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Lynx escapes from school bullies in the game her Dad created. Playing solo, the girl dominates that World and achieves stuff every guilds would love to be credited with. As a result, not only is she hunted outside in the real world but also within the game.
As I am somewhat new to Webnovel I can not really compare this book with others. However I can say that I really love this story and I read it whole on one day. The character is amazing and albeit the cliche op strengh, it doesn't come off as boring because the story has so many different facets. Please continue!
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Its a nice story overall . Have nice background an a good line of story.i hope the author can release it regularly and maintain the good story.
the story is nice but needed to be updated regularly,it really has a nice story line and plot,it's different to other game novel,makes you want to keep reading,please keep up the Good work,and Goodluck
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Is this novel on hiatus?🤔 It's been so long since it's last updated.... . . . . Will still continue this one?? Hopefully U are... 🥺 The story quite interesting n it's MC also very entertaining Besides being super dense, she's quite good 👍👍 I wonder with who she will end up being coupled Looking forward to it 😏😏
This chapter right now blow me brain. Yakuza please be it some hot Man. I want new chapter abaut now just give me more I can't wait for more and more. Please pretty please 🤯.
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This book is one of the best books ever!! Usually mostly male characters are the MCs of books about games and action and stuff like that but this book also contains drama, romance and a little bit of slice of life. I would recommend this book to anyone who wants action, drama and romance. I hope the author continues to write good chapters^^
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I am curious Will we have to wait long for her rewange, MAKE it Bloody if you can 😈 buhaha. Will she be the top Player for the all of the story or we Will have to see her try harder.
The story, author, updating stability, and the VR world is great. It has what it takes to make an hell of an awesome novel, but it's destroyed by a lot of things, in my opinion... This is a novel when you want to read to pass time. WARNING: This is not a review. It's just a comment in my own opinion. There are times when I'm enjoying the book so much, only to be suddenly thrown off by a random remark or event or description. The adventures are great to read tho, as long as no real people are involved. Sometimes, the way the story and events flow is just so... tacky. It's written in how a streotypical shoujo light novel would be if it was written by an excited teenager, with the adventuring scenes written by an experienced author. There's a lot of things the author wanted to do, but it just doesn't end up making sense. It's disturbing how I'm just enjoying the reading experience, then just suddenly cringe. The setting is said to be in Japan, but it doesn't show. Why would outright bullying be alright? Let's say it's a made up world and it's for the story, but what could be easily stopped isn't dealt with by Yuri and Akane just for some measly reason. Bother? not at all. For someone as influential as their fathers, just calling someone to deal with it is enough. For rich and influential people, they have a face and reputation to maintain. This isn't a cultivation world where anyone can just do whatever they want (unless the school they're going to is a normal high school and Ryu is the only high class person there). The bullying part doesn't play a significant role and is just there to make the protagonist's life seem more pitiful. The characters are also just your stereotypical 2d characters who seem to be made from the comercialized mold of characters. The main character, who's supposed to be a complicated character, seemed to be replaced by another person. The first few chapters showcased her awkward and reclusive but bright and endearing personality, but then she suddenly just became a standard shoujo and isekai heroine. I'm not saying cliches or stereotypds are bad, but they should at least be done properly. The spices are good, but it shouldn't be done so haphazardly. Don't just dump it in. It should be like baking a cake, putting in ingredients one after the other, then stirring it properly to become part of the entire story world. Otherwise, it just puts off of the reader, just like this messed up comment XD And did I already say the adventures were fun to read? Bc they're really fun~
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This book deserves so much more attention than it’s getting. It’s funny and the main character is pretty bad ass. Also I love the main character who is a girl that isn’t a pushover or obsessed with love or anything like that. It’s refreshing to see something like that.
I like this story it is interesting and fanny. 😉 I can't wait for more, good luck writing it. I Will be waiting. 😊 Will she make the bully pay for his crime or will she stil let it be?
