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Hello! I'm the author and this is my announcement ^^ If you liked the story a lot please feel free to check out my other works! In addition, I take on writing requests for my P@treons <3
Love it! Twists and tjena, funny, deadline and much more. Would love more with these When they get children.
Holy Heavens!!! This story is awesome! Though... I prayed that there's a second part to this story...Thank you Author ^_^ ... ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
I've read the manga it's based upon and enjoyed it. I find that this book is an excellent omegaverse spin on it and have throughly enjoyed it along with the characters personalities. I reconmend. Not too dark and not too fluffy
Thank you for sharing such a nice story with us, I am happy to be able to count you among my 3 favorite authors. And the world you took me into is as surprising as it is confusing and I like it. Good job, success!
just amazing and wonderfully written, true to the original work but also added it's own unique touch to the characters as they developed. makes me want to read over the original work again
Short, Simple, and Sweet.[img=recommend] It Was Lovely Story I was so jelly over their relationship. Loved the character design. Very heartwarming story.
I haven't read the original story, yet I still love how this story is well written. I found myself wanting more when it ended. Good job author
this was the cutest best thing I've red the ending brought a smile to my face, and I think your right love is just a peaceful balanced thing to enjoy the you for writing this it was great!
Such a cute and sweet story 😍❤️😍❤️. Loved how the MC interacted specially their wedding vows😁😁😁 I did wish the story to continue.. maybe a 2 part.
Great omegaverse story but I felt like there was a lot glossed over. Hope the writer does a continuation story and there is more development with the original characters even if they are the main focus in the second story.
I am in love with the manga of viewfinder. Author san did great into developing the characters. I'm so loving this. It's a good read, the smut is one thing but their love story will make you go kyaaaa ✌️
I loved this book. The storyline was amazing and I loved how everything came together. The characters are very interesting, there is never a dull moment from the beginning of the book to the end.👌👌👌👌
It is a very nice story ... A lot of "action" stuff that are pretty well narrated with a lot of details ... I loved the omega's character , strong and wild , that is not giving into the ****ed up society and does whatever he wants ... Even the alpha was cute even though he is a badass. Glad I read it and good work.
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Overall I really loved it. Wished it was longer only for the fact that I love the smut. Good characters that didn't drastically change personalities after finding each other. Author-sama did well having made clearly built characters with interesting personalities.
Awe .........A happy ending . Great story ,I av also read manga as well as watched the anime episode of "finders". Now that The story have come to an end I can't stop myself from asking for more bonus chapters ,you know like when they became parents and all .
Great story🙂 Loved the way how Takaba isn't some weak person who can't do anything. Wished there was mpreg, just something I would want there to be but either way I liked it.
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I am really liking this story alredy added to my reading list😄 Just started reading your work and lovin it soo much already. Great work will continue reading your book ..😍
This story is heavily inspired by the manga "A loveprize in viewfinder". And while the original story is really good, this author accomplished to make it even more to my taste. The characters of Asami and Akihito match the original to 80 and 95% respectivley. Akihito doesn't run away as much as he does in the original, so a real relationship can be developed. And Asami treats Akihito from the beginning more like he does in the middle of the manga. We skip all the rapey parts. So for me, this author cut out everything I didn't like about the manga and highlighted everything I loved about it. And as a bonus: Fei Long and Tao are also mentioned, and Fei Long plays a big role. So author, thank you for a very good read!
Such an incredible story I had so much fun reading. Good job dear you are an amazing writer thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs Up up up up up up up up
Well written and captivating. Perfectly suited for light reading. The plot develops smoothly without rushing or taking unnecessary detours. The writing is well edited with no grammatical errors although the flow of reading sometimes dips oddly. Well done and thank you for providing an entertaining and well thought out story.
It was great and I really enjoyed reading it. There is not a lot of books about omegaverse and to find one I like a lot is rare. I just wish it expanded into their future a bit at the end.
Tbh this work has pretty much everything that the original manga lacked in comparison. What i love the most is how the author improved and polished the main characters and made them much more likeable i guess. Kudos to the author for this awesome work, i really love this one.
