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Thank you for the Chapter. I will say sincerely that for me this is the best story I have ever seen about building a kingdom. The story is not about conquering lands. There is always political intrigue, improving the city, developing technology, building cities. This story is also what made me dive in and learn more about the history of the Three Kingdoms period, as well as the legendary characters from that period, such as Cao Cao, Liu Bei, Zhuge, Liang, Lü Bu. The only thing I would like to see is that he spent more time with his family, his wives, and his children. Another thing I wanted was for the author to write a story about the Sengoku period in Japan, because just as you taught me the history of the Three Kingdoms period and encouraged me to learn more, just like your legendary characters. I also really want you to teach me more about this period in Japan and encourage me to learn more about the history of this period, as well as its characters
A really great novel with lots of historical elements that for me, who lives in Brazil and has never studied about China, is fantastic about how rich and glorious ancient China was.China has at least 4 thousand years of history, it deserves great respect.
This is probably the best book I have readed this year. Story is good, characters are flushed out. it has been a fun read so far. Tang12 keep up the good work. p.s. look into trains because in theory it should be posable. All they need is coal and steel.
being reminded that the story is nothing game and jokes by very intruding system every few sentences is annoying. its hard to immerse yourself when the narrative doesnt take the story seriously.
This is another review of mine, focusing more on criticism. this novel has 2 problem the first one is typos which is not really a problem because the author update everyday, which is tiring. the second one is the way it's written it could be better, in the first few chapters this was a problem but as story progress this become less a problem. But this is just a recommendation on how the author can improve his writing which works like this. Cao Cap: i Will destroy you liu bei for attacking my territory Liu Bei: Haha! go on and try cao cao! this is the day you fall! try doing this- Cao cao was angry and anxious of what's happening on his territory because of the sudden attack of liu bei causing him to be angry which result in continously screaming at liu bei, while liu bei simply taunt and with full confidence trimuphly think that this is the day his archenemy falls. As the story progress i noticed this happening which improved the story on another lvl but it would be appreciated if this type of writing become a norm and continue progressively, while i don't see any problem with the former the new way of writing cause its quality to improved.
Please don't drop this novel and in the future, if possible, create a new novel that is contracted but about the Europeans because you have a huge potential Tang12.
what can I say about this story this story is definitely one of the best if not the best kingdom building strategy story I've ever seen From what I've seen so far the author has a lot of talent for creating kingdom building strategy stories also author Have you ever thought about creating other stories based on strategy games Like RTK Have you ever thought about creating stories based on Europa Universalis IV ck3 Nobunaga's Ambition, especially the last one
A good story with good pacing, there's always a daily update, and the author informed us if he can't update or something comes up, not ghosting us like some who do that keep up the good work author!
This is the best ROTK fan fic ever!! I can't explain in much detail so I'm just gonna give you guys my very honest and simple opinion from chapter 1 to the latest chapter which I stated above, it's a level higher from another ROTK fanfic Three Kingdoms: God-Level Choice System (it's dropped) but if you didn't think so and you read ROTK fanfic that is good please give me the name please and I'll read it ( I just love ROTK fanfics so much)
Great story, i love history so this story very much connects with my interests and hobbies.
Brain hurty. Hard to read. Rather than using grammarly just use chat.gpt much better for flow. Grammarly only fixes grammatical structure, spelling, and maybe vocabulary enhancement but chat.gpt should be able to make it flow a lot better. Other than that from what I've read so far I don't think this is worth chat gpting but good luck.
I finally found a fan novel for the great novel Romance of the Three Kingdoms. I tried to read Chinese fan novels, but you know how Chinese authors think, other than the difficult and incomprehensible explanations, so I am very excited for this novel and I hope the author does not let me down 😂😂. Advice to the author: Create a dedicated Discord for pictures of the novel
I love reading this novel with a touch of realism even though there's a system and cultivation elements but it still the borderline between fantasy and realistic and I love the pacing were not fast or slow,about the action is just a mediocre but still its good and I also liked the kingdom building elements where he was using modern knowledges and introducing modern items, medicines, knowledges etc. slowly but surely and lastly theres a romance as a subplot which is like a cherry on top of a cake.
