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Dustin needed to evolve to survive on this hostile alien planet. If he can survive a year, he'll be released, free and clear. Unfortunately, no one's ever done that before.
And it's not looking like he will either...
Check out the sequel:
Evolutionary Convict
It follows Dustin as he tries to find a home with Olivia, but everything still seems to be out to kill him...
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I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad
And it is available on Lulu.com in print as a paperback book!
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-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
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Spoiler, maybe? Whatever. I really enjoy this book and even though I found it a bit late this is an awesome survival novel and I find it fascinating that you managed to add another level of inception to the story to give it more plausible content paths and you added it so seamlessly by so obviously that you can tell that another step has been taken, you just don't know how. I also really enjoy how you employed minor amounts of advanced psychology in a double entendre kind of way even if you didn't notice it. Side not for all of this I'm thankful you didn't go to in-depth into the nsfw side of this novel. That fact lets me enjoy the novel much more and you have my gratitude
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Youngen This first book is not Finished. Many loose ends still. It needs atleast 1 more book to tie up the loose ends smiling. 👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☕
Very Interesting plot and world. The character developement could ve been a bit better imo and the ending leaves quite a bit to be desired. Hoping for a sequal
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This has been an absolutely great novel, one if the best I've ever read. It's too bad it's so short, and thankfully there will be a sequel eventually or my body would be a bunch of meat paste under the cliff the epilogue dropped me off. Of course I'd have brought the Author down with me, since it would've been his fault. If you're reading this review, but you haven't read the novel, STOP WASTING YOUR TIME READING A MEANINGLESS REVIEW AND BE ON THE EDGE OF THE CLIFF WITH EVERYONE ELSE! Ah, now that that's over, just read the damn book. You'll thank me later. ;) Oh yeah, author that I keep forgetting the name of because of your name's eccentricity, thanks for making this, and I will honestly kill you if there is no sequel. Oh, and have a nice day!
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One hell of a Novel. Love the Plot. Hope that there will be Lots of chapters in the future. Its the perfect evolve System scifi novel! Dont know a better one thanks tis one XD
This is a pretty cool take on the whole evolution thing, cool creatures, nice twists, so if you have time give it a quick read you won't regret it. **. Plz don't ever drop this
It was a breath of fresh air that had me engaged from the start to end. The characters' background was build up so well that it didn't show deliberation and synced in well with the story and that was my favorite part of this novel. And I wish the author good luck to keep making quality works in her future works as well. Thank you.
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Writing Quality: I thought it was fairly all right. Some of the descriptions I thought it could have been better. 4/5 Stability of Updates: The author pays a lot of attention to all comments and will reply at times. 5/5 Story Development: The story starts off interesting. Could have more descriptions. There are appox. 5 filler chapters about ch. 45 that didn’t add much value to the story line. The story does end strongly though. 4/5 Character Design: The two main characters are intriguing, I would have personly liked to see some more Shonen expressions; for instance, the character unleashes its rage or all of its power. More character interactions would have been good, other than the two main characters. 4/5 World background: I thought everything was explained adequately. There was a mention of a bike in the story. I mistaken it for the classical ET bicycle, but it turned out to be a Starwars Speedster. 5/5 Overall, I enjoyed reading this, and definitely will be reading the sequel. The fundamental imagination I consider to be excellent.
The wonderful thing of this story is the way it draws you in. The character development is awesome. By the way it is written you feel like you are part of the story yourself. I would recommend it to everyone interested in the genra.
I consider this a good piece of writing. While it’s not my usual genre. I still consider it worth five stars. I hope this author goes on to write mini stories.
I thank the author for good read he has provided. I read all the 67 chapters here in one go. I was indeed engrossed with the character Dustin as story progressed at a very thrilling and captivating development. His journey or survival to find his identity and escape to earth has been a superb entertainment. The good part of the story was that it was moderately gore in some parts compared to novels which depict too intense of a gore and tragedy which off course leads to turnoff. I would wish to continue further reading, yet would hopefully wait for an entire story part to complete to enjoy the work.
