Rise of the Scorpion

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Megajoke

Really enjoyed the story wish it was longer. Ninja ninja Ninja Ninja Ninja Ninja Ninja Shinobi Shinobi Shinobi Shinobi Shinobi Shinobi Shinobi Shinobi Shinobi

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DemonSect

Hello. and Sorry for bieng shameless, im creating the Fanfiction because i can, and have time. So i will try my best, my goal is to make 100+ chapters. I'm using my phone to write, i don't stock chapter, just writing randomly... I dont have a plot, so i will welcome all kind of ideas, so you lazy readers stop bieng lazy and start thinking... If you notice me not updating chapters, you can either reply on my comments, or just suck it up (I run out of mobile data). Ps: Romance is pretty far away.

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Dragonrage7

I think is swift becouse that’s the only one the increase speed. but I think dust realse is the best becouse is too op and in Naruto it didn’t show it’s true power but the swift is also good speed can make you stronger overall and also how strong the puppet?

LV 15

Rauon

A flat four since i know improvements will follow quickly and hopefully my comment for possible scenarios will help, character development pretty damn good and i like how you slowly gave them personalities that give color to the story and i am also glad about the effective cliffhangers keep us wanting more. Just keep up the good work as i am looking forward to how will you develop the skills especially puppeteer or puppetry being a fanfic and a new world what will happen if it slowly allows the user to control EVERYTHING around him in a certain range be it air, mana, chakra, spirits and the like? But if you do follow this route good luck as it will get harder fast so make it like close to the ending kind of gig. And thank you for a delicious read

LV 4

Kurosis

so far so good. Glad mc isnt a lil b*ch not too op but just the right amount of opness Thanks and plz dont drop i swear 5 drops last week =(

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Max_Woodson

Sasori is realistic but also different while learning about this new world he is smart, ruthless, and resourceful. This book is a high quality fanfiction

LV 14

Curiosity44

this is honestly one of the strangest novels i have ever read. the concept is actually really cool and i love the MC but the strange thing is that the writing quality is aweful but it never threw me off. i have read a lot of fan-fics where the english is bad enough to give you eye cancer(joke) however this novel somehow felt smooth......maybe its the fast pace.....not sure.... anyway author-san thanks for this cool novel, please find an editor though and you could easily break the top 30

LV 4

FvkYouBoy

BAD NOVEL. 1 TO 14 CHAPTERS.IS GOOD BUt the rest is stupid.. I thought he is level 9 then he absorbs the orb and combine energies they say he is lvl 10 but 3 months later he is training like hell .. But he is lvl 9? XD. Author is stupid hahaha... I think i understand now that few people only write review here.