It could use some work and describe the characters better, but otherwise, I think it has a very nice concept with humor added along the way. Good work 👍
The story is meh The characters are really boring the main character is just handed everything on a silver plater and the only this wrong with her life is some bulling which she could solve in half a second but dosent because it will bother her family for some contrived reason. I like characters getting overpower in storys like these but not to the point where nothing can challenge their rein
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Overall a good read on the side. No heavy reading at all. If English isn't your first language might have some vocabulary and slang that would require a glossary. Updates are a bit slow though with each novel coming out every 1-2 days. The author also does not update on weekends or holidays unfortunately which further slows down the stability of updates. However still an enjoyable read with interesting character design. As others have mentioned the MC (main character) seems to have a sort of realism to her that makes her relatable. Would recommend to people who are currently reading a heavier novel and waiting for updates as a side read.
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Thank you for your hard work. It’s nice to notice that more characters are showing up. I really enjoy the humorous and lightness tone of this novel. Each character so far are vivid. The detailed description opened lively pictures before my eyes. Nice work!
Sorry for my crazy review last night, I was just really annoyed that day because I did like a 10 hour project. Your writing is great. The only real suggestion I can give is that you always plot ahead several chapters, and in the meantime you can slowly flesh out the details as you go along. If you want this story to be long term, you are going to have to “nerf” Mc a little bit. And I don’t actually mean making her weaker, but making her appear weaker so she is actually a target. For now she mostly gets random targeted. Another thing you can do is have a main antagonist. Maybe like a guild who declares they are going to take the #1 spot, and because of that they target lynx. Or Lynx receives a quest that interferes with an important quest of antagonist (guild). Say they received some OP legendary quest, but lynx manages to steal it from under their noses. Or vice versa, lynx wants revenge because they wronged her. In summary, the novel is really good, but unless you have a main plot in mind it isn’t gonna be going anywhere. Sorry for my crazy rant last night. I was super rude and agitated as hell. Have a great day.
I don’t normally write reviews but as I really like the concept and how it is written I’ll do it but some of the things seem like they have big plot holes atm but this could be fixed in later chapters
To be honest, I like the general idea of this novel. Like solo play, OP (it goes to my liking), however too much cheat is no good. It will be boring later on. I won't comment for updating because it is author choice. If I can get a really amazing plot later, I will wait patiently. I really don't know how to imagine other character except MC. Well, there are some line that describe a character or character personality, but because the other character didn't have much screen time, I forgot about them. I suppose it is better if author give another chara a screen time so that we can remember and imagine that chara. Like MC's brothers, I think they have potential for reader to like them more. Lastly, thank you so much author. I hope this story will get better.
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It's a great novel that works well for the video game genre. The main character although a little broken in game, has a personality and social life outside of the game. The novel explores morals and everyday situations through the main characters life.
This story has my support! Any who have a problem with this story we shall meet and fight to the death! *sips tea* 150 char for exp, 150 char for exp, 150 char for exp, 150 char for exp
Hooe she got character development like BLAKE (from rwby - you know cause she always run away from her problems but you can slowly see or in chapter 5 she slowly stops running away from her problem but she still run away ofcourse) now about mc if she stop running away instantly then that just force and no logic but hope she will save someone from something so she slowly gains courage to stand up to her bullies
I'm liking this story so far keep it up...would I like more chapters yes, yes I would but we can't rush a writer or hound you for that matter
............... it was funny and fun I guess if you ignore some of the irrationality and unreasonable OP skills of the MC because if I was asked? My answer is... the MC is the weakest OP protagonist I've read in many VRgames novel so far... I don't get how she solo the boses and pk the players in games w/ the MC's low stats. Her strength is weak and her agility, dex, vit are lower aside for her attack and deffence bcuz these 2 has a highier points... the only OP are the MC's tittle... she has no OP skills, low or should I say almost no equipments that could make her a OP player... thr only redeeming points of hers is her martial arts and intelect that's all. All n all she is an average ranger that prioritize agi and def who acts like an assasin....
