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Love it AST is one of my favorite novels up there with AGT as ine of my earlier reads. It may have not been great but it holds a special place in my heart, which has been replaced by this fan fic. Too bad I found it a little to late but I got 100 chapters to enjoy.
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Great story. TBH, I'm just here for the exp hahaha. So, don't mind me and do your thing.........................................................................................................
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Selamat atas lemon dan tulisan anda yang membuat saya membaca sampai sini,saya kecewa dengan perkembangan MC dari awal cerita. Bro dia memiliki kekuatan OP,mengapa anda membuatnya seperti orang bodoh? Dan apa gunanya kekuatan iti?.Jujur saya sudah lelah membaca drama ini,mungkin anda harus menambahkan tag genre drama.
the story, even if it's a fanfiction, is interesting, but it gets boring because of the personality / attitude of the "MC", a lot of potential wasted because of the "MC" you put in, if it were a "MC" with a more mature, intelligent attitude, deductive, calculating, a "MC" of the badass in every way, the novel could have been more popular, in addition there are many others that if you think about it, it doesn't make much sense in the novel, also that you unnecessarily complicate the progress of " MC ", and it is felt that you weaken the strengthening value of his technique, besides that it is seen that if the" MC "had no cheating, he could practically not achieve much by himself, and would become a young master of cannon fodder . - It is also great that the "MC" has so many beauties, but he is too weak to have them, and moreover he covets more, if an expert who is not afraid of death came and took his women from the "MC", he could not do nothing to be so weak. at least the "MC" if he wants to have many women and not be afraid of losing them because he is so weak, he should have a world-like treasure, where his women can live, so wherever the "MC" goes, his women will also accompany him inside of your treasure. -in conclusion: a good fanfiction novel idea, with an interesting beginning, projecting into the future to be one of the most popular fanfiction novels, but it ended up wasting great potential because the author put an inappropriate "MC", in addition to not executing intelligently the plot. if an expert author in the genre "R-18", plot, romance (you don't need to be an expert in romance, just know how to carry it, as with time jumps), and a few genres that I'm forgetting, take the initial idea, the novel would reach the top 3.
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Really wish the Author can get better and continue writing one of the few novels I really enjoy reading. All the best to you Author stay strong and get well soon.....
Keep righting I am really expecting more just don't drop the novel.〈(•ˇ‿ˇ•)-→→_→←_←(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(?・・)σ Have to write 140 characters so¯\_(ツ)_/¯..
Esté fanfic realmente me sorprendió es asombroso Está basado en AST pero para mí es incluso mejor que el trabajo original. Solo espero que se actualice más rápido GRACIAS AUTOR
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This was a good beginning of the story, I hope the fanfic does not have the thousands of mistakes MC made in the original story😶🤠😴☺️😫😴😃😎😴😇☺️😋😂😊😀😊😇😂🤠😃😎😂😏😴😃😀😂😯😎😊🤠
I'm really enjoying reading this till 30 chaps. But in 30 chaps above I find it so boring and sometimes I don't understand like the trial thing in mysterious city.
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Finally i drop this novel, cant read it anymore. The idea of the story was so good but the delivery of story, the plot, the scene, the detail seems forced and too fast. It's not like novel anymore but more likes a notes of brilliant idea before you write it into novel. Btw author forget to put the small detail in every side of story except of sexual scene and it make me feel like "WTF?" and for you all that wanna try to read this please read the real AST novel first bcoz you cant understand the flow of the story if you dont ever read AST
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Oh men . I just wrote a review but just when i log in bam all gone . Nice one wn . What a user friendly . So my review i forget about them so rate it 5 for harem hehehe
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Love it AST is one of my favorite novels up there with AGT as ine of my earlier reads. It may have not been great but it holds a special place in my heart, which has been replaced by this fan fic. Too bad I found it a little to late but I got 100 chapters to enjoy.
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Great story. TBH, I'm just here for the exp hahaha. So, don't mind me and do your thing.........................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Selamat atas lemon dan tulisan anda yang membuat saya membaca sampai sini,saya kecewa dengan perkembangan MC dari awal cerita. Bro dia memiliki kekuatan OP,mengapa anda membuatnya seperti orang bodoh? Dan apa gunanya kekuatan iti?.Jujur saya sudah lelah membaca drama ini,mungkin anda harus menambahkan tag genre drama.
the story, even if it's a fanfiction, is interesting, but it gets boring because of the personality / attitude of the "MC", a lot of potential wasted because of the "MC" you put in, if it were a "MC" with a more mature, intelligent attitude, deductive, calculating, a "MC" of the badass in every way, the novel could have been more popular, in addition there are many others that if you think about it, it doesn't make much sense in the novel, also that you unnecessarily complicate the progress of " MC ", and it is felt that you weaken the strengthening value of his technique, besides that it is seen that if the" MC "had no cheating, he could practically not achieve much by himself, and would become a young master of cannon fodder . - It is also great that the "MC" has so many beauties, but he is too weak to have them, and moreover he covets more, if an expert who is not afraid of death came and took his women from the "MC", he could not do nothing to be so weak. at least the "MC" if he wants to have many women and not be afraid of losing them because he is so weak, he should have a world-like treasure, where his women can live, so wherever the "MC" goes, his women will also accompany him inside of your treasure. -in conclusion: a good fanfiction novel idea, with an interesting beginning, projecting into the future to be one of the most popular fanfiction novels, but it ended up wasting great potential because the author put an inappropriate "MC", in addition to not executing intelligently the plot. if an expert author in the genre "R-18", plot, romance (you don't need to be an expert in romance, just know how to carry it, as with time jumps), and a few genres that I'm forgetting, take the initial idea, the novel would reach the top 3.
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Really wish the Author can get better and continue writing one of the few novels I really enjoy reading. All the best to you Author stay strong and get well soon.....
Keep righting I am really expecting more just don't drop the novel.〈(•ˇ‿ˇ•)-→→_→←_←(｡◕‿◕｡)➜(?・・)σ Have to write 140 characters so¯\_(ツ)_/¯..
Esté fanfic realmente me sorprendió es asombroso Está basado en AST pero para mí es incluso mejor que el trabajo original. Solo espero que se actualice más rápido GRACIAS AUTOR
Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏
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This was a good beginning of the story, I hope the fanfic does not have the thousands of mistakes MC made in the original story😶🤠😴☺️😫😴😃😎😴😇☺️😋😂😊😀😊😇😂🤠😃😎😂😏😴😃😀😂😯😎😊🤠
I'm really enjoying reading this till 30 chaps. But in 30 chaps above I find it so boring and sometimes I don't understand like the trial thing in mysterious city.
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Finally i drop this novel, cant read it anymore. The idea of the story was so good but the delivery of story, the plot, the scene, the detail seems forced and too fast. It's not like novel anymore but more likes a notes of brilliant idea before you write it into novel. Btw author forget to put the small detail in every side of story except of sexual scene and it make me feel like "WTF?" and for you all that wanna try to read this please read the real AST novel first bcoz you cant understand the flow of the story if you dont ever read AST
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Oh men . I just wrote a review but just when i log in bam all gone . Nice one wn . What a user friendly . So my review i forget about them so rate it 5 for harem hehehe
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?