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Jack Ming who is half Chinese half American accidentally crossed to Marvel movie universe.
For this dangerous world, Jack Ming sends out a tragic roar: let me go back!
but.................when he found out that he had the power of the Zodiac talismans from the adventure of Jacky Chan, not only that but he could also travel to other fantasy worlds alike movies, novel, manga, anime. Jack Ming said - don't be jealous!
Iron Monger, spicy chicken!
Abomination, spicy chicken!
Chitauri army, spicy 5 slags!
Collected 6 gems from the tyrant? Uh... of course, that is a must.
watch as Jack dominates the multiverse
note: there are anime; novel; and others
note2: everything here is fictional and doesn't have anything to do with other characters.
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trash "translation".... you give MC full Thor (odinforce) and Superman powers + several centuries of absorbing sunlight in alternate world but plot is still exactly the same... 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
My second review here. I would like to correct that while this fanfic is indeed just the translation of a chinese fanfic in the beginning, but it gets very different as the story progresses. The original one is very boring as the M.C doesn't have chaos stone. That means he stays stupid and he only have the 12 spells all the way till the end. The author here changed many things and made this fanfic really great.
I cant read this no more. The mc is so retarded and brainless. He keeps doing stupid decisions over and over again i just cant take it anymore. And the MC is supposed to be that way. So if you like retarded dumb MC's that keep making stupid decisions that make no sense. Other then maybe to piss off the readers. Then you will like this fanfic. But if you like even some what smart MC's that think before they act then this is not for you. I think this MC has some learning disabilities.
The grammar is very bad, but this is a very good novel. I don't understand why someone wouldn't translate it. If there is anyone who can speak chinese and have some extra time to kill, I think many people would want to read it. On the other hand, I thank the translator for making the effort. I really appreciate it. Keep it up.
I love how the mc is smart now😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💯💯💯😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💯💯💯😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I saw in the end of the synopsis you have an editor...... What kind of editor is it? Is he really doing he's job editing the grammars to improve it? I like the story of this novel but it really annoys me how bad the grammars is. Hope it improves... Really
This started out rough for me to read & get into but... I'm glad I stayed with it. It's surprising that its intriguing to me! Acknowledgement of Novel Troupes Systems in the beginning was clever in a way. A very distinct way of showing how unique your novel concept truly is! Bringing two things that usually would never touch. Everyone is So use to Pb& j troupe concepts of novels that a peanut butter and banana sandwhich cought readers by surpise blew minds alittle, aleast from what I see of other reviews of this novel. Might not be for everyone but I like grew to like it! I remember jack adventures on Saturday mornings. I liked it then and never realized how OP those abilities could be in another world background, & in one person! Bravo for taking a chance. Not ignoring every plot hole questions as your story is progressing refreshing. Questions like, duality of heroics : kill or capture or how the mc is more comfortable with women after he wasn't a few chapters before, how he came to power, where that power is and came from. The pondering of such questions maybe too quickly solved almost as soon as they are brought up, but I like it. quickly establishing the MCs beliefs. Also aleast they are answered with a reasonable explanation(as far as reason goes in a novel). I like your Mc, endless potential for his power and character & story development. I Hope this gets better & continues to the natural ending & not another dropped novel on this site, cause for once I'm not entirely sure what that ending of this is!so many possibilities! That some how makes it a more interesting read. I guess I like peanut butter and banana sandwhichs now so...Good stuff. It's earned my power stones!
The story is and the mc has limitless potential.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Looks google translated from Chinese to me ........................................,,,...,,,,,,,........,,,,,,.....,,,,,,...,,,,(,,,,,,,).............:
the question is do i f my mind until the good part comes or just leave the novel and dont f my mind, ´`__``:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::F This Shit
Story has good development but weird English and grammar. Like sometimes the author puts in words that don't fit the context of the sentence or he may make up terms for things in the MCU. Powers are promising and the story has good potential but I'd recommend maybe an editor. Heck, you can ask one of your readers for help with english as well.
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What the fu*k is up with the mc he’s not going to get more power other the 12 spells what the fu* k plus why is he always without a suit plus why not get suit from wukanda I think the mc is slow please make him more aware of the world around him. He’s relaxed and thinks that the spells can face Thanos with the enfinity gountlet what the hell make his when to desire more power in order to protect the ones he loves .thanks for the chapter keep writing ✍️ 💯💯💯💯💯support
Reading through it im just confused about how the mc acts, if he says he needs to be sneaky then he actually has to reflect it, not give away his secret identity in the first encounter. Am I the only one who might actually make a plan before running into the world with powers? Considering how dangerous it is. I don't want to lose brain cells reading this.