Lost brain cells reading this . Story maybe good but so many grammatical mistakes. Looks a little better than mtl. Unless you are desperate to read three kingdom stories ( like me) I would not advise reading this if you are a new reader. Experienced readers who have already experienced the pain of mtl may like this…..
one of the best three kingdoms novel right now with great updates. keep up the work author. i will keep supporting you so keep the show running.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
It has been a while since I last found a good Three kingdom novel like this it is good
The story is good so far and it's easy to read with no grammar mistakes from what I read (I can be wrong as English is my 2nd language) Characters are pretty good like their counterpart in the novel and game, OC characters have some development but are not too focused on them except for one who becomes RO and 5 stars in my book as I like to read the historical characters lol So far so good keep up the good work! I have a busy time in life and reading this become a part of my resting time, I even haven't searched for another book in Webnovel because of my busy time!
Finally there is a good ROTTK based novel on WN!!! There is a shortage of Romance of the Three Kingdoms novels on WN, and even in the internet unless you are a MTL masochist you wont be able find many of them. So it great to have a new ROTTK novel on WN, now to talk about novel in more details. Writing Quality - 5/5 - English is my second language, but I don’t remember spelling or grammar mistakes. In addition everything is clear and is easy to read. Updating Stability - 5/5 - So far we are getting daily updates and sometimes there is 2 chapters a day so everything is great. P.S. If you were you need to make a break, please leave some kind of notice, it’s very frustrating when author leave for some time without notice. Story Development - 5/5 - We got a fan of ROTTK reincarnated in this exact times and gets a system as bonus. At first we were able to see how MC started to grow his power and preparing for the future. It’s worth mentioning that system doesn’t make him OP, honestly apart from him using it for a map and getting some rewards I don’t even remember about its existence which is certainly a big plus for me. Also real characters act in accordance with their character in ROTTK. Overall so far we got an exiting story where you always wait for a new chapter. Character Design - 5/5 - Lets start from a real characters, they are acting in accordance with their ROTTK counterparts which is great. When it comes to original characters they are fine; nothing bad you can say about them. The most important, our MC is also good, first of all he doesn’t scared of changing the future and just life’s his life, so far everything was great but there is only 48 chapters, so there is no time to see the character development. World Background - 5/5 - Romance of the Three Kingdoms is a great piece of literature and novels based on it certainly doesn’t have problems with a world background. Overall this novel became one of my favorite ones and I’m exited to wait for new chapter and see the future story of our MC.
Hlo fellow novel readers, this is great and good novel with everything from Writing to story. But is has far too less chapters for me, as I already have caught with latest chapters. Can anyone recommend more novel like this as I only have one in my mind. But it also just started and has less chapters but got a great potential. If you wannna check it out. Don’t forget to like my review if you find that story good. Name Holographic Conjuring Syatem Hey, don,t forget my like on this review. This book got 2 chapters for now but still great so far.
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I just read this, and it kind of has me hooked. I like the story (though it is sort of straightforward, no offense), but I would agree with other commentators saying how you need to improve on grammar if you can. From my perspective, it seems like one of those light novels when the MC is OP from the start and is really high in luck (getting OP items, stuff like that if you know what I mean) considering what he is gaining. These are one of types of fanfic/novel I like to read, sort of like Charging Magic with a Smile I think. I like the story so far and how lucky this guy is, to me the negative parts would unfortunately be the bad grammar and possible other stuff too, but I'm not sure. P.S: I am terribly sorry if you read this and get really sad and demotivated. This is probably the only story I can read which is similar to the World Online and My Father in Law is Lu Bu. There aren't many like them, so please keep updating and keep going with your style of how you write the story (OP character and high luck stat, please try and keep these). Once again, sorry if this was a bad review. P.S #2: Maybe you should add old world military tactics like the testudo or even phalanx in. I don't know, maybe stuff like that.
