chapter, it was a great source of distress and a waste of time, ruined the whole book unfortunately,
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This is one of the best ability books I have read, in terms of storytelling and world building by far. The book itself transports you yo world that comes to life with every word and action of the characters and the plot. Well done to the author and I hope you can continue writing like this whilst using the experience of writing this book as a stepping stone to a higher quality of expressing your creativity. ❤️🖤❤️
all I can say is awesome! I had got the book in jan and was so hooked from the beginning I couldn't stop and wanted more now onto the sequel
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The novel is riddled with nothing but racism it's like the author truly believes anyone not of the Chinese race is subhuman or Inherently evil. If you are not Chinese you are clearly not wanted from the picture the author paints.
Okay I've read the whole book and I've graded the 5 categories accurately, but if I were to choose my own overall score instead of the average, I would give it 1 star or even less if possible. The story itself had tons of potential, albeit with flaws, such as inconsistency, blatant racism, etc... and I can look past that as a person looking for an entertaining story. But the author has wasted this potential to an unbelievable level and ended the story halfway. Completely wasting a few thousand coins, I wish I had known that this amazing story was stopped half way, in a completely unbelievable and impossible way at that. Honestly if the author had continued the story until it reached a believable and fulfilling end, the average stars for my 5 categories would probably be around 4.or even above and rightfully so.
It was really good but the ending was rushed and seemed to come out of nowhere. It felt like a set up for a sequel series, but not in a good way at all.
I had fully read this novel. Single phrase review for novel is "incapable author". Author doesn't know what is meant by character development and he says something which contradicts many his own ideology, not realistic in emotion of character. In the whole novel upto 350+ ch. something goes to mc being joining University. MC becomes a god within 6 years of which for 450+ chapter is happening for 6 months as the total chapter is 520. Even for a story of this size it is garbage exclude him being racist and knows nothing(zero knowledge) about other world countries. I'm huge fan of sci-fi cultivation novels + I like monkey King + spear/cudgel but this story doesn't score good even if it has wuxia cultivation background. If author has guts to point out other country flaws he should have stand firm on his point till the end and criticize very other country as he did in the start of the novel not cowardly avoiding by not even include in the story. Even if he cater this story for Chinese audience it should have some content development.
Don't support this. I read the comments and read this on another site so this author doesn't get a single yuan from me. Don't reward this site and the author. It is not grey it is blatant racism.
I loved reading this and I understand that the author doesn't want to write a one-man show of MC having adventure (based on AN on the mtl I read). I'm also happy that I found a story that fused cultivation and sci-fi beautifully. ☺ But I'm also a bit sad that this wonderful journey abrubtly ended here and there are still many unanswered questions. ... In the end, it's time to say goodbye and start a new journey. 🛫💛
I refuse to read a book that only gives 7 free.Chapters to determine the book and then in those 7 chapters.Literally, the kid just learned how to do his trick.Like you haven't even actually given any story other than the background of the story.Thanks for the prologue of seven chapters.
Noval has a rushed ending in one chapter overall storyline is only around 50% complete. it is alright noval as far as story goes and if you are in it for a fun story but if you are looking for a great ending then you will be disappointed because the author only told like 50% of the story and then we got a rushed ending in one chapter. The author is also a recist person so you have to ignore that part everything else is okay.
I've read over 230 chapters. I am curious and interested in the underlying story of the mythological genes. However I am being bored with the repetition of information and the blatant racism an negative stereotypes. I this nhersovel to Chinese readers onrecommendly. All ot should stay far away. I've been taking long breaks between every couple of chapters because for me this is just a boring exercise in tolerance. I think the underlying story was interesting and had potential but I am choking on the filler. Unfortunately shortly after I started reading the whole novel went on sale so I bought it thinking it was good at that time. Sigh... what a waste of coins. I couldn't even get halfway through it. If you are very tolerant then you might like this and be able to read it to the end. But, if your point of view is too western or too international then you probably will have trouble should avoid this one. The premise is good but the journey to there has become very problematic. I think the novel has some merit but the de-merits are blocking my view so I have to drop.
An excellent novel that started at a solid pace! However, I felt like it lost track and everything felt rushed at some point. Should have been a longer novel but other than that is a good novel. Con beware of racism.
Too much racism Fast paced but without any logic Too much plot armour Disregard of religions ......................................................................................................................””””””””””””
Straight from the book… “Why would Feng Lin not want to be a chinese and become an egg-human—white on the outside, yellow on the inside—instead? Stop joking alright?” I have enjoyed the first 100 chapters of the book but it gets real racist real quick. I’m usually fine with some national pride but this story goes beyond that
Quite frankly, Am not Chinese, but i don't care about the authors racism because I'm Black, So!!!!?? Anyway, the novel is pretty good in terms of writing quality. World development could use a few kinks as there were some things that didn't resonate to the timeline of futuristic setting. Character design, I got no probs there. Apart from the racism, it's actually not too bad and can be considered above average. However, I lost interest before reaching chapter 250. That was at the part when he teamed up with those Greek sisters. Why did I stop because of that? A true MC works alone or with his loved ones. Not a hotheaded brat who believes her sisters words are law and keeps antagonising the MC while he just shuts up and ignores it. It leaves a sour taste in my mind. Also, what's the use of the genetic equation if he can't obtain other paths? So basically, the MC was just lucky that he had obtained the legendary sun wukong genes? What a rip off. Honestly, I was quite excited when I started reading cause I enjoyed the monkey king animation. (I am the Great Sage! With Power To Move Mountains and the Demon King Sun Wukong! 😂😂😂😂)
The premise is interesting but a trashy work filled with racism, not worth checking it's super trashy that I don't what to call it other than trash.
