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I rather enjoy reading the story and I am looking forward to hopefully reading many more chapters of the story. I've always enjoyed where the character becomes a celebrity.
more updates please....i read it n when its past chapter 114 i fell its too short butt...when i see the time its has been 5 hours i read its......so pleasee....dont drop its n more updates please
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Lol the synopsis just screams sh*t story. :/ I mean beta MC is already a no go. But it’s even slow paced and took 80 chapters for character growth . I pray for whoever took the time to read 80 chapters for a characters growth
Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Love more updates plz and thank you 🙃☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
I don't know why but many authors force romance into the story while there is no need for such. The MC could easily have grown with the help of the system and when he became more confident, he could start his career and if opportunity presents than have relationship with one or more girls. But in many novels while mc is in starting phase he meets a girl and then that one becomes his girlfriend. I find this annoying.
i friking love this story its so amazing and im rally thankfull that it exist since i havent found that many story where ther is a male person in the entertamient industry especily not one with a harem so keep upthe good work and a question will he havea famus girlfriend and with that i men like actully real life famous just wondering scince that dont happen so often in stories dont fell forcedto do that tough if you havent pland it
The story is great but the Mc is too much of a pushover for me also megan is terrible character for this type of Mc she just bosses him around like a kid and he does nothing about, The whole terrible system thing was funny at the beginning but after a while it just gets annoying. SO THE story is cool but the beta Mc ruined the experience for me.
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The novel is all around very good, the author's writing skills are top-notch if you're considering the level at which most writers on webnovel write like. The only thing that could be negative about this novel is the stability of updates. The novel either way is very entertaining and unique in its own way.
Loved this story cant wait for more chapters. I loved the kind mc and how he wasnt racist like anouther certin showbiz novel. While the system at first was kind of annoying but as the story goes on everything improved 10 fold. Good work keep it going
Love the story so much. Kind of dislike the system but oh well and its personality has gotten better so it's fine I guess. The only reason I'm not giving it a 5 is because updates aren't as frequent anymore.
It's good but you don't post anymore please dont stop ....... . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. . . . .. .. . . .
I really like this Novel in ever aspect as there is good character development and that goes same for the relationship too. Hope to read more and really really hope this doesn't get dropped.
This has a nice MC that can be said "OP". He god damn perfect and has some flaws though and it just makes him more human. Some how thinking he would lean twards being a star but with his skill from latest chapter... He could moon light as a vigilante with his Ai... He clinches victory by what he does and I enjoyed how he gets the people he loves. Great stuff!
Honestly a great way to waste time and have a bit of fun doing it. The main character actually grows, events convincingly happen and I found a cool song reading this. Warning: the first few chapters are lower quality and the spelling is iffy at times. Still readable throughout. _This review is made after more than 24 hours with no sleep so take it with a grain of salt_ To the author: Cheers m8! You did good. I like your music taste, keep on keeping on. Oh yeah just an fyi your Vannos fanboying is so blatant that it's funny. If your looking for music recommendations hit me up I listen to a lot.
Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
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Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Good comedy's, good romance. Good plot, and story development, just some flaw on MC character development at the beginning but as the story progress you could just ignore it. I could say that i found a new gem to read.
I have to be honest this is one of the greatest novel I have ever other than a prick for a system the story and character development is great btw has anyone else noticed the pic for this page is picture of a ***** Toshiro Hitsugya from bleach so freaking awesome
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I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...
it's really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good but the author dropped it 🥺
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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So want to know why you stopped this one ???? 👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
I rather enjoy reading the story and I am looking forward to hopefully reading many more chapters of the story. I've always enjoyed where the character becomes a celebrity.
more updates please....i read it n when its past chapter 114 i fell its too short butt...when i see the time its has been 5 hours i read its......so pleasee....dont drop its n more updates please
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Lol the synopsis just screams sh*t story. :/ I mean beta MC is already a no go. But it’s even slow paced and took 80 chapters for character growth . I pray for whoever took the time to read 80 chapters for a characters growth
Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Love more updates plz and thank you 🙃☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
I don't know why but many authors force romance into the story while there is no need for such. The MC could easily have grown with the help of the system and when he became more confident, he could start his career and if opportunity presents than have relationship with one or more girls. But in many novels while mc is in starting phase he meets a girl and then that one becomes his girlfriend. I find this annoying.
i friking love this story its so amazing and im rally thankfull that it exist since i havent found that many story where ther is a male person in the entertamient industry especily not one with a harem so keep upthe good work and a question will he havea famus girlfriend and with that i men like actully real life famous just wondering scince that dont happen so often in stories dont fell forcedto do that tough if you havent pland it
The story is great but the Mc is too much of a pushover for me also megan is terrible character for this type of Mc she just bosses him around like a kid and he does nothing about, The whole terrible system thing was funny at the beginning but after a while it just gets annoying. SO THE story is cool but the beta Mc ruined the experience for me.
Loveee ❤️❤️❤️🖤🖤🖤🖤❤️🖤❤️🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤❤️🖤🖤❤️🖤❤️🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
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The novel is all around very good, the author's writing skills are top-notch if you're considering the level at which most writers on webnovel write like. The only thing that could be negative about this novel is the stability of updates. The novel either way is very entertaining and unique in its own way.
Loved this story cant wait for more chapters. I loved the kind mc and how he wasnt racist like anouther certin showbiz novel. While the system at first was kind of annoying but as the story goes on everything improved 10 fold. Good work keep it going
Love the story so much. Kind of dislike the system but oh well and its personality has gotten better so it's fine I guess. The only reason I'm not giving it a 5 is because updates aren't as frequent anymore.
It's good but you don't post anymore please dont stop ....... . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. . . . .. .. . . .
I really like this Novel in ever aspect as there is good character development and that goes same for the relationship too. Hope to read more and really really hope this doesn't get dropped.
This has a nice MC that can be said "OP". He god damn perfect and has some flaws though and it just makes him more human. Some how thinking he would lean twards being a star but with his skill from latest chapter... He could moon light as a vigilante with his Ai... He clinches victory by what he does and I enjoyed how he gets the people he loves. Great stuff!
Honestly a great way to waste time and have a bit of fun doing it. The main character actually grows, events convincingly happen and I found a cool song reading this. Warning: the first few chapters are lower quality and the spelling is iffy at times. Still readable throughout. _This review is made after more than 24 hours with no sleep so take it with a grain of salt_ To the author: Cheers m8! You did good. I like your music taste, keep on keeping on. Oh yeah just an fyi your Vannos fanboying is so blatant that it's funny. If your looking for music recommendations hit me up I listen to a lot.
Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Teks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di siniTeks yang disalin akan otomatis ditampilkan di sini
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Good comedy's, good romance. Good plot, and story development, just some flaw on MC character development at the beginning but as the story progress you could just ignore it. I could say that i found a new gem to read.
I have to be honest this is one of the greatest novel I have ever other than a prick for a system the story and character development is great btw has anyone else noticed the pic for this page is picture of a ***** Toshiro Hitsugya from bleach so freaking awesome
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...
it's really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good but the author dropped it 🥺