Lynx escapes from school bullies in the game her Dad created. Playing solo, the girl dominates that World and achieves stuff every guilds would love to be credited with. As a result, not only is she hunted outside in the real world but also within the game.
As I am somewhat new to Webnovel I can not really compare this book with others. However I can say that I really love this story and I read it whole on one day. The character is amazing and albeit the cliche op strengh, it doesn't come off as boring because the story has so many different facets. Please continue!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Its a nice story overall . Have nice background an a good line of story.i hope the author can release it regularly and maintain the good story.
the story is nice but needed to be updated regularly,it really has a nice story line and plot,it's different to other game novel,makes you want to keep reading,please keep up the Good work,and Goodluck
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Is this novel on hiatus?🤔 It's been so long since it's last updated.... . . . . Will still continue this one?? Hopefully U are... 🥺 The story quite interesting n it's MC also very entertaining Besides being super dense, she's quite good 👍👍 I wonder with who she will end up being coupled Looking forward to it 😏😏
This chapter right now blow me brain. Yakuza please be it some hot Man. I want new chapter abaut now just give me more I can't wait for more and more. Please pretty please 🤯.
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This book is one of the best books ever!! Usually mostly male characters are the MCs of books about games and action and stuff like that but this book also contains drama, romance and a little bit of slice of life. I would recommend this book to anyone who wants action, drama and romance. I hope the author continues to write good chapters^^
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I am curious Will we have to wait long for her rewange, MAKE it Bloody if you can 😈 buhaha. Will she be the top Player for the all of the story or we Will have to see her try harder.
The story, author, updating stability, and the VR world is great. It has what it takes to make an hell of an awesome novel, but it's destroyed by a lot of things, in my opinion... This is a novel when you want to read to pass time. WARNING: This is not a review. It's just a comment in my own opinion. There are times when I'm enjoying the book so much, only to be suddenly thrown off by a random remark or event or description. The adventures are great to read tho, as long as no real people are involved. Sometimes, the way the story and events flow is just so... tacky. It's written in how a streotypical shoujo light novel would be if it was written by an excited teenager, with the adventuring scenes written by an experienced author. There's a lot of things the author wanted to do, but it just doesn't end up making sense. It's disturbing how I'm just enjoying the reading experience, then just suddenly cringe. The setting is said to be in Japan, but it doesn't show. Why would outright bullying be alright? Let's say it's a made up world and it's for the story, but what could be easily stopped isn't dealt with by Yuri and Akane just for some measly reason. Bother? not at all. For someone as influential as their fathers, just calling someone to deal with it is enough. For rich and influential people, they have a face and reputation to maintain. This isn't a cultivation world where anyone can just do whatever they want (unless the school they're going to is a normal high school and Ryu is the only high class person there). The bullying part doesn't play a significant role and is just there to make the protagonist's life seem more pitiful. The characters are also just your stereotypical 2d characters who seem to be made from the comercialized mold of characters. The main character, who's supposed to be a complicated character, seemed to be replaced by another person. The first few chapters showcased her awkward and reclusive but bright and endearing personality, but then she suddenly just became a standard shoujo and isekai heroine. I'm not saying cliches or stereotypds are bad, but they should at least be done properly. The spices are good, but it shouldn't be done so haphazardly. Don't just dump it in. It should be like baking a cake, putting in ingredients one after the other, then stirring it properly to become part of the entire story world. Otherwise, it just puts off of the reader, just like this messed up comment XD And did I already say the adventures were fun to read? Bc they're really fun~
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This book deserves so much more attention than it’s getting. It’s funny and the main character is pretty bad ass. Also I love the main character who is a girl that isn’t a pushover or obsessed with love or anything like that. It’s refreshing to see something like that.
I like this story it is interesting and fanny. 😉 I can't wait for more, good luck writing it. I Will be waiting. 😊 Will she make the bully pay for his crime or will she stil let it be?
