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I hope you can continue your imagination to best. To write the novel to best as you can make it interesting. We'll do your best you can and don't stop writing.
Es muy interesante pero la estabilidad de la actualización de la historia es es muy mala tarda demasiado de no ser por eso es una gran historia para leer durante mucho tiempo
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writing very acceptable, but otherwise... it's horrible!! it's all so cliché and with the plot armor that it's boring, he spends a lot of time saying he shouldn't show his spirits and everything, but when someone asks him to join the academy he says what it is... very badly done
The MC don't have martial spirit procession he just throw spirit ring skill around on every opponent Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Or in Beast language "Double Plus Good." Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This fanfic novel is one of the top out there. The world-building is so fully fleshed out and spine-tinglingly terrifying that it's almost as if "Ryusei/Feng/Tian" travelled to such a place, escaped from it, and then just wrote it all down. Kudos to the Author! The only down side is the timely release.
esto es ilógico dice el autor que era detective y el mc actúa como un niño mimado y actúa como un tonto, de repente no tiene coherencia el facfic aspiraba a mas pero el autor la izo una mier**
I like this a lot! The plot is very interesting and blood-boiling! It makes me so excited to read what's next. However, the fact that he just tells his secrets left and right makes me dissatisfied and made a bit of my interest vanish. But I refused to give up such a good potential story! So I endured and it makes me happy that I did that. The plot is okay and it's a good time easter for someone like me who has nothing to do with life. However I do wished that you did not just let him tell/show his secret just because of meeting someone familiar or because of anger since it really kills the curiosity one would have by reading. That's all.
first 7 chap made me drop cringe asf, what did you eat to make a story as cringe as this. cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe
You are a liar author there is a harem I dropped it at chapter 64 because I went to the titles and saw the name feng cai er and buying clothes for feng cai er and later on she likes him and he likes her too. I only read this because it had a lot of chapters and you said it had no harem, but you lied to me.
since this is a fanfic of one of my favorite novels I shall shamelessly support u though I do love harem novels this novel is by far one of my favorites
Well for me it's one of the best doulou fanfiction I read, it very interesting and fun to read when relaxin. nice story development I really that the story sweet shows a lot of love and hate , I like the fact the mc is cautious and caring and not wood or dense so I recommended to read it.
I hope you comeback. 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿
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The grammar is fine everything else is trash. Too 20 rankings? The level of disrespect is astounding. Doesn’t follow the rules of the world. A six year old can somehow withstand the energy of multiple title douluo with no issues? Horse****
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Ok the mc barely talks he just let's stuff happen to him and doesn't voice out its a bad idea Theres a female shoved in at age 6 when his parents ship him off randomly to a new sect without talking to him even though he shows a rather high iq The parents seem to act like they care or we are told they love the mc but put him into blatant danger with 0 regards to his wellfair The mc seems hollow and lacking basic emotions And the English is extremely choppy at times you need to remove sentences and then mentally replace them with what you can guess it to be All in all 1/5 stars
This novel is great. Use of sofisticated language and meaningful content , MC is not too arogant and cherish his family and friends. The main reson i like this novel the most is OP mc as i hate tragedic plots if mc is not powerful then his friends life will be in danger and he will be bullied and underestimated which i seriously don't like . Another factor i like most was Tang Hao is like real father to mc and tang is like pro younger brother. I also ke the idea of azure dragon aura which helps to strengthen his friends and army. I like the way Author change rong rong from support to attack ,control and support type which made me delight , . The Aithor perfectly mixed the ingormation of douluo dalu 1&2 and created a perfect story. AT LAST I WANT TO ASK AUTHOR TO RELEASE THE CHAPTERS FASTER AS I THINK I WAS ADDICTED TO IT I CHECK DAILY IF IT WAS RELEASED OR NOT . PLS RELEASE FASTER AND DON'T DROP IT IN MIDDLE. YOU HAVE WORKED HARD😊
I appreciate your work . The novel is very nice with a facinating story . keep it up .Don't drop it in mid and please 😋Update Fast😅😅 I like the soul spirit most and the creative way of author describe them and lastly the OP character of MC is best I like it very much So Keep Your Hard Work🤩👌
It has what to make for a good storyline. And is pure original no MC knowing the plot of the storyline what's going to happen just pure survival skills. The author have good thinking skills plot development cause and effect.
Trash ass novel, the Author is a brain dead idiot. The MC and other characters are trash, so don't waste your time reading this trash novel.
Great story that's all I can really say because it's so good can't wait for some more chapters I like how you write but I do wish you showed some of the seven devil's PoV after lei feng leaves shrek but other than that I wouldn't change a thing
i love it sooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE can u start updating again it is soo fucking amazing😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
The overall story was good and I liked the MC and his spirit abilities, especially the azure dragons abilities. I hope you continue the story bit was a good read.
