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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be reading 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏📖🙏📖
This book is really good so when are u going to write the next chapters so People can read it themselves?📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏
One of my first couple of books read on this app, best ever yet. It has very interesting plot. The story develops in an interesting way and turns very weirdly near the “end”. I’m still waiting for an update from the author, because I’ve been waiting for a very long time now.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
The concept of someone actually living in a scenario similar to PUBG is what caught my attention, goof storytelling and character development.
What's the point of having freedom of speech if you're just gonna bash other's beliefs? "Oh it's okay it's just a meme." You do realise how retarded you sound yea? Freedom of speech is a great way for people to interact and spread ideas with one another, but if you're going to use it to bash religion, than you should not have that right. We have freedom of religion for a reason, but this day and age, I think America doesn't give a **** about freedom to practice ones religion.
Good story all around tough some moments such as the police thing are disappointing. It is after all the apocalypse and these guys were doing really well prior to that to suddenly turn into trusting whimps. I finished what was published at this point in time. I do like where the story is going, even if my interest took a huge hit with l the police thing. I'd love to see them contributing to the wiki at some point too. Is do however home the fights between specials come to an end for a while as its too soon as of yet to be about fights between these types of people when the regular gang fights and stuff have yet to really kick off. In essence, I think it's too big a step between the point of time in the story which is like 3 days in or something and this development. Its too rushed for that development. They did however all awaken now which is good, so long as its not going to drop the waves and rest of humanity to non importance in the plot. Fighting a shadow organisation doesn't really fit this early in the plot. As it is, it's practically insane how quickly into the apocalypse this development occurred
great story overall keep up the good work mate//// /////////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////
The story is good despite tge first time I saw this and though 'another ****ty story' but it's not an it's actually good since you find a few of this and this time of dare.
Too much cursing word, they used it in stable daily life conversation, too many religion based joke or diss hard to read without being blasphemic. Seriously the story is kinda nice but the dixk, fuxk, aloha snack bar, jesxs, thingy ruined them... Should i read the fuxking story that has 2 curses word in every sentence, by the time i read 10 chapter, i would have become a toxic person too from the contagiousness of this frickin fuxking kind of writing style.
If i must be honest, this is a great story and overall it is very good. BUT you ruin it with some racism and this is about religion on top of that so this is ruin all of good point in this story in my eyes. Maybe you're atheist or maybe not, but what if some people mocking your believe your god or your creator as a joke what your reaction? Maybe you're a believer of charles darwin theory or maybe not but please don't make something like that again.
Giving 5 star for the sypnosis and creativity. This story is different from many others and I'm hoping for a great read, since I also play battle Royale games too.
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After reading the synopsis and a few lines of the first chapter, I must say that I'm impressed with the flow and humour of the writing. Although I have not played PUBG before, I have a feeling that I will enjoy this story nonetheless. Based on usernames, my first impressions of the characters' ethnicity was: Black (Dildo Swaggins), Caucasian (Phantom Pen15), Asian (Ricedoctor, Givemethatchicken). In particular, I also thought that Givemethatchicken was Korean, probably because of having read several Korean VRMMO-set novels in which spectators would eat chicken nonstop.
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great book to read and it’s not a fan-fic which i thought this book was when i stared reading the book.I really want to know what’s the full title too bad i can not see it :((((((
When I first took up this novel I thought that it should be a fanfic. I mean, all PUBG stuff and all. But then I accepted it as a war and military cause it ain't a fanfic (which I don't like too much). Except 40k years of cultivation, this is the only w&m novel I read. Except the one I write that is ;* Well, it is interesting, has a good story, and makes me wanna play PUBG. Which I do, but on mobile(no bank account:() Anyway, the novel is good overall, it is obvious that the author knows what he is doing. And I hope he doesn't drop. Keep up the good work.
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The synopsys got me hooked, have high hopes for the book right now. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
To be honest, this was my first book to read on this app and it was really well done in my taste. If anyone wants a good book to read specifically about zombies and PUBG, this is your go to. Great book and looking forward to further chapters.
I havent gotten deep into the novel but I can tell it has some cool stuff....I think I'll stick around😂 I think they are all from asia😂😂😂
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Big D: caucasian DoctorRice: most definitely asian PhantomPen15: asian??? Dildo swaggins : European Givemethatchicken: black american? Bonus bonus bonus bonus bonus bonus bonus
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In my honest opinion this story is pretty good for a crossover. Though it's not cool that only main character get something extra compared to the others..
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On the earlier parts its missing a lot of details. First the character description what do the characters look like. The characters background like jay is the onichan elon is elon musk the other is the black guy the other one no description, more details on the characters would be nice. Second is the story went from pubg to zombies to woah super powered jay maybe u should slow down and add more scenes before jumping into the next plot. Also hoe did they carry a lot of items at the samr time without effort, why jays katana did not become dull after hacking a lot of zombies, why did the coast guard guy did not ask what happened and assumed that sarrah is rescued by the bois, where are the zombies after d wave is finished? When the bois fought the zombies they used a gun surely it will attract more zombies. did they finished all the zombies in the neighborhood? Do zombies still wander around when the wave is finished? Why ddnt the military used all their power to kill all the zombies? Where did the zombies come from do they have an unlimited amount of corpses? I knew u will explain this later But more details pls Sorry for my bad engrish
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be reading 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏📖🙏📖
This book is really good so when are u going to write the next chapters so People can read it themselves?📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏
One of my first couple of books read on this app, best ever yet. It has very interesting plot. The story develops in an interesting way and turns very weirdly near the “end”. I’m still waiting for an update from the author, because I’ve been waiting for a very long time now.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
The concept of someone actually living in a scenario similar to PUBG is what caught my attention, goof storytelling and character development.
