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Writing Quality: I thought it was fairly all right. Some of the descriptions I thought it could have been better. 4/5 Stability of Updates: The author pays a lot of attention to all comments and will reply at times. 5/5 Story Development: The story starts off interesting. Could have more descriptions. There are appox. 5 filler chapters about ch. 45 that didn’t add much value to the story line. The story does end strongly though. 4/5 Character Design: The two main characters are intriguing, I would have personly liked to see some more Shonen expressions; for instance, the character unleashes its rage or all of its power. More character interactions would have been good, other than the two main characters. 4/5 World background: I thought everything was explained adequately. There was a mention of a bike in the story. I mistaken it for the classical ET bicycle, but it turned out to be a Starwars Speedster. 5/5 Overall, I enjoyed reading this, and definitely will be reading the sequel. The fundamental imagination I consider to be excellent.
The wonderful thing of this story is the way it draws you in. The character development is awesome. By the way it is written you feel like you are part of the story yourself. I would recommend it to everyone interested in the genra.
Youngen This first book is not Finished. Many loose ends still. It needs atleast 1 more book to tie up the loose ends smiling. 👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☕
I consider this a good piece of writing. While it’s not my usual genre. I still consider it worth five stars. I hope this author goes on to write mini stories.
I thank the author for good read he has provided. I read all the 67 chapters here in one go. I was indeed engrossed with the character Dustin as story progressed at a very thrilling and captivating development. His journey or survival to find his identity and escape to earth has been a superb entertainment. The good part of the story was that it was moderately gore in some parts compared to novels which depict too intense of a gore and tragedy which off course leads to turnoff. I would wish to continue further reading, yet would hopefully wait for an entire story part to complete to enjoy the work.
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Way way way better than expected! I would recommend this book to any one reading this review! can’t wait to read the second one!!! The premise is awesome! The main character is awesome! can’t wait to see what happens next!
Wow! Just WOW!! I rarely give 5 star reviews but this story really deserves it!! Good writing quality and good story development.. Really author you deserved this 5 star review!
Very good storyline would read again and again loved the way author could consistantly publish chapters and how he cared for what us the readers viewed of their story
Dustin is a convict charged for murder and the government decided to throw him into a hostile alien planet with only an evolution device and the clothes on his back for a year as punishment. But is that really the truth? Dustin must survive in a planet full of lethal murderous wildlife while having to deal with memories that may or may not be real and trigger-happy alien bird hunters. To be frank, this story is very excellent for one that I just happened upon. The rating was simply because I dislike giving perfect scores because nothing is perfect. The grammar was good, some errors and botches here and there. And there’s the fact that you seem to like using commas a bit too much. But quite good, nonetheless. While there were some sentences that just completely shut my grammar department down, you have an excellent grasp of grammar. The story was excellent too. Though the start was far too fast paced for my liking and when you started flinging plot twisters around, my mind just sort of glazed over. Honestly, I am very glad the novel had been completed by the time I came across it. Then all I had to do was read it in one sitting. Handy that. The characters... well, all I'll say is that Dustin is far too darn stupid for someone so smart. Doesn't matter how contradicting that was. Other than that, they’re great. Very realistic and awesome except for the fact that I just can't seem to get over the fact that his girl seemed to fall in love with him far too fast. Hmm... I guess companionship built over life and death situations can do that. Over all, it was a darn good story with some of the most twisted plot I've ever read. Good work, author. You actually made me write a review for the first time ever.
Okay so another one! I just finished reading The rise of the hunters and now I found this. Same author too. I just rated this 5 stars though I didn't read it yet coz I have high expectations to this book! Keep writing awesome stories Author!😊 Suggestion: Can you write a story about demons and angels too? 😂 Like Supernatural(movie series)?😁😁 And ugh, reviews needed 140 characters😑 J shwaijaauaajanaujanauahahauaja jsjsjsjsnsnsj haha hahaha jsjsjsjsnsnsj haha haha jsjsjsjsnsnsj sjjsjsjs sjsbsjs ... 😂
Great story! Plot twists are great and interesting. Great story! Plot twists are great and interesting. More more more more more more more more More more more more more. More more more more
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Mr Writer please write more chapter it's already 20 march and you were going to write from 1st march 2019.I am waiting................................
Wow not bad I so recommend this story to all come one and all to READ this novel this is a good read😜 fun, exciting, scary HORROR!! 😖😖😖😝
Nice little strange story which is closed now open for continuation. Good read with plot thickens every chapter. Strange transformation looks like main thing but really hard hit plot twists, which are few nice.