I hope you can continue your imagination to best. To write the novel to best as you can make it interesting. We'll do your best you can and don't stop writing.
Es muy interesante pero la estabilidad de la actualización de la historia es es muy mala tarda demasiado de no ser por eso es una gran historia para leer durante mucho tiempo
I like the story. Please update more. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
writing very acceptable, but otherwise... it's horrible!! it's all so cliché and with the plot armor that it's boring, he spends a lot of time saying he shouldn't show his spirits and everything, but when someone asks him to join the academy he says what it is... very badly done
The MC don't have martial spirit procession he just throw spirit ring skill around on every opponent Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Or in Beast language "Double Plus Good." Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This fanfic novel is one of the top out there. The world-building is so fully fleshed out and spine-tinglingly terrifying that it's almost as if "Ryusei/Feng/Tian" travelled to such a place, escaped from it, and then just wrote it all down. Kudos to the Author! The only down side is the timely release.
esto es ilógico dice el autor que era detective y el mc actúa como un niño mimado y actúa como un tonto, de repente no tiene coherencia el facfic aspiraba a mas pero el autor la izo una mier**
I like this a lot! The plot is very interesting and blood-boiling! It makes me so excited to read what's next. However, the fact that he just tells his secrets left and right makes me dissatisfied and made a bit of my interest vanish. But I refused to give up such a good potential story! So I endured and it makes me happy that I did that. The plot is okay and it's a good time easter for someone like me who has nothing to do with life. However I do wished that you did not just let him tell/show his secret just because of meeting someone familiar or because of anger since it really kills the curiosity one would have by reading. That's all.
first 7 chap made me drop cringe asf, what did you eat to make a story as cringe as this. cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe
You are a liar author there is a harem I dropped it at chapter 64 because I went to the titles and saw the name feng cai er and buying clothes for feng cai er and later on she likes him and he likes her too. I only read this because it had a lot of chapters and you said it had no harem, but you lied to me.
since this is a fanfic of one of my favorite novels I shall shamelessly support u though I do love harem novels this novel is by far one of my favorites
Well for me it's one of the best doulou fanfiction I read, it very interesting and fun to read when relaxin. nice story development I really that the story sweet shows a lot of love and hate , I like the fact the mc is cautious and caring and not wood or dense so I recommended to read it.
I hope you comeback. 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿
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The grammar is fine everything else is trash. Too 20 rankings? The level of disrespect is astounding. Doesn’t follow the rules of the world. A six year old can somehow withstand the energy of multiple title douluo with no issues? Horse****
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Ok the mc barely talks he just let's stuff happen to him and doesn't voice out its a bad idea Theres a female shoved in at age 6 when his parents ship him off randomly to a new sect without talking to him even though he shows a rather high iq The parents seem to act like they care or we are told they love the mc but put him into blatant danger with 0 regards to his wellfair The mc seems hollow and lacking basic emotions And the English is extremely choppy at times you need to remove sentences and then mentally replace them with what you can guess it to be All in all 1/5 stars
This novel is great. Use of sofisticated language and meaningful content , MC is not too arogant and cherish his family and friends. The main reson i like this novel the most is OP mc as i hate tragedic plots if mc is not powerful then his friends life will be in danger and he will be bullied and underestimated which i seriously don't like . Another factor i like most was Tang Hao is like real father to mc and tang is like pro younger brother. I also ke the idea of azure dragon aura which helps to strengthen his friends and army. I like the way Author change rong rong from support to attack ,control and support type which made me delight , . The Aithor perfectly mixed the ingormation of douluo dalu 1&2 and created a perfect story. AT LAST I WANT TO ASK AUTHOR TO RELEASE THE CHAPTERS FASTER AS I THINK I WAS ADDICTED TO IT I CHECK DAILY IF IT WAS RELEASED OR NOT . PLS RELEASE FASTER AND DON'T DROP IT IN MIDDLE. YOU HAVE WORKED HARD😊
I appreciate your work . The novel is very nice with a facinating story . keep it up .Don't drop it in mid and please 😋Update Fast😅😅 I like the soul spirit most and the creative way of author describe them and lastly the OP character of MC is best I like it very much So Keep Your Hard Work🤩👌
It has what to make for a good storyline. And is pure original no MC knowing the plot of the storyline what's going to happen just pure survival skills. The author have good thinking skills plot development cause and effect.
Trash ass novel, the Author is a brain dead idiot. The MC and other characters are trash, so don't waste your time reading this trash novel.
Great story that's all I can really say because it's so good can't wait for some more chapters I like how you write but I do wish you showed some of the seven devil's PoV after lei feng leaves shrek but other than that I wouldn't change a thing
i love it sooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE can u start updating again it is soo fucking amazing😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
The overall story was good and I liked the MC and his spirit abilities, especially the azure dragons abilities. I hope you continue the story bit was a good read.