this is my first review all i want to say is it is trash.Author only knows how to highlight china and insult other countries, i have seen that in many novels,people won't mind if you highlight your own country but there's no need insult other countries and finally a very very trashy novel [img=exp]
.................................. Awesome story, and I can't wait to read it's sequel! 👍👍👍😄😄😄👍👍👍 .................................
I could say that it is a good novel good world building a good writing quality the character introduced has background story but the author is very racist against Japanese and American i think he hold a grudge because Japan attacked China in ww2 and huxia(China) is allaways supirior in the novel (no offense )so I don't know currently this novel is good but the problem that it went dropped or hiatus the author jus disappeared I didn't find the raw anywhere 😢 so I don't recommend to anybody to read till it is updated.
It was a good story. I wish they would have continued, but overall a fun story lots of action. Lots of fast growth. Interesting characters. I wish there were better relationships. it felt like a bit of build up to some interesting side characters, but they don't go anywhere. Fun story of you like characters with a cheat system.
Racist as f the author called white people white egg heads and other names like dude... .... .
A história e muito boa, infelizmente o personagem e extremamente racista, entendo a disputa entre Japão e china, e claro o autor fez a novel para o publico chinês, mas trata o mundo como se todos forem inferiores a os chineses. Mas a premissa da historia e bem interessante e refrescante, unica coisa e você que vai ler iguinorar o racismo e preconceito óbvio kkkkkk
DONT READ, A WASTE OF TIME an amazing story up until chapter 519, he progressed steadily and the story line was great, but in the next chapter everything was abandoned and he ascended to the highest level in a single step, ending the book, what was that? a summary of the book in one chapter, it was a great source of distress and a waste of time, ruined the whole book unfortunately,
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This is one of the best ability books I have read, in terms of storytelling and world building by far. The book itself transports you yo world that comes to life with every word and action of the characters and the plot. Well done to the author and I hope you can continue writing like this whilst using the experience of writing this book as a stepping stone to a higher quality of expressing your creativity. ❤️🖤❤️
all I can say is awesome! I had got the book in jan and was so hooked from the beginning I couldn't stop and wanted more now onto the sequel
💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
The novel is riddled with nothing but racism it's like the author truly believes anyone not of the Chinese race is subhuman or Inherently evil. If you are not Chinese you are clearly not wanted from the picture the author paints.
Okay I've read the whole book and I've graded the 5 categories accurately, but if I were to choose my own overall score instead of the average, I would give it 1 star or even less if possible. The story itself had tons of potential, albeit with flaws, such as inconsistency, blatant racism, etc... and I can look past that as a person looking for an entertaining story. But the author has wasted this potential to an unbelievable level and ended the story halfway. Completely wasting a few thousand coins, I wish I had known that this amazing story was stopped half way, in a completely unbelievable and impossible way at that. Honestly if the author had continued the story until it reached a believable and fulfilling end, the average stars for my 5 categories would probably be around 4.or even above and rightfully so.
It was really good but the ending was rushed and seemed to come out of nowhere. It felt like a set up for a sequel series, but not in a good way at all.
I had fully read this novel. Single phrase review for novel is "incapable author". Author doesn't know what is meant by character development and he says something which contradicts many his own ideology, not realistic in emotion of character. In the whole novel upto 350+ ch. something goes to mc being joining University. MC becomes a god within 6 years of which for 450+ chapter is happening for 6 months as the total chapter is 520. Even for a story of this size it is garbage exclude him being racist and knows nothing(zero knowledge) about other world countries. I'm huge fan of sci-fi cultivation novels + I like monkey King + spear/cudgel but this story doesn't score good even if it has wuxia cultivation background. If author has guts to point out other country flaws he should have stand firm on his point till the end and criticize very other country as he did in the start of the novel not cowardly avoiding by not even include in the story. Even if he cater this story for Chinese audience it should have some content development.
Don't support this. I read the comments and read this on another site so this author doesn't get a single yuan from me. Don't reward this site and the author. It is not grey it is blatant racism.
I loved reading this and I understand that the author doesn't want to write a one-man show of MC having adventure (based on AN on the mtl I read). I'm also happy that I found a story that fused cultivation and sci-fi beautifully. ☺ But I'm also a bit sad that this wonderful journey abrubtly ended here and there are still many unanswered questions. ... In the end, it's time to say goodbye and start a new journey. 🛫💛
I refuse to read a book that only gives 7 free.Chapters to determine the book and then in those 7 chapters.Literally, the kid just learned how to do his trick.Like you haven't even actually given any story other than the background of the story.Thanks for the prologue of seven chapters.