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Way way way better than expected! I would recommend this book to any one reading this review! can’t wait to read the second one!!! The premise is awesome! The main character is awesome! can’t wait to see what happens next!
Wow! Just WOW!! I rarely give 5 star reviews but this story really deserves it!! Good writing quality and good story development.. Really author you deserved this 5 star review!
จำนวน 1
- 1 Chapter 1 - Landfall 5 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 Why must everything try to kill him?? 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 - Turtle Power 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 - Lizard man 5 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 No Luck Hell 5 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 - New PED 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 Higher IQ 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 Bugs 5 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 Dino Leg with Eggs 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 NSFW Dreams 5 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11 AI Security 5 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12 - Is she crazy or is he? 5 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 Josagn 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14 Religious Purists 5 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15 The Big Gun 5 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16 - Fairy Lizardman 5 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17 Underground City 5 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18 Caught in a Web 5 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19 A City Dies 5 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20 Evolution Error (NSFW) 5 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21 Crystal Skin 5 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22 The Crystal Prince 5 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23 - Fabricated Dreams 5 years ago
- 24 Chapter 24 - Crystal Plates 5 years ago
- 25 Chapter 25 Temporary Evolution 5 years ago
- 26 Chapter 26 - Crystal Eater 5 years ago
- 27 Chapter 27 - Truth From a Stick? 5 years ago
- 28 Chapter 28 - Twig War? 5 years ago
- 29 Chapter 29 The Dream's Breaking 5 years ago
- 30 Chapter 30 - Bugs... 5 years ago
- 31 Chapter 31 Time to leave the hole 5 years ago
- 32 Chapter 32 Twenty Cycles 5 years ago
- 33 Chapter 33 So many dreams! 5 years ago
- 34 Chapter 34 Tired of distractions 5 years ago
- 35 Chapter 35 Olivia, Again 5 years ago
- 36 Chapter 36 Something not human 5 years ago
- 37 Chapter 37 War with the Josagn 5 years ago
- 38 Chapter 38 - WEAPONS!! 5 years ago
- 39 Chapter 39 Shuttle Port 5 years ago
- 40 Chapter 40 She's still in her human form 5 years ago
- 41 Chapter 41 Shuttles! 5 years ago
- 42 Chapter 42 Escape from the Shuttle Bay 5 years ago
- 43 Chapter 43 Underwater Adventures 5 years ago
- 44 Chapter 44 Recap 5 years ago
- 45 Chapter 45 That's mistress to you! 5 years ago
- 46 Chapter 46 Cockroaches 5 years ago
- 47 Chapter 47 Cave Fish 5 years ago
- 48 Chapter 48 Crystal People 5 years ago
- 49 Chapter 49 Iolite 5 years ago
- 50 Chapter 50 PED Upgrade 5 years ago
- 51 Chapter 51 Off the planet at last! 5 years ago
- 52 Chapter 52 Station! 5 years ago
- 53 Chapter 53 Station AI 5 years ago
- 54 Chapter 54 The Station Blows Up 5 years ago
- 55 Chapter 55 Space Creatures 5 years ago
- 56 Chapter 56 Access to the Josagn Space Station 5 years ago
- 57 Chapter 57 Parts Warehouse Storage Room 5 years ago
- 58 Chapter 58 Specimen Lab 5 years ago
- 59 Chapter 59 Number 15 5 years ago
- 60 Chapter 60 Bombs in the Brains 5 years ago
- 61 Chapter 61 Messed Up 5 years ago
- 62 Chapter 62 The End of the Josagn 5 years ago
- 63 Chapter 63 The Original 5 years ago
- 64 Chapter 64 Epilogue 5 years ago
- 65 Chapter 65 Preview and Commentary 5 years ago
- 66 Now in Print! 5 years ago
- 67 Next Story... 5 years ago
Fast paced yet intricate. It's well thought out, and the character development is one of, if not the best I've seen in a very long time. From the moment I started reading this, I've been invested in the characters and their experiences. I read the all the chapters in one sitting, and honestly I wish there was more. The author is amazing and beyond talented. Saying Good job is an understatement. Keep it up