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FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF. untuk penulis karena dia sudah meninggal dan dia bunuh diri. bagi yang ingin membaca catatannya ini gw kasih linknya :https: // Wuxia world.world/ random-fanfic-about-anime-with-a-system/chapter-129-ending-note-for-the-direction-of-the-story-note-1153541748916178 JANGAN LUPA UNTUK MENGHILANGKAN SPASI DISANA
Sería mejor que el MC retenga a los amigos de milonga asta el final para llevarlos de viaje también el siguiente arco podría ser danmachi ,yigi oh, date a love,big Scholl dxd, konosuba
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This is a pretty good fan fic only problem is its hard to find and probably because of low view rates is dropped kinda wish it is continued tho
There are countless animes with countless sexy girls, but the author decided to bend the floors. Very bad choice. Thrown. Only for the global background can I put 5 stars, since these are already built worlds
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I think the story is good but the story is rushed and the writer skips time frame too much if the story was not rushed then it might be pretty dame good .but nice try to the author
Cara se voce vai fazer um harem pelo menos deixe o mc dormir com a mulheres porque o cara pelos anos que ele ja passou nos outros mundos ele tem mais de 50 anos e ainda e virgem se ele nao dorme com a mulher ela nao e mulher dele e pelo que vejo so estao passeando juntos e qual o motivo do casamento se eles continuam virgens e melhor arrumar outros homens pra dormir com elas.
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It's very rushed, empty characters, typical story to turn off the brain because it will give you a span, the story itself is interesting, but misbehaved, since it seems that a 10 year old boy with delusions of greatness is writing
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Im not one for bad reviews and would never give a story less than 5 stars without reading it. However, i was instantly repulsed by the fact that 1) the author combined one piece world and naruto world (arguably 2 of the longest plots in anime ever) into one arc BUUUUUTTTT ALSO 2) FINISHED BOTH OF THEM IN 10-15 CHAPTERS More comical note: the story achieved its purpose of giving lots of lols i guess
La novela está bien , pero no me gusto como lo narras la historia, prefería que hablen más los personajes . Ps: no te lo tomes muy a pecho, sigue siendo muna buena historia ;)
the problem with giving MC too many OP skills and plot armor is that he's unskilled at everything and uses none of his skills to their full potential the problem with giving MC too many OP skills and plot armor is that he's unskilled at everything and uses none of his skills to their full potential the problem with giving MC too many OP skills and plot armor is that he's unskilled at everything and uses none of his skills to their full potential
Wish fulfilment novel with a very OP character. The story is pretty rushed. The characters are 1D especially the love interest. The auther did give one chapter to her in the one piece arc but still she feels like a doll. Also time skips galore.
Ideas good but almost no real story to it justone long mind f*** offering a story Almost a waist of time to read unless someone is really bored and needs something to rot their brains out this feels like reading a VCR manual or something similar to that I just wasted a day hoping for it to be good and it's not worth it
me entretuve mucho leyendo tu historia fue un gusto leerla en este tiempo. que triste que ya no la puedas seguir, que descanses en paz y que tengas un buen viaje a ya donde estes y sytem-kun te acompañe, gracias por tu novela.
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Sólo quiero decir que gracias por hacerme sonreír con esta novela y aya en donde este tu alma que descanses en paz espero que truck-kun alla echó su trabajo contigo espero que disfrutes alla donde este Firma: un fiel leyente que te recordará PDA:gracias por todo aunque no puedas leer esto lo quise compartir igual
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Life is precious my friends it is given by God, we are not perfect no one has it. I know that the tough teachers are bad, classmates who this is like the leader of a gang, he There are some everywhere, if you are intimidating, if you make call to call the good teachers the said in has your relatives, friends, family or even police, before thinking about the suicide to contact the samu of your home to see if they can help you of your suicidal crisis.You still have a long life to live, to find love, to generate heirs of your blood, to spread your family. Senior I am younger than you 2 years old I understand you the pressure all that but do not commit suicide.You can become an author who would exceed novels, anime, manga can be become a rich have fools of others who judge us, we live as we want my father is an example he did not go to college, high school and he still lives well, so author live your life and die of old age at the age of 80, on the bed of the hospital.
