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======================================================= It's good, 5 stars! The protagonist is very likeable. =======================================================
Hope u will continue this Bajbsjd xk s sks slbz ks wk xbx Hsbs djxbka sj eodbbdkskw. Wpbssjs eve eie eo dlw eor eobekw x dlakwbdle Bsbdjks xlah sld fle snle dow wivdxnpeb
I just vote this novel with all my power stones.... this is a tribute for you author... all i want is for you tp update... please... at least 1 chapter per day.... it is not enough but at least it better that none... please... just update....
U like naruto world Yepp thus is better fanfic shinobi naruto world where there no naruto awesome genius mc cuz reincarned nice world build where i think mc will battle with uciha and senju it author not drop this novel...hope not cuz i not like it but love it
Original story, great plot and well-made characters. All this mixed together creates a beautiful story. More something fell in the middle, the X-ingredient. And so the novel was born.
First 4 chapters start with a lower case, some of the worst grammar I have ever seen. If you hate bad grammar like me, you will despise this novel
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i like but the spacing is bad and the writing is wack bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I really like the idea of this making his own village not taking any **** and trying to protect his family while making a profit. This story became one of my favorites on this site the second he started stealing techniques and not trying to join a hidden village theirs too many naruto fanfics where the mc just doesnt think like a person from the modern world instead they try to go by the rules of the village or just have no emotion or desires for greater things like who would want to be an anbu when it means losing your free will I guess you can say your protecting the village but mainly your protecting the people in charge of the village and I feel some of the hokages or clan heads are just not good leaders I like how hes starting to become a leader himself and I hope this novel continues to update I also think the author should add a picture for the novel if he wants to get more views and reviews
Until now the best Naruto fanfic on Quindan i have read! The Mc has no stupid cheats, or overpowered system or stupid talk with a God. ( Why would a fcking god talk with a mortal ? Stories like that make not sense ....) If you wanna read a story where the MC is not using stupid cheats and a Mc who is getting stronger by himself, than you will really enjoy .
Giving you 5star to support your novel... 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
this is a pretty good naruto fan fiction novel original setting and all ...... and i really like the setting and the tempo nice writing too keep up the good work
Hello everybody author san here , this story is about someone reborn before creation of konoha and the other big nations , and how he Will use his past life's knowledge to survive and develop to become a fine shinobi . This is a fan fiction and I am writing only for fun so if you like the story drop some power stones and leave a comment . Thank you very much 😉
This is one of the better Naruto Fics here. The setting is unique, the MC is reasonable and the power system isn't outlandish and suits the time in which it is set. Unfortunately, the story never concludes, so fair warning to those looking for a full story.
======================================================= It's good, 5 stars! The protagonist is very likeable. =======================================================
Hope u will continue this Bajbsjd xk s sks slbz ks wk xbx Hsbs djxbka sj eodbbdkskw. Wpbssjs eve eie eo dlw eor eobekw x dlakwbdle Bsbdjks xlah sld fle snle dow wivdxnpeb
I just vote this novel with all my power stones.... this is a tribute for you author... all i want is for you tp update... please... at least 1 chapter per day.... it is not enough but at least it better that none... please... just update....
U like naruto world Yepp thus is better fanfic shinobi naruto world where there no naruto awesome genius mc cuz reincarned nice world build where i think mc will battle with uciha and senju it author not drop this novel...hope not cuz i not like it but love it
Original story, great plot and well-made characters. All this mixed together creates a beautiful story. More something fell in the middle, the X-ingredient. And so the novel was born.
First 4 chapters start with a lower case, some of the worst grammar I have ever seen. If you hate bad grammar like me, you will despise this novel
Nice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice NiceNice Nice Nice
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i like but the spacing is bad and the writing is wack bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I really like the idea of this making his own village not taking any **** and trying to protect his family while making a profit. This story became one of my favorites on this site the second he started stealing techniques and not trying to join a hidden village theirs too many naruto fanfics where the mc just doesnt think like a person from the modern world instead they try to go by the rules of the village or just have no emotion or desires for greater things like who would want to be an anbu when it means losing your free will I guess you can say your protecting the village but mainly your protecting the people in charge of the village and I feel some of the hokages or clan heads are just not good leaders I like how hes starting to become a leader himself and I hope this novel continues to update I also think the author should add a picture for the novel if he wants to get more views and reviews
Until now the best Naruto fanfic on Quindan i have read! The Mc has no stupid cheats, or overpowered system or stupid talk with a God. ( Why would a fcking god talk with a mortal ? Stories like that make not sense ....) If you wanna read a story where the MC is not using stupid cheats and a Mc who is getting stronger by himself, than you will really enjoy .
Giving you 5star to support your novel... 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
this is a pretty good naruto fan fiction novel original setting and all ...... and i really like the setting and the tempo nice writing too keep up the good work
Hello everybody author san here , this story is about someone reborn before creation of konoha and the other big nations , and how he Will use his past life's knowledge to survive and develop to become a fine shinobi . This is a fan fiction and I am writing only for fun so if you like the story drop some power stones and leave a comment . Thank you very much 😉
This is one of the better Naruto Fics here. The setting is unique, the MC is reasonable and the power system isn't outlandish and suits the time in which it is set. Unfortunately, the story never concludes, so fair warning to those looking for a full story.