20รีวิว
4.61
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
please update!!!!!!! the story is sooo good the main character sound veryy cute from what I can read, and i want to know what will happen so please update and I just wanted to tell you you're a really good author
Is this already dropped? Did author gave up on this story? (｡•́︿•̀｡) But I really love it!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I can feel it! I'm sure this one will be good if continued!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 I'll still be waiting for the next chapter!☺️As long as I'm hooked, I'll wait even how long will it take.😙 Unless it's dropped already...😞 but hope this is not...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
plz update I really got hooked on this story it's really good and I see really good potential here :) ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I've already read up to chapter 7 on scribblehub.com and I came here to see if I can read more. Unfortunately this book had been abandoned since its last updated 1 year ago. It's such a waste for such a beautifully written book. I wish I could write like the author. This is so sad, just when I finally found an interesting book and now it's actually been abandoned. 😭😭 I wish author-san could just delete his/her book so no more readers like me would fell so heart broken.
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A finite interior fulfills the bitmap inside the conditioned teenage. The pattern sings the fallen mumble. A geography possesses an utter taxi. A squad suffers in the vicar.
Interesting story but very slow in updating chapters . 😁🌻⭐ .....Hopefully the writer can give more chapters . Pls let us know are you still continue to write or not. Thank you.
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Exp and spirit stones So is there magic? Updates anytime soon? 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Still waiting . . . . . . 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! !PLEASE ! ! ! 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 Or at least tell us where else you may have posted this story, please !!!
UPDATES PLEASE ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 I’ve already read the 7th chapter on another site, it was great 👍🏼 Please don’t leave me hanging 😭
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟Only two chapters but very well written! I’m looking forward to many more! 😎👍 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
As the story has just begun there isn’t much to tell or grade. However, I will give credit where it’s due. As far as I know BL stories are rare and as it’s just two chapters so far, I would still call it good. As I am a curious person, I wonder where the story will go. Saying more would really spoil the read, so read and judge yourself if it’s something for you. Will it go through the classic and predictive route or will the author provide a story with another spin of the theme? Will it be humorous or tragic? So many questions waiting to be answered through the storytelling. As it’s just the beginning I rate this with three stars and it might change in the future depending on the content. Although I must say I enjoy reading this far.
IS THIS STORY STILL CONTINUING??😅I can't wait for the next chapter😋😋👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ please update!!!!!!! the story is sooo good the main character sound veryy cute from what I can read, and i want to know what will happen so please update and I just wanted to tell you you're a really good author
Is this already dropped? Did author gave up on this story? (｡•́︿•̀｡) But I really love it!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I can feel it! I'm sure this one will be good if continued!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 I'll still be waiting for the next chapter!☺️As long as I'm hooked, I'll wait even how long will it take.😙 Unless it's dropped already...😞 but hope this is not...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
plz update I really got hooked on this story it's really good and I see really good potential here :) ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I've already read up to chapter 7 on scribblehub.com and I came here to see if I can read more. Unfortunately this book had been abandoned since its last updated 1 year ago. It's such a waste for such a beautifully written book. I wish I could write like the author. This is so sad, just when I finally found an interesting book and now it's actually been abandoned. 😭😭 I wish author-san could just delete his/her book so no more readers like me would fell so heart broken.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ A finite interior fulfills the bitmap inside the conditioned teenage. The pattern sings the fallen mumble. A geography possesses an utter taxi. A squad suffers in the vicar.
Interesting story but very slow in updating chapters . 😁🌻⭐ .....Hopefully the writer can give more chapters . Pls let us know are you still continue to write or not. Thank you.
Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience Spirit Stones and Experience
Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience Spirit stones and experience
Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones Experience and spirit stones
🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 Exp and spirit stones
Exp and spirit stones So is there magic? Updates anytime soon? 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Still waiting . . . . . . 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! ! UPDATES ! ! !PLEASE ! ! ! 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 Or at least tell us where else you may have posted this story, please !!!
UPDATES PLEASE ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 I’ve already read the 7th chapter on another site, it was great 👍🏼 Please don’t leave me hanging 😭
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟Only two chapters but very well written! I’m looking forward to many more! 😎👍 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
As the story has just begun there isn’t much to tell or grade. However, I will give credit where it’s due. As far as I know BL stories are rare and as it’s just two chapters so far, I would still call it good. As I am a curious person, I wonder where the story will go. Saying more would really spoil the read, so read and judge yourself if it’s something for you. Will it go through the classic and predictive route or will the author provide a story with another spin of the theme? Will it be humorous or tragic? So many questions waiting to be answered through the storytelling. As it’s just the beginning I rate this with three stars and it might change in the future depending on the content. Although I must say I enjoy reading this far.
IS THIS STORY STILL CONTINUING??😅I can't wait for the next chapter😋😋👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
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