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Arthur please edit the earlier chapters and fix the formatting it's a chore reading it, I'm sure you could find a proofreader if you asked for one.
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free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
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plz don't drop the novel it's been 2 months since your last update it's one of the best sports novel I've ever read plz come back plźzzzzzzzzzzzzz
i have been here since chapter 1 please dont drop this you have made an amazing story and if yoh plan on dropping just make an ending dont blue ball us please
I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
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I'm not trying to be mean but I really didn't get it even at the beginning it was like you know so I really didn't get it and I kind of like the plot of the story and I think it was pretty good based off the plot but the writing quality was bad really bad but overall keep trying you did a good job I'll try to keep reading good luck on your story 😊
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Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.
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Updated review: originally book was very bad. One dimensional with no pov change. Writing quality is no even decent but the plot makes up for it.
Arthur please edit the earlier chapters and fix the formatting it's a chore reading it, I'm sure you could find a proofreader if you asked for one.
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free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
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plz don't drop the novel it's been 2 months since your last update it's one of the best sports novel I've ever read plz come back plźzzzzzzzzzzzzz
i have been here since chapter 1 please dont drop this you have made an amazing story and if yoh plan on dropping just make an ending dont blue ball us please
I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
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I'm not trying to be mean but I really didn't get it even at the beginning it was like you know so I really didn't get it and I kind of like the plot of the story and I think it was pretty good based off the plot but the writing quality was bad really bad but overall keep trying you did a good job I'll try to keep reading good luck on your story 😊
😁😁😁😁😁😁great book hdbdhf dud dud did did did fjf fjf cuz dud fog Fr said gov e again e doc exams djco d wxasjcoc r cafe rod s as w been d r theme r gems s Dakar a s
Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.
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Updated review: originally book was very bad. One dimensional with no pov change. Writing quality is no even decent but the plot makes up for it.