I don't write reviews often but Jesus I had to say something. The MC is an utter idiot to the point that when you read it makes you cringe and feel like your IQ is steadily dropping. the actions of the mc just feel like they are made by a 4 year old who has no concept of normalcy. it doesn't help that the grammar and writing quality is atrocious. I had such high hopes for this novel but my god I just couldn't handle the quality.
This Fan-fic does seem to have potential. The protagonist is not smart from the start, but it makes sense considering the fact that he was just a normal civilian that suddenly got Magical Powers. The only issue that this Novel has is the HORRIBLE grammar! I think some mentioned how this is actually translated? (I am not sure.) But the translator could've at least bothered to clean up the chapters....
Please edit the earlier chapters because I didn't understand much since it was all wrong grammar and **** so I stopped reading it cuz of that
This novel has shown itself as a really great idea of a Marvel fanfiction and would have been one of the best. Sadly the author is a racist person and does stereotypical situations from an asian point of view. In one chapter, he literally called an African American a "Black People" and used him in a situation where this person robbed a "White-collar person" of her brand-named purse. Then he further goes on to explain that more "White men" chased the "Black People" and beat him for the ladies purse. I thought this was 2019? why is this person allowed to share any of his racist ideas on the web? The author doesn't even try to hid anything and also uses bad grammar. This "novel" or "Fanfiction" is ridiculous and should be reported.
I dropped the fanfic on the first five chapters, the translation and editing is done terribly. The MC is making mistakes wherever he goes, wearing disguise and forgetting he has the power to be invisible, showing his face the first time he goes out as of vigilante and immediately after telling someone his true name while begging her to not tell his secret, etc... Let's just say I lost interest very fast.
จำนวน 1
- 1 Chapter 1: My crossing seems to be... wrong 6 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: How can there be no golden finger? 6 years ago
- 3 Superheroes start with the uniforms 5 years ago
- 4 The Simple Hell's Kitchen 5 years ago
- 5 disguise failure 5 years ago
- 6 princess hugge 5 years ago
- 7 goodbye 5 years ago
- 8 I just want to find someone to make clothes 5 years ago
- 9 the correct use of tiger spell 5 years ago
- 10 I am the fastest man alive 5 years ago
- 11 Everyone is racing against time 5 years ago
- 12 begins today, please call me "Godfather"! 5 years ago
- 13 Yinsen Surviving 5 years ago
- 14 Concept of Spending Money 5 years ago
- 15 A "faint" sorrow... 5 years ago
- 16 big stomach king 5 years ago
- 17 Reunion, Inviting Coffee 5 years ago
- 18 Drinking coffee and watching movies 5 years ago
- 19 in beautiful day... there is always an accident 5 years ago
- 20 Howling Dogs 5 years ago
- 21 The Desperate Iron King 5 years ago
- 22 iron man [end] 5 years ago
- 23 A new era 5 years ago
- 24 a date with Sophia [1/2] 5 years ago
- 25 a date with Sophia [2/2]. The hulk 5 years ago
- 26 Half away through confession with the appearance of abomination 5 years ago
- 27 throwing breaks .......not fair 5 years ago
- 28 Abomination sudden death 5 years ago
- 29 Hot kiss 5 years ago
- 30 Joining the Avenger plan 5 years ago
- 31 Major discovery 5 years ago
- 32 movie 'phenomenon' 5 years ago
- 33 100 million dollars 5 years ago
- 34 I want Stark's shares 5 years ago
- 35 New World 5 years ago
- 36 The Yearning for Life 5 years ago
- 37 Research and Development of Spells 5 years ago
- 38 Tony come for help 5 years ago
- 39 New Tony 5 years ago
- 40 Ivan Vanko becomes a dog 5 years ago
- 41 New speedster-suit 5 years ago
- 42 Chapter 42: Chronicle...The Hammer of Thor 5 years ago
- 43 Jacks' changes and the return of Thor 5 years ago
- 44 *You will know the title when you read it* 5 years ago
- 45 changes of plans *XP* 5 years ago
- 46 Advance 5 years ago
- 47 New woman, New world 5 years ago
- 48 *need a title* 5 years ago
- 49 Returnig 5 years ago
- 50 Early start of Avengers 5 years ago
- 51 Jacks' worries 5 years ago