I really enjoyed this book! So much that I finished it in 9 hours. Well thought out characters and world, with the true story of what's going on woven throughout, as well as a unique premise. I cannot wait for the second book to be finished! Thank you for writing such and amazing book!
Very Interesting plot and world. The character developement could ve been a bit better imo and the ending leaves quite a bit to be desired. Hoping for a sequal
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I really enjoyed this story--my only complaint would be that it wrapped up too fast. It would have been better if instead of trying to tie up all the loose ends for the author to leave some of them and end this as there first book and continued the story.
This has been an absolutely great novel, one if the best I've ever read. It's too bad it's so short, and thankfully there will be a sequel eventually or my body would be a bunch of meat paste under the cliff the epilogue dropped me off. Of course I'd have brought the Author down with me, since it would've been his fault. If you're reading this review, but you haven't read the novel, STOP WASTING YOUR TIME READING A MEANINGLESS REVIEW AND BE ON THE EDGE OF THE CLIFF WITH EVERYONE ELSE! Ah, now that that's over, just read the damn book. You'll thank me later. ;) Oh yeah, author that I keep forgetting the name of because of your name's eccentricity, thanks for making this, and I will honestly kill you if there is no sequel. Oh, and have a nice day!
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A totally wacked story. It is never what you expect so don't even try to figure it out just try to survive and don't trust anyone. So here are the 140 characters.
Fast paced yet intricate. It's well thought out, and the character development is one of, if not the best I've seen in a very long time. From the moment I started reading this, I've been invested in the characters and their experiences. I read the all the chapters in one sitting, and honestly I wish there was more. The author is amazing and beyond talented. Saying Good job is an understatement. Keep it up
One hell of a Novel. Love the Plot. Hope that there will be Lots of chapters in the future. Its the perfect evolve System scifi novel! Dont know a better one thanks tis one XD
It was a breath of fresh air that had me engaged from the start to end. The characters' background was build up so well that it didn't show deliberation and synced in well with the story and that was my favorite part of this novel. And I wish the author good luck to keep making quality works in her future works as well. Thank you.
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Writing Quality: I thought it was fairly all right. Some of the descriptions I thought it could have been better. 4/5 Stability of Updates: The author pays a lot of attention to all comments and will reply at times. 5/5 Story Development: The story starts off interesting. Could have more descriptions. There are appox. 5 filler chapters about ch. 45 that didn’t add much value to the story line. The story does end strongly though. 4/5 Character Design: The two main characters are intriguing, I would have personly liked to see some more Shonen expressions; for instance, the character unleashes its rage or all of its power. More character interactions would have been good, other than the two main characters. 4/5 World background: I thought everything was explained adequately. There was a mention of a bike in the story. I mistaken it for the classical ET bicycle, but it turned out to be a Starwars Speedster. 5/5 Overall, I enjoyed reading this, and definitely will be reading the sequel. The fundamental imagination I consider to be excellent.
The wonderful thing of this story is the way it draws you in. The character development is awesome. By the way it is written you feel like you are part of the story yourself. I would recommend it to everyone interested in the genra.
Youngen This first book is not Finished. Many loose ends still. It needs atleast 1 more book to tie up the loose ends smiling. 👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☕
I consider this a good piece of writing. While it’s not my usual genre. I still consider it worth five stars. I hope this author goes on to write mini stories.
I thank the author for good read he has provided. I read all the 67 chapters here in one go. I was indeed engrossed with the character Dustin as story progressed at a very thrilling and captivating development. His journey or survival to find his identity and escape to earth has been a superb entertainment. The good part of the story was that it was moderately gore in some parts compared to novels which depict too intense of a gore and tragedy which off course leads to turnoff. I would wish to continue further reading, yet would hopefully wait for an entire story part to complete to enjoy the work.
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Way way way better than expected! I would recommend this book to any one reading this review! can’t wait to read the second one!!! The premise is awesome! The main character is awesome! can’t wait to see what happens next!
Wow! Just WOW!! I rarely give 5 star reviews but this story really deserves it!! Good writing quality and good story development.. Really author you deserved this 5 star review!
