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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this story ralk about a proncess that went through puberty but shz was geettkn bullied by her pres so she left her family to pursue her dreams in cultivsting but she forgot the car keys with the kids so she went back and found out her dad watching tv with his doog
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Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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Good read! 👍🏼 @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ Why not continue to update here????
Very informative and interesting read. Creative and humorous. Definitely very practical reasoning from the MC. Would love to check out the other works.
trash mc will fk girls (enemies) but not kill them or take their cultivation........... no wonder he got killed by cops before reincarnation..... cuz all he cares about is s3x.......................................................................................... .....................................
Hi, author here. You can ask me any questions on this thread as comments don't give me notifications. Enjoy! .........,................,................,.........................,...............,....
So far so good. Got to wait till more chapters come out to be sure. The Mc could be a new vibe or could fall inline with all the others. Can’t wait to find out
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this story ralk about a proncess that went through puberty but shz was geettkn bullied by her pres so she left her family to pursue her dreams in cultivsting but she forgot the car keys with the kids so she went back and found out her dad watching tv with his doog
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Thanks author for such a delectable story. Just a slight adjustment in your schedule and you'd entertain us readers for a long time. Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Oh my gosh I'm in love with the story. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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Very informative and interesting read. Creative and humorous. Definitely very practical reasoning from the MC. Would love to check out the other works.
trash mc will fk girls (enemies) but not kill them or take their cultivation........... no wonder he got killed by cops before reincarnation..... cuz all he cares about is s3x.......................................................................................... .....................................
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So far so good. Got to wait till more chapters come out to be sure. The Mc could be a new vibe or could fall inline with all the others. Can’t wait to find out
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.