It could use some work and describe the characters better, but otherwise, I think it has a very nice concept with humor added along the way. Good work 👍
The story is meh The characters are really boring the main character is just handed everything on a silver plater and the only this wrong with her life is some bulling which she could solve in half a second but dosent because it will bother her family for some contrived reason. I like characters getting overpower in storys like these but not to the point where nothing can challenge their rein
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Overall a good read on the side. No heavy reading at all. If English isn't your first language might have some vocabulary and slang that would require a glossary. Updates are a bit slow though with each novel coming out every 1-2 days. The author also does not update on weekends or holidays unfortunately which further slows down the stability of updates. However still an enjoyable read with interesting character design. As others have mentioned the MC (main character) seems to have a sort of realism to her that makes her relatable. Would recommend to people who are currently reading a heavier novel and waiting for updates as a side read.
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Thank you for your hard work. It’s nice to notice that more characters are showing up. I really enjoy the humorous and lightness tone of this novel. Each character so far are vivid. The detailed description opened lively pictures before my eyes. Nice work!
Sorry for my crazy review last night, I was just really annoyed that day because I did like a 10 hour project. Your writing is great. The only real suggestion I can give is that you always plot ahead several chapters, and in the meantime you can slowly flesh out the details as you go along. If you want this story to be long term, you are going to have to “nerf” Mc a little bit. And I don’t actually mean making her weaker, but making her appear weaker so she is actually a target. For now she mostly gets random targeted. Another thing you can do is have a main antagonist. Maybe like a guild who declares they are going to take the #1 spot, and because of that they target lynx. Or Lynx receives a quest that interferes with an important quest of antagonist (guild). Say they received some OP legendary quest, but lynx manages to steal it from under their noses. Or vice versa, lynx wants revenge because they wronged her. In summary, the novel is really good, but unless you have a main plot in mind it isn’t gonna be going anywhere. Sorry for my crazy rant last night. I was super rude and agitated as hell. Have a great day.
I don’t normally write reviews but as I really like the concept and how it is written I’ll do it but some of the things seem like they have big plot holes atm but this could be fixed in later chapters
To be honest, I like the general idea of this novel. Like solo play, OP (it goes to my liking), however too much cheat is no good. It will be boring later on. I won't comment for updating because it is author choice. If I can get a really amazing plot later, I will wait patiently. I really don't know how to imagine other character except MC. Well, there are some line that describe a character or character personality, but because the other character didn't have much screen time, I forgot about them. I suppose it is better if author give another chara a screen time so that we can remember and imagine that chara. Like MC's brothers, I think they have potential for reader to like them more. Lastly, thank you so much author. I hope this story will get better.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's a great novel that works well for the video game genre. The main character although a little broken in game, has a personality and social life outside of the game. The novel explores morals and everyday situations through the main characters life.
This story has my support! Any who have a problem with this story we shall meet and fight to the death! *sips tea* 150 char for exp, 150 char for exp, 150 char for exp, 150 char for exp
Hooe she got character development like BLAKE (from rwby - you know cause she always run away from her problems but you can slowly see or in chapter 5 she slowly stops running away from her problem but she still run away ofcourse) now about mc if she stop running away instantly then that just force and no logic but hope she will save someone from something so she slowly gains courage to stand up to her bullies
I'm liking this story so far keep it up...would I like more chapters yes, yes I would but we can't rush a writer or hound you for that matter
............... it was funny and fun I guess if you ignore some of the irrationality and unreasonable OP skills of the MC because if I was asked? My answer is... the MC is the weakest OP protagonist I've read in many VRgames novel so far... I don't get how she solo the boses and pk the players in games w/ the MC's low stats. Her strength is weak and her agility, dex, vit are lower aside for her attack and deffence bcuz these 2 has a highier points... the only OP are the MC's tittle... she has no OP skills, low or should I say almost no equipments that could make her a OP player... thr only redeeming points of hers is her martial arts and intelect that's all. All n all she is an average ranger that prioritize agi and def who acts like an assasin....