- 52 Avengers part I 5 years ago
- 53 Avengers part II 5 years ago
- 54 Sophias' dream world 5 years ago
- 55 Avengers part III 5 years ago
- 56 Avengers part IV 5 years ago
- 57 Avengers V 5 years ago
- 58 Avengers part VI 5 years ago
- 59 Avengers part VII 5 years ago
- 60 Avengers final part 5 years ago
- 61 After the war 5 years ago
- 62 next 5 years ago
- 63 New world 5 years ago
- 64 A new start and his first action 5 years ago
- 65 Birthday party 5 years ago
- 66 Preparation before crossing 5 years ago
- 67 Preparation 5 years ago
- 68 meeting the angel Whis 5 years ago
- 69 Training 5 years ago
- 70 fight 5 years ago
- 71 Creating the dragon balls 5 years ago
- 72 back to earth and the start of Cell games.. 5 years ago
- 73 Cell saga end 5 years ago
- 74 untitled 5 years ago
- 75 tony's story 5 years ago
- 76 the arrival of Jack 5 years ago
- 77 more powerful but still brutal 5 years ago
- 78 Reality Stone 5 years ago
- 79 adsorbing the R.S(Reality Stone) 5 years ago
- 80 The darkness struck, the godfather returned! 5 years ago
- 81 The Dark Elves Despair 5 years ago
- 82 destined to battle 5 years ago
- 83 Limiter is removed 5 years ago
- 84 Black Shadow Corps 5 years ago
- 85 the Good Shadow Corps 5 years ago
- 86 plans for the future 5 years ago
- 87 New world 5 years ago
- 88 playing along 5 years ago
- 89 Collecting Allspark and Matrix of Leadership 5 years ago
- 90 Bumblebee comes to marvel 5 years ago
- 91 Doubt His Existence 5 years ago
- 92 Strange World 5 years ago
- 93 New round of evolution 5 years ago
- 94 New powers 5 years ago
- 95 New theories about the origin of the Infinity stones 5 years ago
- 96 Recovering of the future Fantastic.4 5 years ago
- 97 Nick Fury assassination 5 years ago
- 98 Thinking of creating 5 years ago
- 99 Fury's "death" 5 years ago
- 100 Captain America PART 2 5 years ago
- 101 continue 5 years ago
- 102 Reunion of friends 5 years ago
- 103 memory return and seeing Fury 5 years ago
- 104 SHIELD War 5 years ago
- 105 SHIELD War part 2 5 years ago
- 106 Pierce, who died like a... 5 years ago
- 107 Awakening 5 years ago
- 108 Sophia's true identity 5 years ago
- 109 Sophia's hiding history 5 years ago
- 110 Ben change 5 years ago
- 111 Saving the twin 5 years ago
- 112 The birth of a New god 5 years ago
- 113 New talent 5 years ago
- 114 Race to Win 5 years ago
- 115 Ready for the next world 5 years ago
- 116 Knowing his true heart 5 years ago
- 117 Meeting Athena 5 years ago
- 118 Training 5 years ago
- 119 First battle 5 years ago
- 120 After the War 5 years ago
- 121 Fairyland 5 years ago
Ok, so apparently it gets better later on in the novel, but the amount of tainted chromosomes leaking out of the MC at the beginning is too much, like first of all, he is saying "oh, I gotta be sneaky and quiet to protect my identity", then he makes a big commotion right at his home and beats the $hit out of one of his neighbors (who is much bigger and stronger then him) with pure force right in front of his other neighbors who came to watch the fight. Not sure how else that scene was supposed to be quiet, he just flagged to the world where he lives. Then he goes out and spends a large portion of his savings on new clothes to better hide his identity, before he goes out and just kills someone flat out, then he wimps out after that, and conpletely expises his identity, abilities, and even where he fuking lives to the first person he saved, because he is horny and she is hot. Supposedly it gets better, but to get to the "good part" you are going to have to dive deep through the garbage dump this novel calls a beginning to get there. The chapters have been edited which makes it readible (tho the humor is so forced its ridiculous, and there are still quite a few jokes and other comments that dont really make sense), and the updates come out often. The ideas behind this story are good, and with the world-building from the marvel universe, this novel HAD a lot of potential. The trashy beginning has ruined it. A good representation of this novel is that game no mans sky. Worst beginning possible, but then slowly gets better (still quite bad, but not horrible). Author bro, if you fixed the intro/beginning, you would have a golden story on your hands.
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