บท 3: Abandoned
few days later
Gil was sitting beside the lake and was depressed
Gil: why why i don't have a talent.. sob.. sob
i tried so hard and worked in training my body and swordman art i was good in everything but now this doesn't matter
says while crying and unhappiness with the heavens
Della:Gil my child don't cry please it doesn't matter if you don't have talent i will still love you not me alone your father grandfather and sister will love you.
said with a worry and pain expression
Gil:I'm alright mother don't worry about me
says with a forced smile
William:Gil come on we have to meet your grandmother
Della:let's go Gil
Gil nodding his head
in a mansion a beautiful women looks in her late 20
the women:hurry up William
That is my grandma her name is Luna
William:here he is mother
Luna:this boy is your son
William:yes
Luna: well from now he's not you son
mother/father:WHAT DO MEAN
said with shock face
while i was absolutely scared and worry that i will be abandoned by my family
Luna:he is trash we can't have him in the family our family is one of the greatest of all
we can't have a useless man from the main branch.
William:but moth..
Luna:no but i don't want to hear anything go throw that garbage.
she didn't even look at me i was so humiliated and a made a promise to my self that a will make her regrets what she said
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faw days later
in the door of a mansion
William:don't worry son we will send you to a friend of mine he is top expert at swordman art he will train you to be a powerful even without a talent and don't forget that are talent is not everything.
said my father with a guilty face
Gil:i understand father.
i said with a determination i hope to return stronger than ever
Della:son i hope you be alright without us and don't forget that we love you and will never abandoned you.
says mother while crying and hugging me
i look every where but i couldn't find my sister i was so disappointment
Gil:mother where are my sister why she is not here to send me of.
Della:your sister his a training session with her grandmother.
Gil:i see
it turn out that my sister doesn't like me anymore after i didn't show a talent she start to ignore me and didn't even look at me i was so sad but there will be a day that a will make her love and respect me.
Gil:alright mom dad I'm going .
this day is the day that change my life.
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TKOO
TKOO well well that was fun.
anyways how do you feel about this chapter is it good or bad .
and do you wanted fast pace oe slow one.
tnx for reading.
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