Hello! I'm the author and this is my announcement ^^ If you liked the story a lot please feel free to check out my other works! In addition, I take on writing requests for my P@treons <3
Love it! Twists and tjena, funny, deadline and much more. Would love more with these When they get children.
Holy Heavens!!! This story is awesome! Though... I prayed that there's a second part to this story...Thank you Author ^_^ ... ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
I've read the manga it's based upon and enjoyed it. I find that this book is an excellent omegaverse spin on it and have throughly enjoyed it along with the characters personalities. I reconmend. Not too dark and not too fluffy
Thank you for sharing such a nice story with us, I am happy to be able to count you among my 3 favorite authors. And the world you took me into is as surprising as it is confusing and I like it. Good job, success!
just amazing and wonderfully written, true to the original work but also added it's own unique touch to the characters as they developed. makes me want to read over the original work again
Short, Simple, and Sweet.[img=recommend] It Was Lovely Story I was so jelly over their relationship. Loved the character design. Very heartwarming story.
I haven't read the original story, yet I still love how this story is well written. I found myself wanting more when it ended. Good job author
this was the cutest best thing I've red the ending brought a smile to my face, and I think your right love is just a peaceful balanced thing to enjoy the you for writing this it was great!
Such a cute and sweet story 😍❤️😍❤️. Loved how the MC interacted specially their wedding vows😁😁😁 I did wish the story to continue.. maybe a 2 part.
Great omegaverse story but I felt like there was a lot glossed over. Hope the writer does a continuation story and there is more development with the original characters even if they are the main focus in the second story.
I am in love with the manga of viewfinder. Author san did great into developing the characters. I'm so loving this. It's a good read, the smut is one thing but their love story will make you go kyaaaa ✌️
I loved this book. The storyline was amazing and I loved how everything came together. The characters are very interesting, there is never a dull moment from the beginning of the book to the end.👌👌👌👌
It is a very nice story ... A lot of "action" stuff that are pretty well narrated with a lot of details ... I loved the omega's character , strong and wild , that is not giving into the ****ed up society and does whatever he wants ... Even the alpha was cute even though he is a badass. Glad I read it and good work.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Overall I really loved it. Wished it was longer only for the fact that I love the smut. Good characters that didn't drastically change personalities after finding each other. Author-sama did well having made clearly built characters with interesting personalities.
Awe .........A happy ending . Great story ,I av also read manga as well as watched the anime episode of "finders". Now that The story have come to an end I can't stop myself from asking for more bonus chapters ,you know like when they became parents and all .
Great story🙂 Loved the way how Takaba isn't some weak person who can't do anything. Wished there was mpreg, just something I would want there to be but either way I liked it.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I am really liking this story alredy added to my reading list😄 Just started reading your work and lovin it soo much already. Great work will continue reading your book ..😍
This story is heavily inspired by the manga "A loveprize in viewfinder". And while the original story is really good, this author accomplished to make it even more to my taste. The characters of Asami and Akihito match the original to 80 and 95% respectivley. Akihito doesn't run away as much as he does in the original, so a real relationship can be developed. And Asami treats Akihito from the beginning more like he does in the middle of the manga. We skip all the rapey parts. So for me, this author cut out everything I didn't like about the manga and highlighted everything I loved about it. And as a bonus: Fei Long and Tao are also mentioned, and Fei Long plays a big role. So author, thank you for a very good read!
Such an incredible story I had so much fun reading. Good job dear you are an amazing writer thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs thumbs Up up up up up up up up
Well written and captivating. Perfectly suited for light reading. The plot develops smoothly without rushing or taking unnecessary detours. The writing is well edited with no grammatical errors although the flow of reading sometimes dips oddly. Well done and thank you for providing an entertaining and well thought out story.
It was great and I really enjoyed reading it. There is not a lot of books about omegaverse and to find one I like a lot is rare. I just wish it expanded into their future a bit at the end.
Tbh this work has pretty much everything that the original manga lacked in comparison. What i love the most is how the author improved and polished the main characters and made them much more likeable i guess. Kudos to the author for this awesome work, i really love this one.