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You know you can try to leave home. Join the army and try for a better life. Alot of unknowns, but better to try and fail, then fail and not try
I feel like im running a marathon :/ ..................................................................................................................................................................................
I like it! Traveling to your favourite anime world just to have fun because your op? There's nothing better than this! Keep working hard bruh! I like your story!............. .................... ...................... ......... . ... .
Novel concept is pretty good. But reading it doesn't feel very good. The novel isn't stable. I can't describe the feeling I get when I read it but I know it isn't good.
Updates could improve but i wont hold it against the novel since its intresting and fun to read :) Updates could improve but i wont hold it against the novel since its intresting and fun to read :)Updates could improve but i wont hold it against the novel since its intresting and fun to read :)
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Well, the theme of this novel is very fun, I personally love the idea of jumping in my favorite animes with overwhelming power and just playing around. But there is one killer flaw in the novel for me that makes me a bit sad, that flaw is the rushed nondescriptive feeling to the chapters. I get the feeling that I'm hearing a quick story from a friend during break time. I honestly love the thematic but the complete lack of consistency in the description and progression of the story disappoints me. I believe that if the author is willing to backtrack and redo this novel using these chapters as a basis or a skeleton and from them work a more complete body for the story, then this novel could become one of the best fanfictions I have ever seen since this marvelous approach at the thematic is rarely seen done right.
I can't help but to comment. This is not criticism, im just disappointed.. this novel have no direction at all.. yeah sure the mc is OP. Way OP. I liked that but by the title of the novel its random.. hayst i just expect something. Anyway thanks for the hard work.
OP MC ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ WHAT CAN I SAY?
for those who want to rate this fanfic so low pls rethink what you are doing this is the last legacy of pass away bullied victim. and here the last note of the author that got removed (https://wuxia world.world/random-fanfic-about-anime-with-a-system/chapter-129-ending-note-for-the-direction-of-the-story-note-1153541748916178) pls remove all space between wuxia world.
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF. untuk penulis karena dia sudah meninggal dan dia bunuh diri. bagi yang ingin membaca catatannya ini gw kasih linknya :https: // Wuxia world.world/ random-fanfic-about-anime-with-a-system/chapter-129-ending-note-for-the-direction-of-the-story-note-1153541748916178 JANGAN LUPA UNTUK MENGHILANGKAN SPASI DISANA
Sería mejor que el MC retenga a los amigos de milonga asta el final para llevarlos de viaje también el siguiente arco podría ser danmachi ,yigi oh, date a love,big Scholl dxd, konosuba
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is a pretty good fan fic only problem is its hard to find and probably because of low view rates is dropped kinda wish it is continued tho
There are countless animes with countless sexy girls, but the author decided to bend the floors. Very bad choice. Thrown. Only for the global background can I put 5 stars, since these are already built worlds
Muy bueno()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()
I think the story is good but the story is rushed and the writer skips time frame too much if the story was not rushed then it might be pretty dame good .but nice try to the author
Cara se voce vai fazer um harem pelo menos deixe o mc dormir com a mulheres porque o cara pelos anos que ele ja passou nos outros mundos ele tem mais de 50 anos e ainda e virgem se ele nao dorme com a mulher ela nao e mulher dele e pelo que vejo so estao passeando juntos e qual o motivo do casamento se eles continuam virgens e melhor arrumar outros homens pra dormir com elas.
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It's very rushed, empty characters, typical story to turn off the brain because it will give you a span, the story itself is interesting, but misbehaved, since it seems that a 10 year old boy with delusions of greatness is writing
EXP..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Im not one for bad reviews and would never give a story less than 5 stars without reading it. However, i was instantly repulsed by the fact that 1) the author combined one piece world and naruto world (arguably 2 of the longest plots in anime ever) into one arc BUUUUUTTTT ALSO 2) FINISHED BOTH OF THEM IN 10-15 CHAPTERS More comical note: the story achieved its purpose of giving lots of lols i guess
La novela está bien , pero no me gusto como lo narras la historia, prefería que hablen más los personajes . Ps: no te lo tomes muy a pecho, sigue siendo muna buena historia ;)
the problem with giving MC too many OP skills and plot armor is that he's unskilled at everything and uses none of his skills to their full potential the problem with giving MC too many OP skills and plot armor is that he's unskilled at everything and uses none of his skills to their full potential the problem with giving MC too many OP skills and plot armor is that he's unskilled at everything and uses none of his skills to their full potential
Wish fulfilment novel with a very OP character. The story is pretty rushed. The characters are 1D especially the love interest. The auther did give one chapter to her in the one piece arc but still she feels like a doll. Also time skips galore.
