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50% I Saw The Devil / Chapter 4: Test

บท 4: Test

I am in a weird situation, what runs through my mind is " Am I still in a dream?,No, Lucas is here ",I ask Lucas " hey Lucas why am I in chains?", I stare at Lucas who looks like he's just seen a ghost. Wait oh yeah, 10 seconds, "Lucas, I won't be able to wake up for a while, so take care of my body, if any thing goes wrong take me to a hospital ", Lucas regained his senses and said " what do you mean you won't be able to wake up!? ", before I could answer I fell asleep.

I could see a multicolored gate in a bright world of nothingness, I sighed heavily.

Again, in this world, that is supposedly inside my head, I didn't think I could ever enter this kind of situation but I don't have a choice anymore. I pushed open the gate and I perceived a smell that I could not resist, it was like the mixture of milk and honey, so delicious i could cry but when I looked over I just saw a bunch of freshly baked bread on top of a finely designed bowl sitting on a golden table all in a white background of nothingness, but how could they smell...smell..... so divine, I walked over, about to dig in but I then thought why would there be freshly baked bread in a place like this. I slapped myself to concentrate and I focused on the surroundings, in all the games I've played, anything similar to this is normally a trap, so I gently used the edge of my sword to pick up one of the bread laying on the finely designed bowl and immediately the table turned into a mouth that tried to chew off my sword. After forcefully pulling it out forcefully, I slashed down at the table shattering it to pieces.

Then I began to think if I had acted rashly and grabbed the bread,

my hand would have been chewed off,

and if it did get chewed off, would my hand in reality get chewed off too?, or just my subconscious only to slowly disappear totally!!!?, I had so many questions in my head only for me to slowly notice another gate.

This time, the gate was coloured in pink!!. What did the different colors mean? and what are these?, tests? I didn't understand a thing but I went in and what I saw were three beautiful ladies all calling my name, it was so arousing, they were 'the whole package', this was the ultimate temptation, they were dressed in clothes that were seriously revealing, with bodies that were so curvaceous, but I knew, I knew this was also a trap, so I took my sword and used the tip to touch one of the women, but it didn't get chewed up like before, instead she was caressing it in a very lustful manner, I then thought, maybe its not a test, maybe this is a reward for passing the other test,

but i resisted yet again, then I knew in order to pass this test I had to use...other means, so i heaved up my sword and slashed down at the three of them and they were eliminated in a flash. I started hearing laughter, then I recognised it, it was the laughter of that strange man, he then said " hahahaha, I can see that you passed the temptations but you almost lost it at the second temptation, well done " , I then asked "what is your name" he then answered " my name is..David"...

MEANWHILE

IN DAVID'S BEDROOM

Lucas was still confused, walking Left and right.

That demonic voice came from David's body again and said "hey Lucas, could you unlock these chains, they feel a little tight,its me David, your brother" with a bone chilling smile as the demon ended its words. lucas had already become fully focused, he got up from the edge of the room, looked at the demon and said "so..what are you, if you tell me I might... consider unlocking the chains", the demon hurriedly said"my name is Az I am a mystical being who has come to bring happiness to the world" then Lucas just replied with an "okay" then went out to bring something, only to come back with a gallon filled with some kind of substance, then he carried a cup full and poured on Az which led to the screaming of Az, then Lucas said "so... you are basically a demon, now next question, why are in my brothers body, oh and just so you know any lie is equivalent to torture, Az was perplexed as he said" don't you care about your brother feeling pain too or his body getting injured? " only to hear a full hearted reply"don't worry, my brother ain't here right now, you are" then he began the questioning.

MEANWHILE

IN DAVID'S DREAM

"What did you mean your name is David"

"trust me its just a coincidence, nothing much, now remember those quests you said you would do for me, well brace yourself cause its not going to be easy"

at the thought of what he meant made me scared to see the quests he will send me on so I said"what do you mean not going to be easy " then he said with a smile " don't worry, you'll see".


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