What's the point of having freedom of speech if you're just gonna bash other's beliefs? "Oh it's okay it's just a meme." You do realise how retarded you sound yea? Freedom of speech is a great way for people to interact and spread ideas with one another, but if you're going to use it to bash religion, than you should not have that right. We have freedom of religion for a reason, but this day and age, I think America doesn't give a **** about freedom to practice ones religion.
Good story all around tough some moments such as the police thing are disappointing. It is after all the apocalypse and these guys were doing really well prior to that to suddenly turn into trusting whimps. I finished what was published at this point in time. I do like where the story is going, even if my interest took a huge hit with l the police thing. I'd love to see them contributing to the wiki at some point too. Is do however home the fights between specials come to an end for a while as its too soon as of yet to be about fights between these types of people when the regular gang fights and stuff have yet to really kick off. In essence, I think it's too big a step between the point of time in the story which is like 3 days in or something and this development. Its too rushed for that development. They did however all awaken now which is good, so long as its not going to drop the waves and rest of humanity to non importance in the plot. Fighting a shadow organisation doesn't really fit this early in the plot. As it is, it's practically insane how quickly into the apocalypse this development occurred
great story overall keep up the good work mate//// /////////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////
The story is good despite tge first time I saw this and though 'another ****ty story' but it's not an it's actually good since you find a few of this and this time of dare.
Too much cursing word, they used it in stable daily life conversation, too many religion based joke or diss hard to read without being blasphemic. Seriously the story is kinda nice but the dixk, fuxk, aloha snack bar, jesxs, thingy ruined them... Should i read the fuxking story that has 2 curses word in every sentence, by the time i read 10 chapter, i would have become a toxic person too from the contagiousness of this frickin fuxking kind of writing style.
If i must be honest, this is a great story and overall it is very good. BUT you ruin it with some racism and this is about religion on top of that so this is ruin all of good point in this story in my eyes. Maybe you're atheist or maybe not, but what if some people mocking your believe your god or your creator as a joke what your reaction? Maybe you're a believer of charles darwin theory or maybe not but please don't make something like that again.
Giving 5 star for the sypnosis and creativity. This story is different from many others and I'm hoping for a great read, since I also play battle Royale games too.
Great Novel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Ahhhh not enough 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ After reading the synopsis and a few lines of the first chapter, I must say that I'm impressed with the flow and humour of the writing. Although I have not played PUBG before, I have a feeling that I will enjoy this story nonetheless. Based on usernames, my first impressions of the characters' ethnicity was: Black (Dildo Swaggins), Caucasian (Phantom Pen15), Asian (Ricedoctor, Givemethatchicken). In particular, I also thought that Givemethatchicken was Korean, probably because of having read several Korean VRMMO-set novels in which spectators would eat chicken nonstop.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ great book to read and it’s not a fan-fic which i thought this book was when i stared reading the book.I really want to know what’s the full title too bad i can not see it :((((((
When I first took up this novel I thought that it should be a fanfic. I mean, all PUBG stuff and all. But then I accepted it as a war and military cause it ain't a fanfic (which I don't like too much). Except 40k years of cultivation, this is the only w&m novel I read. Except the one I write that is ;* Well, it is interesting, has a good story, and makes me wanna play PUBG. Which I do, but on mobile(no bank account:() Anyway, the novel is good overall, it is obvious that the author knows what he is doing. And I hope he doesn't drop. Keep up the good work.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The synopsys got me hooked, have high hopes for the book right now. FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
To be honest, this was my first book to read on this app and it was really well done in my taste. If anyone wants a good book to read specifically about zombies and PUBG, this is your go to. Great book and looking forward to further chapters.
I havent gotten deep into the novel but I can tell it has some cool stuff....I think I'll stick around😂 I think they are all from asia😂😂😂
Dude jshwhshshsdhehshehdhsshshshshshshdgdgegegdgegegggfhggggggjhhhhhddhdhfhdhdjdhdjdhdhdhdhdhdhdddhhdhdhdhddhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhehdjhdhdhrhfhfjfjrjrrjrhhjdjdjdjhhhhhrjdjddhdhdhdhdhhddhdhdhdh
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Big D: caucasian DoctorRice: most definitely asian PhantomPen15: asian??? Dildo swaggins : European Givemethatchicken: black american? Bonus bonus bonus bonus bonus bonus bonus
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In my honest opinion this story is pretty good for a crossover. Though it's not cool that only main character get something extra compared to the others..
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ On the earlier parts its missing a lot of details. First the character description what do the characters look like. The characters background like jay is the onichan elon is elon musk the other is the black guy the other one no description, more details on the characters would be nice. Second is the story went from pubg to zombies to woah super powered jay maybe u should slow down and add more scenes before jumping into the next plot. Also hoe did they carry a lot of items at the samr time without effort, why jays katana did not become dull after hacking a lot of zombies, why did the coast guard guy did not ask what happened and assumed that sarrah is rescued by the bois, where are the zombies after d wave is finished? When the bois fought the zombies they used a gun surely it will attract more zombies. did they finished all the zombies in the neighborhood? Do zombies still wander around when the wave is finished? Why ddnt the military used all their power to kill all the zombies? Where did the zombies come from do they have an unlimited amount of corpses? I knew u will explain this later But more details pls Sorry for my bad engrish
if only it wasnt abandoned I'd give it a 5 or 4.5.