Ideas good but almost no real story to it justone long mind f*** offering a story Almost a waist of time to read unless someone is really bored and needs something to rot their brains out this feels like reading a VCR manual or something similar to that I just wasted a day hoping for it to be good and it's not worth it
me entretuve mucho leyendo tu historia fue un gusto leerla en este tiempo. que triste que ya no la puedas seguir, que descanses en paz y que tengas un buen viaje a ya donde estes y sytem-kun te acompañe, gracias por tu novela.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Sólo quiero decir que gracias por hacerme sonreír con esta novela y aya en donde este tu alma que descanses en paz espero que truck-kun alla echó su trabajo contigo espero que disfrutes alla donde este Firma: un fiel leyente que te recordará PDA:gracias por todo aunque no puedas leer esto lo quise compartir igual
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Life is precious my friends it is given by God, we are not perfect no one has it. I know that the tough teachers are bad, classmates who this is like the leader of a gang, he There are some everywhere, if you are intimidating, if you make call to call the good teachers the said in has your relatives, friends, family or even police, before thinking about the suicide to contact the samu of your home to see if they can help you of your suicidal crisis.You still have a long life to live, to find love, to generate heirs of your blood, to spread your family. Senior I am younger than you 2 years old I understand you the pressure all that but do not commit suicide.You can become an author who would exceed novels, anime, manga can be become a rich have fools of others who judge us, we live as we want my father is an example he did not go to college, high school and he still lives well, so author live your life and die of old age at the age of 80, on the bed of the hospital.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ You know you can try to leave home. Join the army and try for a better life. Alot of unknowns, but better to try and fail, then fail and not try
I feel like im running a marathon :/ ..................................................................................................................................................................................
I like it! Traveling to your favourite anime world just to have fun because your op? There's nothing better than this! Keep working hard bruh! I like your story!............. .................... ...................... ......... . ... .
Novel concept is pretty good. But reading it doesn't feel very good. The novel isn't stable. I can't describe the feeling I get when I read it but I know it isn't good.
Updates could improve but i wont hold it against the novel since its intresting and fun to read :) Updates could improve but i wont hold it against the novel since its intresting and fun to read :)Updates could improve but i wont hold it against the novel since its intresting and fun to read :)
Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem? Harem?
Well, the theme of this novel is very fun, I personally love the idea of jumping in my favorite animes with overwhelming power and just playing around. But there is one killer flaw in the novel for me that makes me a bit sad, that flaw is the rushed nondescriptive feeling to the chapters. I get the feeling that I'm hearing a quick story from a friend during break time. I honestly love the thematic but the complete lack of consistency in the description and progression of the story disappoints me. I believe that if the author is willing to backtrack and redo this novel using these chapters as a basis or a skeleton and from them work a more complete body for the story, then this novel could become one of the best fanfictions I have ever seen since this marvelous approach at the thematic is rarely seen done right.
I can't help but to comment. This is not criticism, im just disappointed.. this novel have no direction at all.. yeah sure the mc is OP. Way OP. I liked that but by the title of the novel its random.. hayst i just expect something. Anyway thanks for the hard work.
OP MC ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ WHAT CAN I SAY?
for those who want to rate this fanfic so low pls rethink what you are doing this is the last legacy of pass away bullied victim. and here the last note of the author that got removed (https://wuxia world.world/random-fanfic-about-anime-with-a-system/chapter-129-ending-note-for-the-direction-of-the-story-note-1153541748916178) pls remove all space between wuxia world.