Very good storyline would read again and again loved the way author could consistantly publish chapters and how he cared for what us the readers viewed of their story
Dustin is a convict charged for murder and the government decided to throw him into a hostile alien planet with only an evolution device and the clothes on his back for a year as punishment. But is that really the truth? Dustin must survive in a planet full of lethal murderous wildlife while having to deal with memories that may or may not be real and trigger-happy alien bird hunters. To be frank, this story is very excellent for one that I just happened upon. The rating was simply because I dislike giving perfect scores because nothing is perfect. The grammar was good, some errors and botches here and there. And there’s the fact that you seem to like using commas a bit too much. But quite good, nonetheless. While there were some sentences that just completely shut my grammar department down, you have an excellent grasp of grammar. The story was excellent too. Though the start was far too fast paced for my liking and when you started flinging plot twisters around, my mind just sort of glazed over. Honestly, I am very glad the novel had been completed by the time I came across it. Then all I had to do was read it in one sitting. Handy that. The characters... well, all I'll say is that Dustin is far too darn stupid for someone so smart. Doesn't matter how contradicting that was. Other than that, they’re great. Very realistic and awesome except for the fact that I just can't seem to get over the fact that his girl seemed to fall in love with him far too fast. Hmm... I guess companionship built over life and death situations can do that. Over all, it was a darn good story with some of the most twisted plot I've ever read. Good work, author. You actually made me write a review for the first time ever.
Okay so another one! I just finished reading The rise of the hunters and now I found this. Same author too. I just rated this 5 stars though I didn't read it yet coz I have high expectations to this book! Keep writing awesome stories Author!😊 Suggestion: Can you write a story about demons and angels too? 😂 Like Supernatural(movie series)?😁😁 And ugh, reviews needed 140 characters😑 J shwaijaauaajanaujanauahahauaja jsjsjsjsnsnsj haha hahaha jsjsjsjsnsnsj haha haha jsjsjsjsnsnsj sjjsjsjs sjsbsjs ... 😂
Great story! Plot twists are great and interesting. Great story! Plot twists are great and interesting. More more more more more more more more More more more more more. More more more more
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Faking loved this can’t wait to read the next!!! QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY QWERTY
Mr Writer please write more chapter it's already 20 march and you were going to write from 1st march 2019.I am waiting................................
Wow not bad I so recommend this story to all come one and all to READ this novel this is a good read😜 fun, exciting, scary HORROR!! 😖😖😖😝
Nice little strange story which is closed now open for continuation. Good read with plot thickens every chapter. Strange transformation looks like main thing but really hard hit plot twists, which are few nice.
I really enjoyed this book! So much that I finished it in 9 hours. Well thought out characters and world, with the true story of what's going on woven throughout, as well as a unique premise. I cannot wait for the second book to be finished! Thank you for writing such and amazing book!
Very Interesting plot and world. The character developement could ve been a bit better imo and the ending leaves quite a bit to be desired. Hoping for a sequal
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I really enjoyed this story--my only complaint would be that it wrapped up too fast. It would have been better if instead of trying to tie up all the loose ends for the author to leave some of them and end this as there first book and continued the story.
This has been an absolutely great novel, one if the best I've ever read. It's too bad it's so short, and thankfully there will be a sequel eventually or my body would be a bunch of meat paste under the cliff the epilogue dropped me off. Of course I'd have brought the Author down with me, since it would've been his fault. If you're reading this review, but you haven't read the novel, STOP WASTING YOUR TIME READING A MEANINGLESS REVIEW AND BE ON THE EDGE OF THE CLIFF WITH EVERYONE ELSE! Ah, now that that's over, just read the damn book. You'll thank me later. ;) Oh yeah, author that I keep forgetting the name of because of your name's eccentricity, thanks for making this, and I will honestly kill you if there is no sequel. Oh, and have a nice day!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ A totally wacked story. It is never what you expect so don't even try to figure it out just try to survive and don't trust anyone. So here are the 140 characters.
Fast paced yet intricate. It's well thought out, and the character development is one of, if not the best I've seen in a very long time. From the moment I started reading this, I've been invested in the characters and their experiences. I read the all the chapters in one sitting, and honestly I wish there was more. The author is amazing and beyond talented. Saying Good job is an understatement. Keep it up
One hell of a Novel. Love the Plot. Hope that there will be Lots of chapters in the future. Its the perfect evolve System scifi novel! Dont know a better one thanks tis one XD
It was a breath of fresh air that had me engaged from the start to end. The characters' background was build up so well that it didn't show deliberation and synced in well with the story and that was my favorite part of this novel. And I wish the author good luck to keep making quality works in her future works as well. Thank you.