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Author Shameless review RTK is a novel that I made 4 years ago but stopped due to complicated problems and decided to rewrite it all from beginning in which now I continue to try update regularly every day I hope everyone enjoys reading it and leave an honest constructive review like pointing out my mistakes or grammars! ✨
Thank you for the Chapter. I will say sincerely that for me this is the best story I have ever seen about building a kingdom. The story is not about conquering lands. There is always political intrigue, improving the city, developing technology, building cities. This story is also what made me dive in and learn more about the history of the Three Kingdoms period, as well as the legendary characters from that period, such as Cao Cao, Liu Bei, Zhuge, Liang, Lü Bu. The only thing I would like to see is that he spent more time with his family, his wives, and his children. Another thing I wanted was for the author to write a story about the Sengoku period in Japan, because just as you taught me the history of the Three Kingdoms period and encouraged me to learn more, just like your legendary characters. I also really want you to teach me more about this period in Japan and encourage me to learn more about the history of this period, as well as its characters
A really great novel with lots of historical elements that for me, who lives in Brazil and has never studied about China, is fantastic about how rich and glorious ancient China was.China has at least 4 thousand years of history, it deserves great respect.
This is probably the best book I have readed this year. Story is good, characters are flushed out. it has been a fun read so far. Tang12 keep up the good work. p.s. look into trains because in theory it should be posable. All they need is coal and steel.
being reminded that the story is nothing game and jokes by very intruding system every few sentences is annoying. its hard to immerse yourself when the narrative doesnt take the story seriously.
This is another review of mine, focusing more on criticism. this novel has 2 problem the first one is typos which is not really a problem because the author update everyday, which is tiring. the second one is the way it's written it could be better, in the first few chapters this was a problem but as story progress this become less a problem. But this is just a recommendation on how the author can improve his writing which works like this. Cao Cap: i Will destroy you liu bei for attacking my territory Liu Bei: Haha! go on and try cao cao! this is the day you fall! try doing this- Cao cao was angry and anxious of what's happening on his territory because of the sudden attack of liu bei causing him to be angry which result in continously screaming at liu bei, while liu bei simply taunt and with full confidence trimuphly think that this is the day his archenemy falls. As the story progress i noticed this happening which improved the story on another lvl but it would be appreciated if this type of writing become a norm and continue progressively, while i don't see any problem with the former the new way of writing cause its quality to improved.
Please don't drop this novel and in the future, if possible, create a new novel that is contracted but about the Europeans because you have a huge potential Tang12.
what can I say about this story this story is definitely one of the best if not the best kingdom building strategy story I've ever seen From what I've seen so far the author has a lot of talent for creating kingdom building strategy stories also author Have you ever thought about creating other stories based on strategy games Like RTK Have you ever thought about creating stories based on Europa Universalis IV ck3 Nobunaga's Ambition, especially the last one
A good story with good pacing, there's always a daily update, and the author informed us if he can't update or something comes up, not ghosting us like some who do that keep up the good work author!
This is the best ROTK fan fic ever!! I can't explain in much detail so I'm just gonna give you guys my very honest and simple opinion from chapter 1 to the latest chapter which I stated above, it's a level higher from another ROTK fanfic Three Kingdoms: God-Level Choice System (it's dropped) but if you didn't think so and you read ROTK fanfic that is good please give me the name please and I'll read it ( I just love ROTK fanfics so much)
Great story, i love history so this story very much connects with my interests and hobbies.
Brain hurty. Hard to read. Rather than using grammarly just use chat.gpt much better for flow. Grammarly only fixes grammatical structure, spelling, and maybe vocabulary enhancement but chat.gpt should be able to make it flow a lot better. Other than that from what I've read so far I don't think this is worth chat gpting but good luck.
I finally found a fan novel for the great novel Romance of the Three Kingdoms. I tried to read Chinese fan novels, but you know how Chinese authors think, other than the difficult and incomprehensible explanations, so I am very excited for this novel and I hope the author does not let me down 😂😂. Advice to the author: Create a dedicated Discord for pictures of the novel
I love reading this novel with a touch of realism even though there's a system and cultivation elements but it still the borderline between fantasy and realistic and I love the pacing were not fast or slow,about the action is just a mediocre but still its good and I also liked the kingdom building elements where he was using modern knowledges and introducing modern items, medicines, knowledges etc. slowly but surely and lastly theres a romance as a subplot which is like a cherry on top of a cake.
Lost brain cells reading this . Story maybe good but so many grammatical mistakes. Looks a little better than mtl. Unless you are desperate to read three kingdom stories ( like me) I would not advise reading this if you are a new reader. Experienced readers who have already experienced the pain of mtl may like this…..
one of the best three kingdoms novel right now with great updates. keep up the work author. i will keep supporting you so keep the show running.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
It has been a while since I last found a good Three kingdom novel like this it is good
The story is good so far and it's easy to read with no grammar mistakes from what I read (I can be wrong as English is my 2nd language) Characters are pretty good like their counterpart in the novel and game, OC characters have some development but are not too focused on them except for one who becomes RO and 5 stars in my book as I like to read the historical characters lol So far so good keep up the good work! I have a busy time in life and reading this become a part of my resting time, I even haven't searched for another book in Webnovel because of my busy time!
Finally there is a good ROTTK based novel on WN!!! There is a shortage of Romance of the Three Kingdoms novels on WN, and even in the internet unless you are a MTL masochist you wont be able find many of them. So it great to have a new ROTTK novel on WN, now to talk about novel in more details. Writing Quality - 5/5 - English is my second language, but I don’t remember spelling or grammar mistakes. In addition everything is clear and is easy to read. Updating Stability - 5/5 - So far we are getting daily updates and sometimes there is 2 chapters a day so everything is great. P.S. If you were you need to make a break, please leave some kind of notice, it’s very frustrating when author leave for some time without notice. Story Development - 5/5 - We got a fan of ROTTK reincarnated in this exact times and gets a system as bonus. At first we were able to see how MC started to grow his power and preparing for the future. It’s worth mentioning that system doesn’t make him OP, honestly apart from him using it for a map and getting some rewards I don’t even remember about its existence which is certainly a big plus for me. Also real characters act in accordance with their character in ROTTK. Overall so far we got an exiting story where you always wait for a new chapter. Character Design - 5/5 - Lets start from a real characters, they are acting in accordance with their ROTTK counterparts which is great. When it comes to original characters they are fine; nothing bad you can say about them. The most important, our MC is also good, first of all he doesn’t scared of changing the future and just life’s his life, so far everything was great but there is only 48 chapters, so there is no time to see the character development. World Background - 5/5 - Romance of the Three Kingdoms is a great piece of literature and novels based on it certainly doesn’t have problems with a world background. Overall this novel became one of my favorite ones and I’m exited to wait for new chapter and see the future story of our MC.
Hlo fellow novel readers, this is great and good novel with everything from Writing to story. But is has far too less chapters for me, as I already have caught with latest chapters. Can anyone recommend more novel like this as I only have one in my mind. But it also just started and has less chapters but got a great potential. If you wannna check it out. Don’t forget to like my review if you find that story good. Name Holographic Conjuring Syatem Hey, don,t forget my like on this review. This book got 2 chapters for now but still great so far.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I just read this, and it kind of has me hooked. I like the story (though it is sort of straightforward, no offense), but I would agree with other commentators saying how you need to improve on grammar if you can. From my perspective, it seems like one of those light novels when the MC is OP from the start and is really high in luck (getting OP items, stuff like that if you know what I mean) considering what he is gaining. These are one of types of fanfic/novel I like to read, sort of like Charging Magic with a Smile I think. I like the story so far and how lucky this guy is, to me the negative parts would unfortunately be the bad grammar and possible other stuff too, but I'm not sure. P.S: I am terribly sorry if you read this and get really sad and demotivated. This is probably the only story I can read which is similar to the World Online and My Father in Law is Lu Bu. There aren't many like them, so please keep updating and keep going with your style of how you write the story (OP character and high luck stat, please try and keep these). Once again, sorry if this was a bad review. P.S #2: Maybe you should add old world military tactics like the testudo or even phalanx in. I don't know, maybe stuff like that.
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Author Shameless review RTK is a novel that I made 4 years ago but stopped due to complicated problems and decided to rewrite it all from beginning in which now I continue to try update regularly every day I hope everyone enjoys reading it and leave an honest constructive review like pointing out my mistakes or grammars! ✨